Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 3:30am
31st Mar 2025 3:30am
Eh
When you invite someone over,
You actually care about and like,
And all they do,
Is spread illegal porn of you.
Should I believe he's going to be my friend,
After this site closes?
Or should I sue him,
For real closure?
What would you do?
I have his pictures.
I'm sure the government can find him no problem.
But he is the government.
Lmao
You actually care about and like,
And all they do,
Is spread illegal porn of you.
Should I believe he's going to be my friend,
After this site closes?
Or should I sue him,
For real closure?
What would you do?
I have his pictures.
I'm sure the government can find him no problem.
But he is the government.
Lmao
#philosophical
66 reads
7 Comments
FLCPapi
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 3:53pm
30th Mar 2025 3:53pm
Back against the wall!
There’s an uncontrollable human urge to continue poking when you’re sure what their reaction would be.
You push and push and push because you’re convinced that there’s no limit to the elasticity of their tolerance.
In the end you act surprise when they finally snap. When the tolerance stretch out and you’re faced with a whole new reaction.
Machines don’t speak, but at some point even they react to too much pressure. That pressure leads to a fault and if your management approach is not re-evaluated, they develop an unrepairable fault, a fault you can’t fix. ...
You push and push and push because you’re convinced that there’s no limit to the elasticity of their tolerance.
In the end you act surprise when they finally snap. When the tolerance stretch out and you’re faced with a whole new reaction.
Machines don’t speak, but at some point even they react to too much pressure. That pressure leads to a fault and if your management approach is not re-evaluated, they develop an unrepairable fault, a fault you can’t fix. ...
#philosophical
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 10:54am
30th Mar 2025 10:54am
Polite At Night
When you put normal people,
In special needs programs,
And get mad when,
They laugh at the people around them.
Are you insane?
Am I a sociopath?
Or am I tired of being surrounded,
By low lives and scumbags?
I'm not a guy.
Not used to the practice,
Of pretending I care about worthless people.
I'm not an actress.
These people lie,
Just to get by.
They look to me like a savior.
Should I survive,
Or be the sailor,
Of Bermuda's triangle,
And ride the waves here?...
In special needs programs,
And get mad when,
They laugh at the people around them.
Are you insane?
Am I a sociopath?
Or am I tired of being surrounded,
By low lives and scumbags?
I'm not a guy.
Not used to the practice,
Of pretending I care about worthless people.
I'm not an actress.
These people lie,
Just to get by.
They look to me like a savior.
Should I survive,
Or be the sailor,
Of Bermuda's triangle,
And ride the waves here?...
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
61 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 9:58am
30th Mar 2025 9:58am
Hmmm...
When you know a person,
Who is forced to have the government,
Follow them around,
And try and force that on you,
At the expense of your child,
Is that a good person?
Or should they have minded their own business?
Should they have tried to be your "friend"?
Why do people care about them?
I don't think they do.
I think they use her all the time.
I think she thinks I can't get inside her mind.
She relies on fake people,
Looking past her at me.
I'm a more valuable,
Commodity....
Who is forced to have the government,
Follow them around,
And try and force that on you,
At the expense of your child,
Is that a good person?
Or should they have minded their own business?
Should they have tried to be your "friend"?
Why do people care about them?
I don't think they do.
I think they use her all the time.
I think she thinks I can't get inside her mind.
She relies on fake people,
Looking past her at me.
I'm a more valuable,
Commodity....
#funny
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
55 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 10:49am
29th Mar 2025 10:49am
I want to watch you take a shit .. Part 3
It's been awhile
Haven't stopped by to watch you crap
I like the way you take off all your clothes
I once asked you about that
You said you wanted total freedom when the gnarl descended
I do that too I told her
A love story was blooming
Alas though we live in different lands
That hook up to Zoom made things easier for awhile
But like all good things
We started to fall away
Life gets in the way often of simple pleasures
So just yesterday we powered up the Zoom
You dropped a mighty load
I...
Haven't stopped by to watch you crap
I like the way you take off all your clothes
I once asked you about that
You said you wanted total freedom when the gnarl descended
I do that too I told her
A love story was blooming
Alas though we live in different lands
That hook up to Zoom made things easier for awhile
But like all good things
We started to fall away
Life gets in the way often of simple pleasures
So just yesterday we powered up the Zoom
You dropped a mighty load
I...
#crush
#funny
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
72 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
Gaze
a melody plays quietly
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
#metaphor
#philosophical
81 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 7:39am
28th Mar 2025 7:39am
Seizing Freedom In Broad Daylight
Robber-barons are pick pockets in disguise
Gutting social programs that help those in need
Just to finance this fascist excuse for leadership
Disappearing those folks they labeled scapegoat
People can’t you see we’re the fucking hired help
Being told to shut up and know the pecking order
Crippling healthcare as a means to thin the masses
Defunding public schools to dumb humanity down
Running the best plays from a Dictators playbook
Death by a million cuts will bleed innocence dry
Corporate media outlets spinning false...
Gutting social programs that help those in need
Just to finance this fascist excuse for leadership
Disappearing those folks they labeled scapegoat
People can’t you see we’re the fucking hired help
Being told to shut up and know the pecking order
Crippling healthcare as a means to thin the masses
Defunding public schools to dumb humanity down
Running the best plays from a Dictators playbook
Death by a million cuts will bleed innocence dry
Corporate media outlets spinning false...
#philosophical
124 reads
19 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 7:39pm
27th Mar 2025 7:39pm
Cemetery
Practically everyday I walk through my local cemetery
Peaceful, tranquil, relaxing and time stands still
I have respect when entering
I always remember not to point at a grave, it will make your finger rot
Also, do not count the cars in a funeral procession,
for the amount of cars you count, will be the day that you perish sometime during that year
As I heard these superstitions from my elders, I never dared to explore these wise tales
One day as I awoke from my restful sleep, I began shivering uncontrollably
I just could not shake this feeling ...
Peaceful, tranquil, relaxing and time stands still
I have respect when entering
I always remember not to point at a grave, it will make your finger rot
Also, do not count the cars in a funeral procession,
for the amount of cars you count, will be the day that you perish sometime during that year
As I heard these superstitions from my elders, I never dared to explore these wise tales
One day as I awoke from my restful sleep, I began shivering uncontrollably
I just could not shake this feeling ...
#curse
#death
#family
#graveyard
#philosophical
74 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 10:02am
26th Mar 2025 10:02am
Wednesday Wisdom
Create is to live
Feelings can tangle with words
Restrict is to die
Feelings can tangle with words
Restrict is to die
#philosophical
#senryu
59 reads
4 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 6:04am
26th Mar 2025 6:04am
Only Through The Maker
Coming to terms with this guilt
Imagine my surprise to find
The copious amounts of blood spilt
For entertainment that rots the mind
Never quite understanding why
It’s always been about the choices
I’m constantly trying not to die
Conflicted by two different voices
Being observed by the digital eye
They see us all, they know us all
As drones paint targets from the sky
They show us all, they control us all
In the midst of this spiritual war
All warnings went unobserved
I witnessed them open an old scar ...
Imagine my surprise to find
The copious amounts of blood spilt
For entertainment that rots the mind
Never quite understanding why
It’s always been about the choices
I’m constantly trying not to die
Conflicted by two different voices
Being observed by the digital eye
They see us all, they know us all
As drones paint targets from the sky
They show us all, they control us all
In the midst of this spiritual war
All warnings went unobserved
I witnessed them open an old scar ...
#philosophical
133 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
That Outer BODY feelings
Have you ever had a sacred outer body experience with feelings, with a real positive level of energy as you go through, a manfestion which revolves within your thoughts of your own mind thoughts. For sure it's necessary to understand, that what you think you have the ability to be able to achieve. As it is a want and need to believe that you alone, have the ability and power within your own hands and mind thoughts. For do you really believe in your faith of your mind thoughts, that you do possess the skills of magical powers of strength and energy and determination and PERSEVERANCE. TO PUSH...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#StreamOfConsciousness
65 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 6:32am
24th Mar 2025 6:32am
Circling To Swarm
Don’t know where these roads lead
Some closed others off the beaten path
Mile after mile paved in endless greed
Dirty deeds exposed after the bloodbath
So many moving parts in this machine
Places to hide and manipulate from
Having paid to wipe the system clean
Another talking head is playing dumb
Wicked regime turning back the clock
Indentured servants not a working class
Innocent victims reside on the cellblock
While war criminals receive a free pass
Trying to weather this fascist storm
That’s meant to...
Some closed others off the beaten path
Mile after mile paved in endless greed
Dirty deeds exposed after the bloodbath
So many moving parts in this machine
Places to hide and manipulate from
Having paid to wipe the system clean
Another talking head is playing dumb
Wicked regime turning back the clock
Indentured servants not a working class
Innocent victims reside on the cellblock
While war criminals receive a free pass
Trying to weather this fascist storm
That’s meant to...
#philosophical
149 reads
23 Comments
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