Poems About Morality Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about morality seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wordvomit2001
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:38pm
Yesterday 6:38pm
the state of the world
Land of freedom , home of the brave . at least that's what we say, yet at the same moment I lay awake wondering if my friends will see the next birthday . for you see this land is built upon the bodies of people like my friends poc , lgbtqia+ , disabled , poor . disarray and hatred is what this country has fallen to . the indisputable right to live should never have been able to be touched . if the god i prayed to as a babe is but the same as the one people like desantos pray to , then i denounce this deity ; and also this faith . America has always been dis-balanced, just now not a soul...
#anger
#hate
#frustration
#greed
#morality
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2 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
26th May 2023 10:05pm
26th May 2023 10:05pm
Poem Heaven
Blessed by the divine
they reside eternally on could nine
Poems filled similes, metaphors and alliterations
penned by writers from over 186 nations
Crafted by greats and unknows
and in the future by AI and clones
With themes that represent the best of humanity
an antithesis to our wars and other insanity
Proof positive we are all connect to the universal mind
and are conduits thereof from time to time
Like when playing craps I am praying for 7 come 11
and that one of my works makes it to-Poem Heaven
they reside eternally on could nine
Poems filled similes, metaphors and alliterations
penned by writers from over 186 nations
Crafted by greats and unknows
and in the future by AI and clones
With themes that represent the best of humanity
an antithesis to our wars and other insanity
Proof positive we are all connect to the universal mind
and are conduits thereof from time to time
Like when playing craps I am praying for 7 come 11
and that one of my works makes it to-Poem Heaven
#beauty
#freedom
#art
#culture
#morality
118 reads
3 Comments
Art_ellie7
Poem Published
25th May 2023 11:58am
25th May 2023 11:58am
Society
In the morning, you put on that pretty face,
And meet them all over, I meet them too.
Smiling is mutating, it should be recognised
As how humans express grief, hatred, depression...
People sit on the sides of the roads and along the kiosks
Like they are waiting for something, maybe someone, maybe death.
And they put on masks and talk about other people,
And how their lives ain't happy. Do you see it?
Do you see how pain and failure and poverty
Creates bonds and relationships? I believe
The bad side ain't that after all. Rumours...
And meet them all over, I meet them too.
Smiling is mutating, it should be recognised
As how humans express grief, hatred, depression...
People sit on the sides of the roads and along the kiosks
Like they are waiting for something, maybe someone, maybe death.
And they put on masks and talk about other people,
And how their lives ain't happy. Do you see it?
Do you see how pain and failure and poverty
Creates bonds and relationships? I believe
The bad side ain't that after all. Rumours...
#morality
29 reads
2 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
24th May 2023 7:06am
24th May 2023 7:06am
Armageddon
Seven bowls poured out
The first festers flesh flustered by a feast of boils
As holiness bears the blade
Drawn across the throat of those that speak with anti-anointing oils
As wrath proceeds in a procession of plagues
Bowl two, a red tide
Some parasite born of spiritual decay
When the beauty of creation has died
And moral degradation is the new way
Furthermore there is a third
As all water turns to blood
The thirst for violence quenched
Choking on the rot of their own flood
No penances made, onto number four ...
The first festers flesh flustered by a feast of boils
As holiness bears the blade
Drawn across the throat of those that speak with anti-anointing oils
As wrath proceeds in a procession of plagues
Bowl two, a red tide
Some parasite born of spiritual decay
When the beauty of creation has died
And moral degradation is the new way
Furthermore there is a third
As all water turns to blood
The thirst for violence quenched
Choking on the rot of their own flood
No penances made, onto number four ...
#God
#Christian
#faith
#apocalypse
#morality
112 reads
0 Comments
ThePoet632
CrossWords
CrossWords
Poem Published
18th May 2023 9:19am
18th May 2023 9:19am
Mystical Word
m a man of dust and water
i live between sea and shore
i face waves as they spatter
and keep the earth in my core
i am a Mediterranean stroller
i saw the Greeks built their dome
and the Romans strong conquerors
destroyed thick and thin in Rome
haunted by aching Natures fever
i roam hills, watch mountainscapes
with morning rush into deep forest
...
i live between sea and shore
i face waves as they spatter
and keep the earth in my core
i am a Mediterranean stroller
i saw the Greeks built their dome
and the Romans strong conquerors
destroyed thick and thin in Rome
haunted by aching Natures fever
i roam hills, watch mountainscapes
with morning rush into deep forest
...
#religion
#faith
#philosophical
#morality
#tradition
67 reads
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ThePoet632
CrossWords
CrossWords
Poem Published
14th May 2023 8:33pm
14th May 2023 8:33pm
Nature, Earth and poetry
Nature, Earth and poetry
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora, probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora, when they fake...
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora, probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora, when they fake...
#religion
#faith
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#morality
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Auraofblack
James Burns
James Burns
Poem Published
14th May 2023 9:41am
14th May 2023 9:41am
Maya & Fate
You're not captain of your own ship when life's drifting upon the tide.
You can't claim free will when everything you were conditioned to be, was base amplified.
Mastery of our mind can be elusive, distracted by lifes sordid fatalistic play.
Feel good vibes are most sought-after before we get an individual lottery-like Doomsday.
No one really knows the answers, what awaits us in eternal sleep.
If our actions here determine there, can we be intent on going that deep?
We're probably the food, lured by a false light existing in...
You can't claim free will when everything you were conditioned to be, was base amplified.
Mastery of our mind can be elusive, distracted by lifes sordid fatalistic play.
Feel good vibes are most sought-after before we get an individual lottery-like Doomsday.
No one really knows the answers, what awaits us in eternal sleep.
If our actions here determine there, can we be intent on going that deep?
We're probably the food, lured by a false light existing in...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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michaelslove2
Poem Published
13th May 2023 8:34am
13th May 2023 8:34am
Humanity's Pawn
Humanity's Pawn
The dust continues to collect more and more in Humanity's Pawn.
Morals and values placed high on a shelf out of reach,
out of sight with each year bringing another layer of dust.
They have no place in today's society.
No value.
And so the eternal shop-keep with his graying hair
placed them on that shelf so high becoming their forever home.
Perhaps someday forever will be sliced.
Perhaps not.
We can hope so.
The eternal shop-keep hopes so.
We like to think so anyway.
Maybe...
The dust continues to collect more and more in Humanity's Pawn.
Morals and values placed high on a shelf out of reach,
out of sight with each year bringing another layer of dust.
They have no place in today's society.
No value.
And so the eternal shop-keep with his graying hair
placed them on that shelf so high becoming their forever home.
Perhaps someday forever will be sliced.
Perhaps not.
We can hope so.
The eternal shop-keep hopes so.
We like to think so anyway.
Maybe...
#greed
#ignorance
#suffering
#culture
#morality
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michaelslove2
Poem Published
8th May 2023 7:37am
8th May 2023 7:37am
Becoming Man (Were-Man)
Becoming Man
(Were-Man)
Running.
The wolf is running.
Night is turning into day.
It runs on all fours
through the thick brush.
Running,
never really knowing why.
There is no use running.
Howling!
Crying to the fading night.
It is slipping away again!
It can feel the process begin.
It does not want to become this monster!
Snarling becoming coherent.
Changing
Growing
Standing!
It was running.
Now you run ...
(Were-Man)
Running.
The wolf is running.
Night is turning into day.
It runs on all fours
through the thick brush.
Running,
never really knowing why.
There is no use running.
Howling!
Crying to the fading night.
It is slipping away again!
It can feel the process begin.
It does not want to become this monster!
Snarling becoming coherent.
Changing
Growing
Standing!
It was running.
Now you run ...
#violence
#nature
#ignorance
#culture
#morality
56 reads
2 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
7th May 2023 5:12pm
7th May 2023 5:12pm
Blame
Why should I be shamed
for choosing what my senses said
convincingly
was something full of light
but then was afterward
revealed by cunning devils
and their kin
to be a damning sin?
The only person who’s to blame
for this entrapmenting
is God.
For He created man
without endowing him
with His omnisciency,
and made him from the start
as creaturely and weak,
unable, absent grace,
and even then,
to know with...
for choosing what my senses said
convincingly
was something full of light
but then was afterward
revealed by cunning devils
and their kin
to be a damning sin?
The only person who’s to blame
for this entrapmenting
is God.
For He created man
without endowing him
with His omnisciency,
and made him from the start
as creaturely and weak,
unable, absent grace,
and even then,
to know with...
#morality
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0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
4th May 2023 2:54am
4th May 2023 2:54am
America
infant turns his
head and chokes
curdled milk from
mother's leathered
breast
all tits become
deserts sooner
or later
as old cars and
trucks pine for
Mr Ford
head and chokes
curdled milk from
mother's leathered
breast
all tits become
deserts sooner
or later
as old cars and
trucks pine for
Mr Ford
#shadows
#hypocrisy
#morality
#poverty
#deception
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0 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
29th Apr 2023 7:48am
29th Apr 2023 7:48am
Identity Theft
Written into the end from the beginning of all things
More reasonable faiths than doubts these days
All evidence contrary to contrary
Unpopular beliefs are easy targets for lovers of convenience
Censorship is the all new tyranny
My hope is your trauma
Your freedom is captivity
You can’t see the chains for what they are when you wear them like a fashion statement
Abusing graces of the breath in our lungs
We take our time like it’s ours
Lended lives to invest in something more
Our pulses are failing markets in the grand...
More reasonable faiths than doubts these days
All evidence contrary to contrary
Unpopular beliefs are easy targets for lovers of convenience
Censorship is the all new tyranny
My hope is your trauma
Your freedom is captivity
You can’t see the chains for what they are when you wear them like a fashion statement
Abusing graces of the breath in our lungs
We take our time like it’s ours
Lended lives to invest in something more
Our pulses are failing markets in the grand...
#corruption
#identity
#politics
#morality
#NaPoWriMo2023
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