Poems About Morality Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about morality seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
TheVORTEXRETURNS
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:26pm
Yesterday 7:26pm
"The Radiant Reckoning"
Countless beams of resplendent light. The illumination
of inescapable judgments.
The lustrous fires of a focused might.
The overpowering foreknowledge of fate and its purpose. Though an evil was unleashed.
The shackles that bind us unable to subdue its menace.
It glows with the light that would make us cower hiding all of are secrets.
Its blinding reckoning would make us fearful of its purpose.
The silence that would descend would overpower the winds that surround us.
The reckoning of that vivid test would ultimately prove ...
of inescapable judgments.
The lustrous fires of a focused might.
The overpowering foreknowledge of fate and its purpose. Though an evil was unleashed.
The shackles that bind us unable to subdue its menace.
It glows with the light that would make us cower hiding all of are secrets.
Its blinding reckoning would make us fearful of its purpose.
The silence that would descend would overpower the winds that surround us.
The reckoning of that vivid test would ultimately prove ...
#morality
#mythology
#pagan
#rebirth
#sacrifice
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 9:26pm
28th Jan 2025 9:26pm
Obtuse
Please lord
Spare me of righteousness
Allow me NOT to save souls
Let me bathe in sin
I seek honesty
I worship trust
Yet I am a heathen
To be clear
Spare me of righteousness
Allow me NOT to save souls
Let me bathe in sin
I seek honesty
I worship trust
Yet I am a heathen
To be clear
#dark
#evil
#morality #pagan
#morality #pagan
80 reads
31 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 00:19am
27th Jan 2025 00:19am
Dick Sauce
The hair is warm and cozy.
Covering my face.
It's musky yet inviting.
It's my privacy it invades.
It's intent is all around me.
It's my happy place.
I have no shame.
I have no worry.
I can close my eyes to purity.
Hair doesn't have a face.
Covering my face.
It's musky yet inviting.
It's my privacy it invades.
It's intent is all around me.
It's my happy place.
I have no shame.
I have no worry.
I can close my eyes to purity.
Hair doesn't have a face.
#morality
53 reads
9 Comments
King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
I'm an African American
I'm an African American/
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
#faith
#morality
#spiritual
56 reads
2 Comments
mea_ultima_verba
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 7:11pm
22nd Jan 2025 7:11pm
a man's BROKEN EGO WONT BE PUNISHED but a innocent girl jailed for winning from attempt murder on her
#LifeChangingMoment
#manipulation
#morality #prison
#morality #prison
24 reads
2 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 1:02pm
22nd Jan 2025 1:02pm
Lamentations
It was morning when I fell upon a rock,
I found myself torn, almost split in half.
Training every day to be highly skilled,
Unaware that I left the house's bolts for someone else with the spanner.
They say, "Travel to see the world, for it's not a circle,"
But roam too much, and you might turn into a fool.
My folks say being consistent is the key,
Yet even standing up comes with its own fee.
Those in the game think they're showing us the light,
But they're the very source of all the chaos we fight.
"Do this, do...
I found myself torn, almost split in half.
Training every day to be highly skilled,
Unaware that I left the house's bolts for someone else with the spanner.
They say, "Travel to see the world, for it's not a circle,"
But roam too much, and you might turn into a fool.
My folks say being consistent is the key,
Yet even standing up comes with its own fee.
Those in the game think they're showing us the light,
But they're the very source of all the chaos we fight.
"Do this, do...
#freedom
#identity
#morality #TruthOfLife
#morality #TruthOfLife
30 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 7:19pm
21st Jan 2025 7:19pm
I sin to live
Burn the little panties off of cuties with a flaming stick
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I sin to live
I sin to live
I sin to live
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I sin to live ...
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I sin to live
I sin to live
I sin to live
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I sin to live ...
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#morality
#peace
56 reads
7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:55pm
19th Jan 2025 10:55pm
What is your dark side
Do you know what is your DARK side effect, that you call upon when you are at a point in your own life. That the things in your life, has taken a real dramatic change of direction, that you start to feel trapped in a vortex of insanity. Follow by just the pain and hurt and confusion, and drama and madness and chaos, with no escape route nor plan. TO move you out of the way. For the elders say that we have the ability to manifest that which is hidden in own spiritual entity. For do you know what your true beliefs, are of what is your spiritual faith, and entity is to you 🤔 For example...
#evolution
#metaphor
#morality
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
64 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
Indelible Lines
Oh, how much i long
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
74 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
Fellah, a Man of Earth, a Man or Worth
Je t'admire, toi le Fellah dans les vastes champs
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#spiritual
64 reads
2 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:26am
14th Jan 2025 9:26am
"Light...Hovers"
"Light...Hovers"
Light...hovers.
An obtuse rectangle in the sky.
People crane back their heads,
looking, wondering, maybe even weeping.
Some asking, waiting for a reply.
Light...hovers.
Twisting...turning...melding.
A different shape to all who choose to view.
Ingrained into the deepest self.
What could, what should, what did/I didn't do?
I look in consternation.
Images shaping for me high above.
I see the past as I have learned,
lessons strangled by said glove.
Light...hovers. ...
Light...hovers.
An obtuse rectangle in the sky.
People crane back their heads,
looking, wondering, maybe even weeping.
Some asking, waiting for a reply.
Light...hovers.
Twisting...turning...melding.
A different shape to all who choose to view.
Ingrained into the deepest self.
What could, what should, what did/I didn't do?
I look in consternation.
Images shaping for me high above.
I see the past as I have learned,
lessons strangled by said glove.
Light...hovers. ...
#apathy
#bittersweet
#culture
#evolution
#morality
50 reads
2 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 4:19am
8th Jan 2025 4:19am
He-She-Other
Eyeing life side eyed asphyxiated in this spotters scope
concave monocular teetering in and out of trance
Observant surveilling wretched buffoonery trending
cyclic magnified in this inauspicious life dance
Shrewd to learn reasoning in intricate depths of people
evolved judgemental life views secluded
Laid in the cut calm as a fly on the textured wall
gender-neutral bathroom festering larvae included
Planted trigger behaviors become iridescently apparent
in blank jungle silence of blossoming juvenile minds
Passive watching random demonic on...
concave monocular teetering in and out of trance
Observant surveilling wretched buffoonery trending
cyclic magnified in this inauspicious life dance
Shrewd to learn reasoning in intricate depths of people
evolved judgemental life views secluded
Laid in the cut calm as a fly on the textured wall
gender-neutral bathroom festering larvae included
Planted trigger behaviors become iridescently apparent
in blank jungle silence of blossoming juvenile minds
Passive watching random demonic on...
#honesty
#LGBT
#masculinity
#morality
#transgender
89 reads
2 Comments
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