Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 2:44pm
19th Apr 2025 2:44pm
A darker shade
From the many memories of the truth of the darkness, that is hidden in the shade of blue 🔵 skies, pass the white clouds of images that makes shapes followed by silent whispers, that exhibit the solar eclipse in motions of changes to come. Creating a sense of calmness and relaxation into tranquility. For it's true that we are only ENTITY'S of the images of our pass lives experience, that reflect the way we see 👁️👁️ things that has helped us to navigate, through the process of the rough times, as well as the good times. Yet it's typically to assume the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#metaphor
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 9:06pm
18th Apr 2025 9:06pm
entranced
The vibe you put out is entrancing
Romancing the notion of we
There is no us to speak of
Yet your energy says there could be
a deep intellect
I rest in the layered shadows of your creation
and dream of what is there
Taking my time to peruse your visions
With a better sense of who you are
my thoughts reach out to touch you
Surely you're out of my league
to converse with you, an aphrodisiac
to read your pontifications, enlightening
a prophet giving sermons
a poetic genius's glory
With the understanding...
Romancing the notion of we
There is no us to speak of
Yet your energy says there could be
a deep intellect
I rest in the layered shadows of your creation
and dream of what is there
Taking my time to peruse your visions
With a better sense of who you are
my thoughts reach out to touch you
Surely you're out of my league
to converse with you, an aphrodisiac
to read your pontifications, enlightening
a prophet giving sermons
a poetic genius's glory
With the understanding...
#love
#philosophical
81 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 4:06pm
18th Apr 2025 4:06pm
Failure To Adapt
When the government fails at everything,
Then you finally realize,
Why anarchy should exist.
And stop trying to contain freedoms,
For ignorance.
And actually let people,
Govern themselves.
They might actually do,
The normal shit, they've always done,
For centuries.
Which was always,
Parties and booze.
Then you finally realize,
Why anarchy should exist.
And stop trying to contain freedoms,
For ignorance.
And actually let people,
Govern themselves.
They might actually do,
The normal shit, they've always done,
For centuries.
Which was always,
Parties and booze.
#funny
#philosophical
105 reads
5 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 1:28am
18th Apr 2025 1:28am
Capella Auriga
A quest is never done until you reach the end
That is
The questions may not get answered in this world
And thus, we must formulate and theorize my friends
Whatever waits for us on the other side of the universe
So we compose and create to the best of our abilities
Trying to solve the big mystery that mystifies us all
Letting our imaginations run rampant, wild and free
To the point that it consumes and exhumes our soul
But once fate has decided that our number is up
The veil of innocence lifts and things begin to make sense
It...
That is
The questions may not get answered in this world
And thus, we must formulate and theorize my friends
Whatever waits for us on the other side of the universe
So we compose and create to the best of our abilities
Trying to solve the big mystery that mystifies us all
Letting our imaginations run rampant, wild and free
To the point that it consumes and exhumes our soul
But once fate has decided that our number is up
The veil of innocence lifts and things begin to make sense
It...
#love
#philosophical
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
63 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 11:25pm
17th Apr 2025 11:25pm
That dead end road
How many times have we not listen to our own thoughts 🤔 and found thyself in a relationship, that just felt differently in so many ways on so many, levels of SUBCONSCIOUSNESS. But yet we went along with it any way, knowing that something just didn't feel right, about the relationship and the words they spoke, and the energy they gave off offer no comfort to the deepness of your own soul and heart ❣️ But yet deep beneath the surface of your own memories. IT starts to feel as though you've been here before, in another time ⌚ of the circumstances when you refuse, to...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
62 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 9:45pm
16th Apr 2025 9:45pm
ExperiMental Drug
If sex trafficking happened behind the scenes,
Infront of friends and family.
Would any of them actually try to contain,
What normal people would call insane?
Or are family and friends just stock brokers?
People who hide in grocery stores.
Betting on selling coworkers,
To benefit themselves and nothing more?
Infront of friends and family.
Would any of them actually try to contain,
What normal people would call insane?
Or are family and friends just stock brokers?
People who hide in grocery stores.
Betting on selling coworkers,
To benefit themselves and nothing more?
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
151 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 1:27pm
16th Apr 2025 1:27pm
To ignore the signs
Let's take a moment to analyze what I'm saying to you all, that are involved in this conversation, with the realization of understanding. FOR how many times have your own thoughts, shown you that, what you don't see is that, what you need to see, but yet we refuse to not acknowledge it 🤔 For sure the same thing holds true, in our own personal relationships, when things start to fall out of place that you, start to notice the deepness of the shifting of common sense. 🤫 But yet we still ignore the current changes in high sights 😕 of what our own brain 🧠 is trying...
#confusion
#heartbroken
#philosophical
#regret
#StreamOfConsciousness
67 reads
0 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
QUE FIT NO SERA SERA
"Que Sera Sera;” one of the lies that’s been passed down in ages
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
#fate
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical
#strength
40 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 3:25am
15th Apr 2025 3:25am
Eclipse
Stoicism requires self-control
Remaining calm
Understanding our own emotions
And knowing how to react
With good intentions
How many times must we bite our tongues…
It can be quite frustrating
To have light readily available
In the palm of your hand
When others think
They are enlightened
When all they’re doing
Is walking in the halo
Of the eclipse
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59 Total
Remaining calm
Understanding our own emotions
And knowing how to react
With good intentions
How many times must we bite our tongues…
It can be quite frustrating
To have light readily available
In the palm of your hand
When others think
They are enlightened
When all they’re doing
Is walking in the halo
Of the eclipse
51 Unique Words
59 Total
#philosophical
73 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 9:00pm
14th Apr 2025 9:00pm
Stupidity
If I pretended that I resigned,
And hid online,
Would you think I was,
A fake, manipulative bitch?
Or someone actually trying to help,
A person,
That never needed them?
Why harrass someone at work,
When they're already getting help?
Why waste time pretending to be a good person,
When you're obviously something else?
Why claim you're something you're not,
Just to feel better about yourself?
Maybe this bullshit person can explain,
How stupid that they sound.
Running in circles,
with scumbags...
And hid online,
Would you think I was,
A fake, manipulative bitch?
Or someone actually trying to help,
A person,
That never needed them?
Why harrass someone at work,
When they're already getting help?
Why waste time pretending to be a good person,
When you're obviously something else?
Why claim you're something you're not,
Just to feel better about yourself?
Maybe this bullshit person can explain,
How stupid that they sound.
Running in circles,
with scumbags...
#philosophical
87 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 7:24pm
14th Apr 2025 7:24pm
drift
drifting through time, I expand my view
with visions of eternity
exhaling stars and inhaling moons
my mind wraps around the cosmos
a burst of energy and I am at the beginning
Where it all began
an eye winks open as if from a long slumber
a prophet, the first prophet
seeing what was to come with great excitement
Some dreams were fearsome, and the angels shudder
screaming birth the formation of a galaxy
yawning dawn when light was formed
a dappled formation a fledgling attempt
with fits of rage when things...
with visions of eternity
exhaling stars and inhaling moons
my mind wraps around the cosmos
a burst of energy and I am at the beginning
Where it all began
an eye winks open as if from a long slumber
a prophet, the first prophet
seeing what was to come with great excitement
Some dreams were fearsome, and the angels shudder
screaming birth the formation of a galaxy
yawning dawn when light was formed
a dappled formation a fledgling attempt
with fits of rage when things...
#dragons
#metaphor
#philosophical
75 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 8:15am
14th Apr 2025 8:15am
Vultures
Step on up, my friend.
You too, can live in a digital hell!
Your body will decay and your brain will rot,
order now and download the latest virus.
First time customer?
Sign up free for a month!
We'll fuck with your head,
then continue to charge your card
Let the buyer beware.
Of totally random hidden fees.
We’ll get you hooked on endless misery,
and jonesing for empty promises.
Bad credit score, got you down?
No worries friend, we got you covered.
It’s our modus operandi to take advantage,
of your...
You too, can live in a digital hell!
Your body will decay and your brain will rot,
order now and download the latest virus.
First time customer?
Sign up free for a month!
We'll fuck with your head,
then continue to charge your card
Let the buyer beware.
Of totally random hidden fees.
We’ll get you hooked on endless misery,
and jonesing for empty promises.
Bad credit score, got you down?
No worries friend, we got you covered.
It’s our modus operandi to take advantage,
of your...
#philosophical
#satirical
175 reads
27 Comments
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