Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 1:33am
7th Dec 2024 1:33am
LIKE WE THINK
Through this vortex of life we all have to learn, to walk away from the negativity, of our own thoughts and insight into the deepness of darkness. For sure it's necessary to understand, that there comes a time and place that we have to learn more about ourselves. FOR sure there's nothing really wrong, with wanna be off some where with, ME AND I WITH MYSELF. 🤔 FOR example sometimes we need to escape, from the negativity and drama and madness and chaos 😡 that's happening in the world. 🌎 But yet it's here and now I'm able to learn, to listen to the very deepness of the...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
44 reads
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 11:43pm
5th Dec 2024 11:43pm
I'm not you and you are not me.
Sometimes we have to go through somethings, that will affect the very foundation of our lives and life. For sure let us be able to be honest with ourselves, for sure we don't have to prove anything, that we say or do to anyone but ourselves. For sure we will be judge, by what we believe in or say is the truth of my faith. Yet it is my alone my own opinions, for we each are entitled to have our own opinions. YET we be still judge by what other people's say or think. 🤔 But yet it's here and now I still stand firmly, on my decisions base upon my own dreams and life. For sure it's...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:48am
5th Dec 2024 00:48am
"The Machine" Short Audio Version
What is the machine but the child of our hand,
Born not of nature’s womb but thought's demand?
It grows like a child, then turns to a beast,
Its bones of steel, its hunger unleashed.
Heartbeat pounding, gears in time,
Is it our creation, or the shape of our climb?
Oh, the machine, a mirror of the soul,
A marvel, a terror, it makes us whole.
Does it reflect, or does it consume?
Is it life’s new dawn or our silent tomb?
You, a traveler from the stars afar,
Gaze at our machine, the iron...
Born not of nature’s womb but thought's demand?
It grows like a child, then turns to a beast,
Its bones of steel, its hunger unleashed.
Heartbeat pounding, gears in time,
Is it our creation, or the shape of our climb?
Oh, the machine, a mirror of the soul,
A marvel, a terror, it makes us whole.
Does it reflect, or does it consume?
Is it life’s new dawn or our silent tomb?
You, a traveler from the stars afar,
Gaze at our machine, the iron...
#lyrics
#philosophical
39 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 7:06pm
3rd Dec 2024 7:06pm
Our Simple Gratification...
Our Simple Gratification...
We crave the quick...
a spark,
a fragment,
a line.
Depth feels distant,
too heavy to hold.
Poetry shrinks
to fit the scroll.
A whisper of meaning,
half-formed,
assumed profound.
The page waits,
but we turn to screens.
Books linger unread,
their weight
a burden we refuse.
Why read
when the world sings
in flashes and noise?
Why think
when quick answers
quell the ache?
Effort feels cruel—
to linger, ...
We crave the quick...
a spark,
a fragment,
a line.
Depth feels distant,
too heavy to hold.
Poetry shrinks
to fit the scroll.
A whisper of meaning,
half-formed,
assumed profound.
The page waits,
but we turn to screens.
Books linger unread,
their weight
a burden we refuse.
Why read
when the world sings
in flashes and noise?
Why think
when quick answers
quell the ache?
Effort feels cruel—
to linger, ...
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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0 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 5:24pm
2nd Dec 2024 5:24pm
Crystaline water
Crystaline water
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best " 2017
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the margins, motionless
an...
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best " 2017
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the margins, motionless
an...
#metaphor
#mythology
#philosophical
#uplifting
#water
81 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 11:33am
2nd Dec 2024 11:33am
A poet's Delight
**Poetic Delight***
My delight is right
It is a poetry to write
Something very light
A Dragonfly's flight
A pure wide landscape
A blinding mirror of snow white
What the delight
In a pretty sight
A kite swimming
Within ethereal flight
What a delight,!!!
In the long Summer's night
A quiet dark starred sky
Sleeping in the moonlight
With crickets out of sight
chanting beneath the vines
And when the glooms
Unfurls on a bright dazzling light
The perfect queen a round...
My delight is right
It is a poetry to write
Something very light
A Dragonfly's flight
A pure wide landscape
A blinding mirror of snow white
What the delight
In a pretty sight
A kite swimming
Within ethereal flight
What a delight,!!!
In the long Summer's night
A quiet dark starred sky
Sleeping in the moonlight
With crickets out of sight
chanting beneath the vines
And when the glooms
Unfurls on a bright dazzling light
The perfect queen a round...
#faith
#morality
#motivational
#philosophical
#spiritual
59 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 8:07am
2nd Dec 2024 8:07am
To High
Wilfull ignorance
Is bliss
So people say
Unconsciously
I agree
To live one's life
Believing everything
That one is told
Is real
Without Questioning
Being Directed
To all these different groups
Based on Nothing but
Theory's and Lies
Circler thinking
Feeding the loop
Echoing
Off the bars
Of a Cage
That you made
But for some of us
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
Is bliss
So people say
Unconsciously
I agree
To live one's life
Believing everything
That one is told
Is real
Without Questioning
Being Directed
To all these different groups
Based on Nothing but
Theory's and Lies
Circler thinking
Feeding the loop
Echoing
Off the bars
Of a Cage
That you made
But for some of us
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
46 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 9:11pm
1st Dec 2024 9:11pm
Shitheads of the world unite!
Opponent Philosophies
Malevolent Atrocities
Hypocrite Ministries
Brothers Or Enemies
You Gotta Die Because You're Different
You Gotta Die Because I'm Not
I'll Cast You Down
I'll Take You Out
A Legitimate Death
In A Legitimate War
Everyone's Right
Nobody's Wrong
Everyone Fights
Until We're All Gone
See ya!
Malevolent Atrocities
Hypocrite Ministries
Brothers Or Enemies
You Gotta Die Because You're Different
You Gotta Die Because I'm Not
I'll Cast You Down
I'll Take You Out
A Legitimate Death
In A Legitimate War
Everyone's Right
Nobody's Wrong
Everyone Fights
Until We're All Gone
See ya!
#horror
#hypocrisy
#philosophical
#religion
#war
43 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 8:25am
1st Dec 2024 8:25am
WHAT IF IT WAS ALL A LIE
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️.
What if it was all a
lie, to have the ones that believe there is things, behind the curtains that you can't see 👁️👁️ the real, deepness of the truth about what is happening in real time. ⌚ For sure what if Biden, has put into place a plan to destroy the world 🌎 That has been change by the powers that be 🤨 to have us all not believe what we really see. AS long as we continue to wear the blinders, covering our own eyes and closing off our mind to...
What if it was all a
lie, to have the ones that believe there is things, behind the curtains that you can't see 👁️👁️ the real, deepness of the truth about what is happening in real time. ⌚ For sure what if Biden, has put into place a plan to destroy the world 🌎 That has been change by the powers that be 🤨 to have us all not believe what we really see. AS long as we continue to wear the blinders, covering our own eyes and closing off our mind to...
#monsters
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#witches
75 reads
4 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 00:42am
1st Dec 2024 00:42am
The abc's of this life aka bullshit
All boys cry
Doesn’t everyone
Fucking good
Heartbreak I
Just know
Lamenting might
Need others
Perspectives
Query reason
Senseless thoughts
Understanding
Very welcoming
X-rated your
Zeitgeist
Doesn’t everyone
Fucking good
Heartbreak I
Just know
Lamenting might
Need others
Perspectives
Query reason
Senseless thoughts
Understanding
Very welcoming
X-rated your
Zeitgeist
#atheism
#FreeVerse
#morality
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
70 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 00:05am
1st Dec 2024 00:05am
MY ENTITY IS THE WOLF
LET ME KNOW HOW DO YOU KNOW THYSELF, IF YOU REALLY TRULY KNOW THYSELF. 🤔 FOR do you know that we each have an, ability to manifest our own personal thoughts, 🧠 in mind and in our heart. ❤️ For I say that because of what I had to go through. 🤨 When I was told that I have different cancers stages, traveling through my mind and heart and soul and body. For now I'm going through the process of chemotherapy, for the treatment of elimination of this disease. THAT can affect each of us, in so many ways of life. 🙏 How many of us ever had a sacred...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
58 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 6:03pm
30th Nov 2024 6:03pm
Poetry Milk On The Field
Morning walk
Light and slow
WatchIng the flock
Quiet they go
Live like breath
They daily do
Cold and sleet
In summers and so
The ways are stern
Right and law
A one-way route
Blindly follow
Faith in guide
The shepherds know
Where the grass is thick
And heavenly grow
No bleat heard
There is no outlaw
Red lines are set
To come back home
...
Light and slow
WatchIng the flock
Quiet they go
Live like breath
They daily do
Cold and sleet
In summers and so
The ways are stern
Right and law
A one-way route
Blindly follow
Faith in guide
The shepherds know
Where the grass is thick
And heavenly grow
No bleat heard
There is no outlaw
Red lines are set
To come back home
...
#faith
#happiness
#inspirational
#morality
#philosophical
78 reads
11 Comments
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