Poems About Rain by Top Critiquers
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Poems about rain by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2018 6:18pm
22nd Mar 2018 6:18pm
Untitled beat of a heart
We are like newborn children,
Our power is the power to grow.”
Rabindranath Tagore
..
sky composes a
thunderstorm
in the atmosphere
overhead
water droplets freeze
on contact
with condensation
nuclei
in cumulonimbus clouds
strong updrafts
freeze
into hail
air trapped
within
forms into
fingerprint like
patterns
of rings
within
rings
too
heavy to ...
Our power is the power to grow.”
Rabindranath Tagore
..
sky composes a
thunderstorm
in the atmosphere
overhead
water droplets freeze
on contact
with condensation
nuclei
in cumulonimbus clouds
strong updrafts
freeze
into hail
air trapped
within
forms into
fingerprint like
patterns
of rings
within
rings
too
heavy to ...
#love
#science
#rain #storm
#rain #storm
867 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
10th Feb 2022 11:56pm
10th Feb 2022 11:56pm
Softly Kissing In The Rain
Mm… my love, you’ve escaped into my world of dreams
Kissed by twinkling stars and ordained by the Heavens above
You softly caressed my face
Tasting the honeyed nectar off my sweet lips
Whispered promises of endearments in my ear
Mm... slowly undressing me, peeling off layers of waiting in eagerness
Needing the warmness of his muscular body melting against mine
Hungering for the reasoning sound of his baritone voice
He laid me down on a bed of silken rose petals
Passion and gentleness mirrored in his eyes as he gazed down into...
Kissed by twinkling stars and ordained by the Heavens above
You softly caressed my face
Tasting the honeyed nectar off my sweet lips
Whispered promises of endearments in my ear
Mm... slowly undressing me, peeling off layers of waiting in eagerness
Needing the warmness of his muscular body melting against mine
Hungering for the reasoning sound of his baritone voice
He laid me down on a bed of silken rose petals
Passion and gentleness mirrored in his eyes as he gazed down into...
#rain
#night
#lover
#sensual
#passion
393 reads
10 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Oct 2021 11:54am
10th Oct 2021 11:54am
Mood and Rain
Mood
Rain
Gouache
Abstract
Study
Street
Avenue
Boulevard
Your
Town
Rain
Gouache
Abstract
Study
Street
Avenue
Boulevard
Your
Town
#identity
#rain
#art
#philosophical
#emotions
254 reads
14 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
28th Dec 2021 3:49am
28th Dec 2021 3:49am
The Resonance of Tears
Today the rain has been nonstop
The skies have been cloudy and gray
My heart beats with each raindrop
While my mild thoughts go astray
I relish in the sound of the storm
It’s a distant echo from the past
And though my skin is warm
A shiver comes to me very fast
Oh dear memory, why do you insist
In remembering certain drizzly days?
The resonance of tears in the mist
When pouring rain washed my face
Each droplet decorating my window
Is a reminder of the person I once knew
My old self wasted time is now lost...
The skies have been cloudy and gray
My heart beats with each raindrop
While my mild thoughts go astray
I relish in the sound of the storm
It’s a distant echo from the past
And though my skin is warm
A shiver comes to me very fast
Oh dear memory, why do you insist
In remembering certain drizzly days?
The resonance of tears in the mist
When pouring rain washed my face
Each droplet decorating my window
Is a reminder of the person I once knew
My old self wasted time is now lost...
#rain
#storm
#memories #nostalgia
#memories #nostalgia
422 reads
8 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
6th Jul 2020 8:54am
6th Jul 2020 8:54am
AT THE BURST OF THE CLOUD
#sex
#rain
#storm #rhyming
#storm #rhyming
370 reads
0 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
18th Jun 2021 9:41am
18th Jun 2021 9:41am
Epilogue of Rain
The epilogue of the rain
sounds like quelling silence.
A solve unto my pain -
a mystery I cannot solve.
Maybe I am insane -
I have long thought but never said.
because…
being insane was something that always made me proud.
Does that make me insane?
I guess I just didn’t want to be the same
as all those people in the crowd.
I guess I just wanted my silence to be loud
and vanquish the seeds sown
by lying scheming manipulative powers that be
that write the script of you and me
...
sounds like quelling silence.
A solve unto my pain -
a mystery I cannot solve.
Maybe I am insane -
I have long thought but never said.
because…
being insane was something that always made me proud.
Does that make me insane?
I guess I just didn’t want to be the same
as all those people in the crowd.
I guess I just wanted my silence to be loud
and vanquish the seeds sown
by lying scheming manipulative powers that be
that write the script of you and me
...
#dark
#rain
#honesty
#rebellion
#dystopian
442 reads
14 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
9th Aug 2020 10:09pm
9th Aug 2020 10:09pm
10 Portraits Of Sunday Morning Rain (collab with Uma)
Black coal morning
Shoe shrine bed altar,
Crucified by flames.
Night’s dead womb
Fallows solitary plough
Suddenly, constellations of puddles.
starriness streaking
from colliding depressions…
I/ eye rise(s) in the rainfall
harnesses micro-puncturing
sphericities, pools them inner
the (r)oaring in eyelashes
Bird-seed breakfast,
Naked sun-spilt rooves
In her gold sleep nightbirds.
nascence dawning’s
blood spilling mistiness
carve~ crave more
monsoonal crisis
...
Shoe shrine bed altar,
Crucified by flames.
Night’s dead womb
Fallows solitary plough
Suddenly, constellations of puddles.
starriness streaking
from colliding depressions…
I/ eye rise(s) in the rainfall
harnesses micro-puncturing
sphericities, pools them inner
the (r)oaring in eyelashes
Bird-seed breakfast,
Naked sun-spilt rooves
In her gold sleep nightbirds.
nascence dawning’s
blood spilling mistiness
carve~ crave more
monsoonal crisis
...
#love
#LifeStruggles
#universe
#rain
#fate
331 reads
4 Comments
sight
Poem Published
1st Feb 2023 3:40pm
1st Feb 2023 3:40pm
A mile to go
with smog
hovering among crevices
of a sleepy city
the sun rose from slumber
heedful of rain on the way
soon, as diffusing puddles
carpeted streets
birds in flocks
flew
windshields clattered
and a lonely reveler
from the night before
braving every soggy step
could only contemplate
the last call,
the last beer,
and the girl who left
with someone else
with an empty heart,
no umbrella,
and a mile to go
the sky
in its wisdom ...
hovering among crevices
of a sleepy city
the sun rose from slumber
heedful of rain on the way
soon, as diffusing puddles
carpeted streets
birds in flocks
flew
windshields clattered
and a lonely reveler
from the night before
braving every soggy step
could only contemplate
the last call,
the last beer,
and the girl who left
with someone else
with an empty heart,
no umbrella,
and a mile to go
the sky
in its wisdom ...
#sadness
#rain
42 reads
LunasChild8
Poem Published
29th Oct 2018 5:36pm
29th Oct 2018 5:36pm
Blessing the Rain
Come outside, and let yourself be soaked
Heaven’s tears are pouring down; from the Maldives to Spain
Do you feel your soul warming up with a sense of hope?
This is what you get from the blessing of the rain.
Thin streaks of sunlight manage to peak through
Healing every wound and curing us of pain
An intimate bond forms between me and you
As we worship the blessing of the rain.
The elders always tell us a special story
Of how we’ve earned the blessing of the rain
As we’ve become drenched, we were led to eternal glory
And...
Heaven’s tears are pouring down; from the Maldives to Spain
Do you feel your soul warming up with a sense of hope?
This is what you get from the blessing of the rain.
Thin streaks of sunlight manage to peak through
Healing every wound and curing us of pain
An intimate bond forms between me and you
As we worship the blessing of the rain.
The elders always tell us a special story
Of how we’ve earned the blessing of the rain
As we’ve become drenched, we were led to eternal glory
And...
#happiness
#hope
#rain
#spiritual
#rhyming
841 reads
26 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
25th Oct 2019 5:27am
25th Oct 2019 5:27am
Gloom
gray skies summon pain
emptiness comes welling up
hunker down and pray
emptiness comes welling up
hunker down and pray
#depression
#rain
#spiritual
460 reads
4 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 2:16pm
28th Sep 2022 2:16pm
Waiting is the hardest part
I run across the heated sand
aware of the tides
wave after wave
inch their crashes closer... bigger
towards an anxious shore
Winds whip to carve scars
deep within the water's edge
strength barrels ahead
rip tides cut dangerous
out of sight— it lies in wait.
The wind in the leaves
is it's only tell.
Blue beckons grey graphite to iron
sometimes nearer,
skies glow an orangeish hue
humidity mixes with dense pressure
a strange feeling
to prepare
to encompass
Last...
aware of the tides
wave after wave
inch their crashes closer... bigger
towards an anxious shore
Winds whip to carve scars
deep within the water's edge
strength barrels ahead
rip tides cut dangerous
out of sight— it lies in wait.
The wind in the leaves
is it's only tell.
Blue beckons grey graphite to iron
sometimes nearer,
skies glow an orangeish hue
humidity mixes with dense pressure
a strange feeling
to prepare
to encompass
Last...
#rain
#storm
#wind
#nature
#metaphor
504 reads
81 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2019 9:50am
22nd Mar 2019 9:50am
Mood Swing Ep # 11: Off The Cuff...Straight To Print...Alcohol Induced
something new happened today
something brand new
it rained today...
and for the first time in my life
i was happy simply because it rained
not to be confused with glad
like'' glad it rained cuz it'll get rid of the snow''
no..no...no
something moved inside my chest
and is still moving cuz it's still raining
i can hear it beating its song
against the window pane [so cliche right?]
but tonight..it sounds like
the erratic beating of ancient drums...
hmmmm
...
something brand new
it rained today...
and for the first time in my life
i was happy simply because it rained
not to be confused with glad
like'' glad it rained cuz it'll get rid of the snow''
no..no...no
something moved inside my chest
and is still moving cuz it's still raining
i can hear it beating its song
against the window pane [so cliche right?]
but tonight..it sounds like
the erratic beating of ancient drums...
hmmmm
...
#sex
#rain
#night #LifeAsAWriter
#night #LifeAsAWriter
409 reads
5 Comments
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