Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
Woke Non-Haiku
All conscious in vegan dream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
#haiku
#philosophical
60 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
Don't Stop Knowing Nothing
Don't!
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
#lies
#minimalist
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
83 reads
14 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 00:07am
3rd Feb 2025 00:07am
Existential View
Largely the troubles of this life
Burning fires of struggle and strife
In this life, there seems to be time
Between the start and finish line
Delusion feeding illusion
Everyone always dies alone
Is it music or just a tone
Dancing to the rhythm of life
Celebration of no real strife
Forever living in this time
One moment it's all on the line
Jubilation of exaltation
Realizing you're never alone
Legacy built on a milestone
Everybody is the same
But from various viewpoints
Burning fires of struggle and strife
In this life, there seems to be time
Between the start and finish line
Delusion feeding illusion
Everyone always dies alone
Is it music or just a tone
Dancing to the rhythm of life
Celebration of no real strife
Forever living in this time
One moment it's all on the line
Jubilation of exaltation
Realizing you're never alone
Legacy built on a milestone
Everybody is the same
But from various viewpoints
#dance
#mirror
#philosophical
#shadows
#TruthOfLife
47 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:18pm
1st Feb 2025 11:18pm
AS I am me a writer
Here I am, as I am me as a writer of unspoken words ✍️ For let's take a few seconds to analyze, what I'm saying about a situation that affects, us all as writers of words ✍️ That being said is why do we judge someone else, by the entity that they use to showcase who they are in real life 🤨 But yet that is far from the truth, of who they really are in real life 🤨 For sometimes we hide behind a mask as a disguise, as we use an entity not to hide, behind a mask as a disguise. 😔 BUT to learn lessons on this subject of life. For sure as writers we...
#LifeAsAWriter
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#StreamOfConsciousness
62 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 5:19pm
1st Feb 2025 5:19pm
A Tale of a Cup of Coffee
It feels safe here
A gentle escape from fame
My disguise working well
Even the guy at the Deli on the corner
Didn't pay me no mind
I asked for hazelnut instead of regular
It smells great but taste is often lacking
The story of my life wraps around coffee
I tried so hard to achieve greatness
Now hiding from the very thing I thought I wanted most
Everyone wants a piece of your privacy
Selling my soul for headlines was a mistake
I couldn't have known then, to busy with my arrogance
Shit, he put sugar in my...
A gentle escape from fame
My disguise working well
Even the guy at the Deli on the corner
Didn't pay me no mind
I asked for hazelnut instead of regular
It smells great but taste is often lacking
The story of my life wraps around coffee
I tried so hard to achieve greatness
Now hiding from the very thing I thought I wanted most
Everyone wants a piece of your privacy
Selling my soul for headlines was a mistake
I couldn't have known then, to busy with my arrogance
Shit, he put sugar in my...
#coffee
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
#PopCulture
144 reads
29 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
Pretentious People Suck!
I met this guy through friends
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
#anger
#music
#philosophical
90 reads
19 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 7:18am
1st Feb 2025 7:18am
Morality
Life moves in circles just like a turntable
Spinning and turning colliding with reality
Combustion-able spirts growing unstable
It all boils down to a question of morality
Trouble is on the horizon nothing learned
Resurrecting mistakes to repeat them again
Respect isn’t paid for it needs to be earned
Roads paved in ignorance lead back to sin
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Spinning and turning colliding with reality
Combustion-able spirts growing unstable
It all boils down to a question of morality
Trouble is on the horizon nothing learned
Resurrecting mistakes to repeat them again
Respect isn’t paid for it needs to be earned
Roads paved in ignorance lead back to sin
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
96 reads
14 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 6:44am
31st Jan 2025 6:44am
Improvise
A guiding light cutting through the dark
Solitude making these years seem long
Fuzzy suggestions are capable of spark
Sometimes truth gets written into song
Always a little fuel remaining in the tank
With production costs continuing to rise
People forced to walk the fucking plank
Death’s certain unless one can improvise
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Solitude making these years seem long
Fuzzy suggestions are capable of spark
Sometimes truth gets written into song
Always a little fuel remaining in the tank
With production costs continuing to rise
People forced to walk the fucking plank
Death’s certain unless one can improvise
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
87 reads
18 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:13pm
30th Jan 2025 3:13pm
AWAKENING
As I stop and look and listen not only to my own mind and heart, I listen carefully to what others have to say on what they think and say about some situations, for sure it's true we all have our own opinions on what we see and hear, and read between the lines ✍️ For it's a pleasure to be able to have grown FOLKS conversations, as we can agree or disagree, but yet come together with a positive level of understanding, and walk away with knowledge and wisdom and enlightenment. With insight and the spiritual subconsciousness of our lives and dreams. Still intact with our endless,...
#dialogue
#gratitude
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
66 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 11:20am
30th Jan 2025 11:20am
Too Much
Too much of a good thing isn't good for any of us
At least that's what they say
Too much of a good thing can kill a person
Too much drugs
Too much alcohol
Too much food
Too much sex
Too much fame
They uphold that motto even when it gets to close to the truth
I suppose too much truth leads to too much loneliness
And we all know too much of that isn't good at all.
At least that's what they say
Too much of a good thing can kill a person
Too much drugs
Too much alcohol
Too much food
Too much sex
Too much fame
They uphold that motto even when it gets to close to the truth
I suppose too much truth leads to too much loneliness
And we all know too much of that isn't good at all.
#addiction
#loneliness
#philosophical #temptation
#philosophical #temptation
76 reads
8 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 9:53am
30th Jan 2025 9:53am
"The Myth of King Arthur" Series: Chapter I. King Arthur, or El Morya
In the misty castle noble men,
of spirit tested in life's trials,
in the Holy Ghost born again,
they are serving with smiles.
Medieval clothes and jewels,
of substance formed in manna,
they follow the Teacher's rules,
all bowing to the King's arcana.
Yet King Arthur is not self-deceived.
He deems himself a humble servant
of God, his wisdom well conceived
and put to work in practical covenant.
El Morya, or Abraham of Ancient Ages,
with a rose on a cross on his chest,
surrounded by angels and sages, ...
of spirit tested in life's trials,
in the Holy Ghost born again,
they are serving with smiles.
Medieval clothes and jewels,
of substance formed in manna,
they follow the Teacher's rules,
all bowing to the King's arcana.
Yet King Arthur is not self-deceived.
He deems himself a humble servant
of God, his wisdom well conceived
and put to work in practical covenant.
El Morya, or Abraham of Ancient Ages,
with a rose on a cross on his chest,
surrounded by angels and sages, ...
#God
#historical
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
62 reads
5 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 5:09pm
29th Jan 2025 5:09pm
Evolution
I’ve been isolating, trying to figure out me, Is it wrong to enjoy the company of myself, you see? I’ve faltered in living up to others’ definition of success, But in my clarity, I’ve won in my own progress.
Isolating my mind from the outside noise, It’s eerie, the silence, when you give up the TV’s voice. No more programming, no more lies, I’m not here to wake you from your sleep, just to realize.
Researching universal thought and healing frequencies, They say conquer your mind, but fail to mention the pleas. The difficulty of vanquishing negative perception, In a world...
Isolating my mind from the outside noise, It’s eerie, the silence, when you give up the TV’s voice. No more programming, no more lies, I’m not here to wake you from your sleep, just to realize.
Researching universal thought and healing frequencies, They say conquer your mind, but fail to mention the pleas. The difficulty of vanquishing negative perception, In a world...
#learning
#PersonalGrowth
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
57 reads
2 Comments
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