Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique
#nature
Poems about nature seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Today
When birds chirp
and crickets and frogs sing
as the new days sun
dances with the morning dew
Praise life
Praise God
Be still and know
you...me, we are truly blessed ❤️
and crickets and frogs sing
as the new days sun
dances with the morning dew
Praise life
Praise God
Be still and know
you...me, we are truly blessed ❤️
#earth
#love
#nature
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natural connection
languid day, contempt with boredom
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
#animals
#flowers
#happiness
#nature
#trees
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Limeraiku/ Haikerick
i
I once had a friend
named Carol, who tried to roll
over a barrel.
ii
At the end of a very long day,
consider the stars far away.
They declare their existence;
from mind-boggling distance,
their light shines with years-long delay.
iii
The thing we all love
about Jerry is that he
always seems merry.
iv
It's fine that my readers might wonder
if those things are linked, or a blunder?
The answer is just
that the word count's a must
and today's thoughts came in at just under!
I once had a friend
named Carol, who tried to roll
over a barrel.
ii
At the end of a very long day,
consider the stars far away.
They declare their existence;
from mind-boggling distance,
their light shines with years-long delay.
iii
The thing we all love
about Jerry is that he
always seems merry.
iv
It's fine that my readers might wonder
if those things are linked, or a blunder?
The answer is just
that the word count's a must
and today's thoughts came in at just under!
#friendship
#nature
#stars
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Natural Bridges - Scene 2
Walking away from the ocean waves
toward the Ranger’s station
adjacent to a lush eucalyptus grove
descend among the cough-drop-scented trees
scores of Monarch butterflies ethereally float
on the gentle sea breeze
a joyous winged welcoming committee
flit around the heads of human visitors
Inviting the curious strangers
to spend time with them in their warm Winter home
thousands of orange and black striped,
white dotted wings carpet the leaves
and trunks of the trees
resting from their long migration
recouping the energy ...
toward the Ranger’s station
adjacent to a lush eucalyptus grove
descend among the cough-drop-scented trees
scores of Monarch butterflies ethereally float
on the gentle sea breeze
a joyous winged welcoming committee
flit around the heads of human visitors
Inviting the curious strangers
to spend time with them in their warm Winter home
thousands of orange and black striped,
white dotted wings carpet the leaves
and trunks of the trees
resting from their long migration
recouping the energy ...
#butterfly
#happiness
#love
#nature
#trees
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Natural Bridges - Scene 1
Gravel crunch, crunch, crunches
beneath your sandals
walking the ice plant framed path
that leads to the shore
feel the cool sea breeze l
caress your cheeks,
tousle your hair
descending the stairway
to the beige sanded beach
bifurcated by a flowing stream
fed by seawater at high tide
survey the dark green ocean waves
rolling in to meet the land
and marvel at the natural
rock Arc de Triomphe
rising majestically just off shore
seeming to support a bridge
to some mystical kingdom in the azure blue sky
beneath your sandals
walking the ice plant framed path
that leads to the shore
feel the cool sea breeze l
caress your cheeks,
tousle your hair
descending the stairway
to the beige sanded beach
bifurcated by a flowing stream
fed by seawater at high tide
survey the dark green ocean waves
rolling in to meet the land
and marvel at the natural
rock Arc de Triomphe
rising majestically just off shore
seeming to support a bridge
to some mystical kingdom in the azure blue sky
#nature
#peace
#sea
#sun
#wind
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a morning to behold
clouds bloomed and sprinkled
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated...
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated...
#earth
#morning
#nature
#sun
#universe
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Fireflies At Night
You might not believe your eyes at the sight.
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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~some drenchy-eroding in nostalgic mega- episodes.. as sunday mini-bytes
1. The Red Hibiscus
you are strikingly pretty & a thoughtfully
hybridized as like a master-creator
Brahma‘s best work.. & yes,
you smile as a mammoth rafflesia
with the same bloody hue.. but yes
hurries to add.. no, none of its rotten
hungering fleshy stink of that bloody
predaceous forest flower.. that
you have innate..
all you adorn.. are
the uniquely bejewelled
a huge single ruby red
stone.. in firing yellowy
streaking tints.. of a million
bulbous pollens.. that ...
you are strikingly pretty & a thoughtfully
hybridized as like a master-creator
Brahma‘s best work.. & yes,
you smile as a mammoth rafflesia
with the same bloody hue.. but yes
hurries to add.. no, none of its rotten
hungering fleshy stink of that bloody
predaceous forest flower.. that
you have innate..
all you adorn.. are
the uniquely bejewelled
a huge single ruby red
stone.. in firing yellowy
streaking tints.. of a million
bulbous pollens.. that ...
#apocalypse
#love
#nature
#nostalgia
#spiritual
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Tale of the Four Legged Bitch
I remember my
brother tried
walking my dog
you'd think
he was getting a
ghost accustomed
to wearing tack
I wasn't there,
but I laughed
seeing the hell
she raised on
our carpet
thinking how
better it all is
ripping new
arseholes
into things,
pissin' on
statues not
worth saving
by tax payers
and shittin'
in a garden
well trimmed
by the local
homophobe,
to not take
shit laying
down, tan ...
brother tried
walking my dog
you'd think
he was getting a
ghost accustomed
to wearing tack
I wasn't there,
but I laughed
seeing the hell
she raised on
our carpet
thinking how
better it all is
ripping new
arseholes
into things,
pissin' on
statues not
worth saving
by tax payers
and shittin'
in a garden
well trimmed
by the local
homophobe,
to not take
shit laying
down, tan ...
#nature
#symbolism
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Dirtshirt
(or "The Necromancy Blues")
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
#death
#Easter
#hope
#magic
#nature
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beauty in chaos
the roaring sky cried in joy
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
#animals
#beauty
#birds
#hope
#nature
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balance
With outstretched arms, nature calls to me
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
#animals
#birds
#cats
#dogs
#nature
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DU Poetry : Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique