Poems About Rain Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about rain seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:52pm
Yesterday 10:52pm
Ancient as Hell
halberd, pan and brush
as in a typical garment
everything on the floor
made without function
function without effect
floor of little everything
clothing tied to threads
luxury, sword and bread
superspace lost in time
nebulae, galaxies, stars
preservative hyperboles
wise, those who are not
as in a typical garment
everything on the floor
made without function
function without effect
floor of little everything
clothing tied to threads
luxury, sword and bread
superspace lost in time
nebulae, galaxies, stars
preservative hyperboles
wise, those who are not
#flowers
#mirror
#rain
#universe
#wind
35 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:49pm
21st Apr 2025 10:49pm
Left For Dead By Someone There
We
were on
our way home
in the pouring
rain before my best
friend had to stop the car
because he spotted some chick
laying naked on the road, rolled
her over and noticed that she was
drugged, raped and left for dead by someone there.
were on
our way home
in the pouring
rain before my best
friend had to stop the car
because he spotted some chick
laying naked on the road, rolled
her over and noticed that she was
drugged, raped and left for dead by someone there.
#dark
#dialogue
#fiction
#rain
#sex
51 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 4:11pm
20th Apr 2025 4:11pm
Chove sobre a marginal
O pó do teu olhar sobre as flores a murchar
a suprimir as verdades, no chão.
As mãos, as mentiras e as folhas alaranjadas.
Morte, morte, morte ao amor...
Depois, tudo desaparece na bruma.
Tua mordida, profundamente infligida
nas carnes das tuas costas.
Viva o amor, viva o amor, o amor está morto!
Cavaleiros sem destino, moínhos parados
ventos perdidos nos corredores da casa
e retratos de ninguém, sem nomes.
Bocas cheias de fome, abutres mortos.
Minha boca cheia da tua boca e
cabelos crus a...
a suprimir as verdades, no chão.
As mãos, as mentiras e as folhas alaranjadas.
Morte, morte, morte ao amor...
Depois, tudo desaparece na bruma.
Tua mordida, profundamente infligida
nas carnes das tuas costas.
Viva o amor, viva o amor, o amor está morto!
Cavaleiros sem destino, moínhos parados
ventos perdidos nos corredores da casa
e retratos de ninguém, sem nomes.
Bocas cheias de fome, abutres mortos.
Minha boca cheia da tua boca e
cabelos crus a...
#dark
#death
#mountains
#rain
#sea
78 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 5:59pm
18th Apr 2025 5:59pm
Disjointed Untitled Piece
Amber arches awake.
Bright blooms bask.
Curious colors call.
Dancing days drift.
Echoes embrace earth.
Feathers flutter free.
Golden glows gleam.
Hazy hues hum.
Illuminated iris ignites.
Joy jumps jubilant.
Kind kisses kindle.
Lush leaves lull.
Morning murmurs mild.
Nature nurtures nests.
Orange opens over.
Petals paint pathways.
Quiet quivers quicken.
Rustling radiance ripples.
Sunflowers soak sun.
Tender tendrils twist.
Undulating upward urge.
...
Bright blooms bask.
Curious colors call.
Dancing days drift.
Echoes embrace earth.
Feathers flutter free.
Golden glows gleam.
Hazy hues hum.
Illuminated iris ignites.
Joy jumps jubilant.
Kind kisses kindle.
Lush leaves lull.
Morning murmurs mild.
Nature nurtures nests.
Orange opens over.
Petals paint pathways.
Quiet quivers quicken.
Rustling radiance ripples.
Sunflowers soak sun.
Tender tendrils twist.
Undulating upward urge.
...
#flowers
#rain
#spring
#storm
#wind
84 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 11:16am
14th Apr 2025 11:16am
Tame Machine
I've been there tomorrow.
Footsteps echo
all through the void.
Future whispers past.
I've been there tomorrow.
Scarlet dreams
through violet hues.
Hope bends in the light.
I've been there tomorrow.
Grease-stained dreams
and crispy fries.
Future tastes like snacks.
All through the void
and crispy fries.
Footsteps echo
all through the void.
Future whispers past.
I've been there tomorrow.
Scarlet dreams
through violet hues.
Hope bends in the light.
I've been there tomorrow.
Grease-stained dreams
and crispy fries.
Future tastes like snacks.
All through the void
and crispy fries.
#mirror
#rain
#rainbow
#silence
#strength
51 reads
4 Comments
jemac
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 3:24am
1st Apr 2025 3:24am
Nature's Warnings
wind raced across sky
black grey clouds bursting warm rain
golden flashes boom
black grey clouds bursting warm rain
golden flashes boom
#LifeAsAWriter
#rain
#storm
79 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 10:30pm
22nd Mar 2025 10:30pm
~rain.blossoms
https://youtu.be/DUphZvkt4KA?feature=shared
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
#flowers
#love
#metaphor
#rain
#sensual
138 reads
7 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 4:52am
17th Mar 2025 4:52am
A Portal to Peace (Somewhere Where it Rains)
Somewhere where it rains
at least some of me
gets washed away.
Simple seems possible
Sorrow seems safe
Somewhere where it rains,
there's a portal to peace
A place to pause
Maybe even new pleasures
to pursue
Somewhere where it rains
-beyond this dirty desert-
there's rain's constant cadence
sweeping away my silence
fooling me with its friendly falling flow
My grief is soundless
Sullen still pictures
Snippets of silent torture
Pictures pouring down
Falling foolishly
Onto a...
at least some of me
gets washed away.
Simple seems possible
Sorrow seems safe
Somewhere where it rains,
there's a portal to peace
A place to pause
Maybe even new pleasures
to pursue
Somewhere where it rains
-beyond this dirty desert-
there's rain's constant cadence
sweeping away my silence
fooling me with its friendly falling flow
My grief is soundless
Sullen still pictures
Snippets of silent torture
Pictures pouring down
Falling foolishly
Onto a...
#grief
#rain
135 reads
7 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 4:11am
8th Mar 2025 4:11am
A Natural Disaster
I AM A
NATURAL DISASTER,
I will RIP THROUGH
YOU like a
HURRICANE,
I will DESTROY YOU like a
TORNADO,
I WILL WIPE YOU OUT like a
TSUNAMI,
I will ERUPT STRONG like a
VOLCANO,
I will SWIRL YOU like a
CYCLONE,
I will DROWN YOU like the
DEEP SEAS!!,
BURN THROUGH YOU like
FIRE,
VERY FAST and
WITH EASE,
I AM A
STRONG and POWERFUL
WIND,
Blowing down
REALLY TALL TREES,
I AM A ROCK, and
I WILL CRUSH you,
SO, WATCH OUT
IF YOU SO PLEASE!!!!!
I will ...
NATURAL DISASTER,
I will RIP THROUGH
YOU like a
HURRICANE,
I will DESTROY YOU like a
TORNADO,
I WILL WIPE YOU OUT like a
TSUNAMI,
I will ERUPT STRONG like a
VOLCANO,
I will SWIRL YOU like a
CYCLONE,
I will DROWN YOU like the
DEEP SEAS!!,
BURN THROUGH YOU like
FIRE,
VERY FAST and
WITH EASE,
I AM A
STRONG and POWERFUL
WIND,
Blowing down
REALLY TALL TREES,
I AM A ROCK, and
I WILL CRUSH you,
SO, WATCH OUT
IF YOU SO PLEASE!!!!!
I will ...
#nature
#rain
#water #wind
#water #wind
65 reads
0 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 4:42pm
18th Feb 2025 4:42pm
Saints Decay
In hallowed ground where whispers cease
Stands the saint, in rain’s soft grief
A figure draped in shadow's lease
Amidst the world’s withering leaf
With head bowed low, a crown of moss
His flesh a canvas pale and worn
Each droplet’s kiss, a silent gloss
Upon the scars of love—now torn
Around him lies the fading light
The flowers wilting, petals fall
Each heartbeat mourns the creeping night
As silence binds the earth in thrall
The heavens weep for days gone by
For souls entwined in sacred breath
Yet still...
Stands the saint, in rain’s soft grief
A figure draped in shadow's lease
Amidst the world’s withering leaf
With head bowed low, a crown of moss
His flesh a canvas pale and worn
Each droplet’s kiss, a silent gloss
Upon the scars of love—now torn
Around him lies the fading light
The flowers wilting, petals fall
Each heartbeat mourns the creeping night
As silence binds the earth in thrall
The heavens weep for days gone by
For souls entwined in sacred breath
Yet still...
#death
#graveyard
#rain
101 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
how about I just sit here nice and quiet
old bloke in the bar says
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
#alcohol
#fear
#rain
#storm
#wind
77 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:05pm
19th Jan 2025 10:05pm
What Did I Drink At That Party Last Night?
After the rain stopped,
Nancy woke up and saw she
was naked and next to Paul.
Nancy woke up and saw she
was naked and next to Paul.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#rain
#sex
145 reads
0 Comments
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