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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 10:56pm
22nd Apr 2024 10:56pm
The Sheridan Women
The women of the Sheridan family always disappeared at some point in their lives, normally before fifty but at least once at seventy-two. (She was a powerful old woman called Ma Sheridan, who ruled her henhouse with an iron claw.) Eleanor became dimly aware of this truth when she was seven years old, and overheard her mother explaining family photographs to her grandfather, already short of memory at sixty-eight. His name was Granddad Chips and it would take another twelve years for the old boy to require hospitalisation, by which time Eleanor would have made her disappearance, the youngest...
#magic
#pagan
#prose #witches
#prose #witches
127 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
30th Mar 2024 6:07pm
30th Mar 2024 6:07pm
Hesperian Allure!
All clear last night, yet, in the southeast
the moon loafed over horizon puffs
as far flung as eldritch cottonwood fluffs
or dragon breath the Atlantides released
in apple garden exhalation mode
to glow as gold as the gibbous is thick
as satisfaction for the lunatic
wearied of the light emitting diode.
You see, lunatics know which light is best
and which hue most rewards the midnight eye
when mytho-scanning from east to west
all the aesthetics of a moonlit sky...
which Hesperus had long ago addressed
when she taught Luna...
the moon loafed over horizon puffs
as far flung as eldritch cottonwood fluffs
or dragon breath the Atlantides released
in apple garden exhalation mode
to glow as gold as the gibbous is thick
as satisfaction for the lunatic
wearied of the light emitting diode.
You see, lunatics know which light is best
and which hue most rewards the midnight eye
when mytho-scanning from east to west
all the aesthetics of a moonlit sky...
which Hesperus had long ago addressed
when she taught Luna...
#mythology
#pagan
157 reads
13 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 7:09am
25th Mar 2024 7:09am
Canonical Hours
So often sought in twilit skies
are the arcane secrets there
when that luminous flux applies
to the billow surge it must share
with lunar lumens at their peak
and stars and planets in the mix
to play a cloudy hide and seek
as if a writhing bag of tricks
ruled the moonrise roost of beams
in threshold vermicelli waves
overlapping cumulous streams
cascading through the freshest graves
to squirm in some composting meat
long past the matins on repeat
for martyrdom at every turn,
in undercroft...or welkin churn!
are the arcane secrets there
when that luminous flux applies
to the billow surge it must share
with lunar lumens at their peak
and stars and planets in the mix
to play a cloudy hide and seek
as if a writhing bag of tricks
ruled the moonrise roost of beams
in threshold vermicelli waves
overlapping cumulous streams
cascading through the freshest graves
to squirm in some composting meat
long past the matins on repeat
for martyrdom at every turn,
in undercroft...or welkin churn!
#moon
#clouds
#mythology
#LifeCycle
#pagan
167 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 7:47pm
21st Mar 2024 7:47pm
Rhyme ?
I’m your queen
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
#WritingPoetry
#CharlesBukowski
#pagan
#StreamOfConsciousness
#EECummings
208 reads
35 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 6:43pm
8th Mar 2024 6:43pm
Suffer with Me
I made you
Or you made me
Whatever the cause
Addiction built in
Restlessness
Shared wreckage
Dam waiting to collapse
People rage
Chamber
Rubber
Latex
Masters and servants
Vampire in training
Secretions
I'm not done with you
We just started
Bloody liaisons
Messy relationships
Black hearts 🖤🖤
Twisted
Thrill kill
Or you made me
Whatever the cause
Addiction built in
Restlessness
Shared wreckage
Dam waiting to collapse
People rage
Chamber
Rubber
Latex
Masters and servants
Vampire in training
Secretions
I'm not done with you
We just started
Bloody liaisons
Messy relationships
Black hearts 🖤🖤
Twisted
Thrill kill
#lust
#dark
#vampires
#pagan
#ThrillSeeking
307 reads
58 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 5:33pm
4th Mar 2024 5:33pm
Pagan Coloures (by Musically Mr M and Monovox128)
#PopCulture
#pagan
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
157 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 2:04pm
21st Feb 2024 2:04pm
Abnoba
In the blue kingdom where the waters dance,
the goddess reigns, with a look that enchants.
Her voice flows like an advancing stream,
echoes deep in the breeze that sings.
With tidal hands she weaves destiny
of creatures that inhabit water.
Her cloak is foam, pure and divine,
In the depths, her secrets stir.
Guardian of the waters, serene goddess,
on his throne of coral and pearl.
Liquid goddess of immense power,
your strength moves the intense ocean.
On the horizon your light shines
guide mortals, who on earth...
the goddess reigns, with a look that enchants.
Her voice flows like an advancing stream,
echoes deep in the breeze that sings.
With tidal hands she weaves destiny
of creatures that inhabit water.
Her cloak is foam, pure and divine,
In the depths, her secrets stir.
Guardian of the waters, serene goddess,
on his throne of coral and pearl.
Liquid goddess of immense power,
your strength moves the intense ocean.
On the horizon your light shines
guide mortals, who on earth...
#religion
#astrology
#spiritual
#pagan
#magic
151 reads
8 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Feb 2024 3:39pm
4th Feb 2024 3:39pm
The Temple of Aphrodite!
A fleeting thing is a beautiful maid
with some wine and sonnets to toast her health
as the cornerstone of romantic wealth
whereto insufficient tribute is paid
when only informality rules
in the mastering of half-witted hearts
by cliché rom-com cinematic arts
foundering in emoticon pools
as Valentine's day looms large and in charge
until lovey-dovey Romeo pukes
to angst wherein his Juliet rebukes
his rampant poor planning, often at large...
and why the wise mistress takes control of
all matters in the management of love!
with some wine and sonnets to toast her health
as the cornerstone of romantic wealth
whereto insufficient tribute is paid
when only informality rules
in the mastering of half-witted hearts
by cliché rom-com cinematic arts
foundering in emoticon pools
as Valentine's day looms large and in charge
until lovey-dovey Romeo pukes
to angst wherein his Juliet rebukes
his rampant poor planning, often at large...
and why the wise mistress takes control of
all matters in the management of love!
#pagan
#tradition
193 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 12:59pm
3rd Feb 2024 12:59pm
Arise!
She snuck into some upper boughs
just around the witching hour,
as if in evergreens to browse
by ancient arcane Imbolc power.
Sometimes the moon by stealth will climb
into the first skies of the year...
in a manner, extra sublime,
due to the heavens being clear;
as if by Brigid, parting, blessed...
and brutal Janus looking twice,
conferred to grant Aurora's request
to lose the fog and cirrus ice
so sleepless bards and crescent moons
may plot gold beams...with mantic runes!
just around the witching hour,
as if in evergreens to browse
by ancient arcane Imbolc power.
Sometimes the moon by stealth will climb
into the first skies of the year...
in a manner, extra sublime,
due to the heavens being clear;
as if by Brigid, parting, blessed...
and brutal Janus looking twice,
conferred to grant Aurora's request
to lose the fog and cirrus ice
so sleepless bards and crescent moons
may plot gold beams...with mantic runes!
#pagan
203 reads
5 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 9:19am
3rd Feb 2024 9:19am
Imbolc Cleansing
O Brigid, your season has arrived
Bowing to you, Jack Frost retreats
Nature speaks spring language
The first leaves unfurl, seeds sprout
Animals give birth to their offspring
Blessed by your light, o Goddess of
Fertility, the eternal circle of
Birth death and rebirth starts anew
I call upon your guidance, o Brigid
All rooms are prepared and cleaned
The incense sticks are kindled
Now the time has come to
Smudge the house of my soul
I am afraid to face the darker side
Encouraged by your divine light
I open the...
Bowing to you, Jack Frost retreats
Nature speaks spring language
The first leaves unfurl, seeds sprout
Animals give birth to their offspring
Blessed by your light, o Goddess of
Fertility, the eternal circle of
Birth death and rebirth starts anew
I call upon your guidance, o Brigid
All rooms are prepared and cleaned
The incense sticks are kindled
Now the time has come to
Smudge the house of my soul
I am afraid to face the darker side
Encouraged by your divine light
I open the...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#mythology #pagan
#mythology #pagan
137 reads
0 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 1:38am
31st Jan 2024 1:38am
Of Ancient Lore Forgotten
- Of Ancient Lore Forgotten -
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#pagan
#philosophical
#rebellion
168 reads
7 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 4:39pm
20th Jan 2024 4:39pm
Godhead
No god more represents a man
than horny Pan, astute,
and no nymph with a better plan
than Syrinx for his flute.
Upon that tube she plies her lips
to give a gentle blow
which summons from below his hips
love potion to bestow.
Perhaps she thought it a mere kiss
when first he brought to bear
his organ 'gainst her mouth abyss
upon a playful dare.
Yet rather than a fetching tune
her face became a mess...
when of a sudden, Pan aswoon,
released immortal stress!
than horny Pan, astute,
and no nymph with a better plan
than Syrinx for his flute.
Upon that tube she plies her lips
to give a gentle blow
which summons from below his hips
love potion to bestow.
Perhaps she thought it a mere kiss
when first he brought to bear
his organ 'gainst her mouth abyss
upon a playful dare.
Yet rather than a fetching tune
her face became a mess...
when of a sudden, Pan aswoon,
released immortal stress!
#uplifting
#mythology
#pagan
#tradition
#PersonalGrowth
202 reads
4 Comments
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