Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique
#nature
Poems about nature seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Spring is near
Winter suddenly hides away
waterfalls once frozen
flowing downward into the bay
Lonely sidewalks decay, after before
spring is arriving soon
the end of the bridge lies an open door
Broken dreams picked up where they last fell
the emotional wasteland sleeps again
my love through words, encouraged to tell
waterfalls once frozen
flowing downward into the bay
Lonely sidewalks decay, after before
spring is arriving soon
the end of the bridge lies an open door
Broken dreams picked up where they last fell
the emotional wasteland sleeps again
my love through words, encouraged to tell
#hope
#nature
#rhyming
#spring
#uplifting
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A Natural Disaster
I AM A
NATURAL DISASTER,
I will RIP THROUGH
YOU like a
HURRICANE,
I will DESTROY YOU like a
TORNADO,
I WILL WIPE YOU OUT like a
TSUNAMI,
I will ERUPT STRONG like a
VOLCANO,
I will SWIRL YOU like a
CYCLONE,
I will DROWN YOU like the
DEEP SEAS!!,
BURN THROUGH YOU like
FIRE,
VERY FAST and
WITH EASE,
I AM A
STRONG and POWERFUL
WIND,
Blowing down
REALLY TALL TREES,
I AM A ROCK, and
I WILL CRUSH you,
SO, WATCH OUT
IF YOU SO PLEASE!!!!!
I will ...
NATURAL DISASTER,
I will RIP THROUGH
YOU like a
HURRICANE,
I will DESTROY YOU like a
TORNADO,
I WILL WIPE YOU OUT like a
TSUNAMI,
I will ERUPT STRONG like a
VOLCANO,
I will SWIRL YOU like a
CYCLONE,
I will DROWN YOU like the
DEEP SEAS!!,
BURN THROUGH YOU like
FIRE,
VERY FAST and
WITH EASE,
I AM A
STRONG and POWERFUL
WIND,
Blowing down
REALLY TALL TREES,
I AM A ROCK, and
I WILL CRUSH you,
SO, WATCH OUT
IF YOU SO PLEASE!!!!!
I will ...
#nature
#rain
#water #wind
#water #wind
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Earth Crimes
We tore the last tree down
burned butterfly wings
pretended things
would be Ok
We joined the queue
at the church of too late
and waited
to be saved
still counting our dollars
while we looked the other way
burned butterfly wings
pretended things
would be Ok
We joined the queue
at the church of too late
and waited
to be saved
still counting our dollars
while we looked the other way
#environment
#humankind
#nature #unicorns
#nature #unicorns
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Charlie & His Lions
Charlie was a handsome, cultured young man who liked being outdoors
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Charlie eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the suggestion from his agent, Charlie fled to Africa,...
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Charlie eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the suggestion from his agent, Charlie fled to Africa,...
#fiction
#lion
#nature
#ShortStory
#success
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8 Comments
White Waters
The thrill of the journey is an adventure with no destination
An expedition on the wild river uncharted
Meandering in a steady rush
Through the breeze and forest trees
Into the calmness of still water
And sunshine
Awaiting
Beneath skies of azure
And
Puffy white clouds
Of daydreams
Turning into night dreams
In the fantastic canopy
Of dreamy twlight hues
Dimming slow
As the moon, planets
and stars begin to glow
“Life itself is beautiful, you just have to live it in order to be happy.”
An expedition on the wild river uncharted
Meandering in a steady rush
Through the breeze and forest trees
Into the calmness of still water
And sunshine
Awaiting
Beneath skies of azure
And
Puffy white clouds
Of daydreams
Turning into night dreams
In the fantastic canopy
Of dreamy twlight hues
Dimming slow
As the moon, planets
and stars begin to glow
“Life itself is beautiful, you just have to live it in order to be happy.”
#nature
#TruthOfLife
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The Sunset
It was the beginning of dawn.
And the sun,moon was coming upside down.
The colors danced in the sky.
And birds began to fly.
We watched the sunset appear and burn down.
It looked stunning.
Like it was wearing a colorful gown.
It slowly began to rise and show in the sky.
As birds sing and leaves fly.
It began with red,like red roses immortal.
And went into orange,like orange juice.
It transitioned into yellow,like sunshine.
And had really pretty hues.
When it started coming back down, it started becoming...
And the sun,moon was coming upside down.
The colors danced in the sky.
And birds began to fly.
We watched the sunset appear and burn down.
It looked stunning.
Like it was wearing a colorful gown.
It slowly began to rise and show in the sky.
As birds sing and leaves fly.
It began with red,like red roses immortal.
And went into orange,like orange juice.
It transitioned into yellow,like sunshine.
And had really pretty hues.
When it started coming back down, it started becoming...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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Triolet #1
The Arizona Queen of the Night –
She is a most mysterious flower –
The one seen dancing in the moonlight.
The Arizona Queen of the Night –
In a pale gown, appears near June’s height.
Have you been lucky enough to see her –
The Arizona Queen of the Night?
She is a most mysterious flower.
She is a most mysterious flower –
The one seen dancing in the moonlight.
The Arizona Queen of the Night –
In a pale gown, appears near June’s height.
Have you been lucky enough to see her –
The Arizona Queen of the Night?
She is a most mysterious flower.
#nature
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Hint of spring
Winter has finally broken
like fever chills
Moisture returning to the air
No longer crisp dry
cracking skin
drying nostrils
A faint warmth
brushing cheeks
Purple tinged buds
not yet breaking
swelling with promise
like fever chills
Moisture returning to the air
No longer crisp dry
cracking skin
drying nostrils
A faint warmth
brushing cheeks
Purple tinged buds
not yet breaking
swelling with promise
#nature
#spring
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4 Comments
Under the moon light
Here I am as I am in a place of pure calmness and tranquility, with the quiteness of the moon reflection, upon the peaceful waters, as they flow so peacefully up stream. For sure it's here and now I feel the tension leaving my mind, and heart and spiritual subconsciousness of my soul. As it eliminates to the point there's no hurt and no pain, only the deepness of being replaced by the sounds of the quiet waters, drifting with the winds of time. For even as I feel this great sensation, I begin to inhale and exhale out the negativity, from my subconscious of my deepest thoughts of healing,...
#clouds
#countryside
#nature
#river
#sky
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Do you feel uncomfortable?
When you were young
you would fly away
so what has changed?
if their words cannot
stuff your eardrums
like cotton wool
as your chest begins
screaming back up
into your throat,
let those wings
beat seamlessly
back & forth
once again.
you would fly away
so what has changed?
if their words cannot
stuff your eardrums
like cotton wool
as your chest begins
screaming back up
into your throat,
let those wings
beat seamlessly
back & forth
once again.
#birds
#nature
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A Vow of Devotion - for a friend's marriage ceremony
In the hush of this cherished night,
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
#marriage
#nature
#sex
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~the purpose
take away even my memory
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
#dystopian
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
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8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique