Poems About Morality Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about morality seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Rory
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 2:31pm
14th Apr 2024 2:31pm
Philosophy in de French quarters
I don't feel shame or remorse.
We know life ain't fair and cruel.
Gotta find your own course.
Or you get left like a fool.
So if one is down dats on you.
I'm not gonna cry at my failure.
I'll just get back up do wat I do.
I'm gonna lead my life no matter what they tell me
We know life ain't fair and cruel.
Gotta find your own course.
Or you get left like a fool.
So if one is down dats on you.
I'm not gonna cry at my failure.
I'll just get back up do wat I do.
I'm gonna lead my life no matter what they tell me
#LifeGoals
#freedom
#culture #morality
#culture #morality
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 5:14am
14th Apr 2024 5:14am
Double Cross
Disturb my fragile sensibility
Disrupt the expectations of my wanting
When I chase temporal things to a fault
I fall pray in my humility to the Holy Ghost haunting
Answering the warning signs with replies of faith imbued by the call
What if there is something to it
When we dismiss the claims for broken records on repeat
Discerning truth amid the chaos of another’s source of vain conceit
The word is alive and I’m dead to rights
When I live subject to something divine
Shadows cast of unseen lights
The end doesn’t answer to my...
Disrupt the expectations of my wanting
When I chase temporal things to a fault
I fall pray in my humility to the Holy Ghost haunting
Answering the warning signs with replies of faith imbued by the call
What if there is something to it
When we dismiss the claims for broken records on repeat
Discerning truth amid the chaos of another’s source of vain conceit
The word is alive and I’m dead to rights
When I live subject to something divine
Shadows cast of unseen lights
The end doesn’t answer to my...
#religion
#God
#Christian
#faith
#morality
162 reads
2 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 8:37am
13th Apr 2024 8:37am
Crusader
Speak your narrative
Following in patterns of sensationalized sign language
Make it say what you want it to
When everybody’s sky is falling
Seasons of our relative apocalyptic delusions
I won’t doubt a wonder but I’ll call it what it is
Stretch the facts into the mold of what you want to see
What speaks to you may not say a word to me
But it’s “your truth”, it’s your cypher, it’s your “prophecy”
Loose translations, contorted interpretations
Twist the words just right to harbor the impact
Looking for incidental events ...
Following in patterns of sensationalized sign language
Make it say what you want it to
When everybody’s sky is falling
Seasons of our relative apocalyptic delusions
I won’t doubt a wonder but I’ll call it what it is
Stretch the facts into the mold of what you want to see
What speaks to you may not say a word to me
But it’s “your truth”, it’s your cypher, it’s your “prophecy”
Loose translations, contorted interpretations
Twist the words just right to harbor the impact
Looking for incidental events ...
#corruption
#religion
#faith
#apocalypse
#morality
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poeticdelight
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 1:23pm
12th Apr 2024 1:23pm
Wise Words From The Wild
Wise Words From The Wild
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
#religion
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
54 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 11:38pm
8th Apr 2024 11:38pm
In The Crossroads
Between the pines, the pathway ascends
The trail of sheep, goats and grazing bands
They pass, lowering heads, no bleat heard
Guided by strict orders, by stark shepherds
I watched the sheep cortege as it did quietly glide
Into the vast pastures, in such a flowing smooth tide
And so i hide among the trees, a watchful eye
They obey the inner feel onto whereon they lie
Still they are sheep, goats and rams,a clique
Taken blissfully or driven blindly, unto the hills
They know the route they must always take ...
The trail of sheep, goats and grazing bands
They pass, lowering heads, no bleat heard
Guided by strict orders, by stark shepherds
I watched the sheep cortege as it did quietly glide
Into the vast pastures, in such a flowing smooth tide
And so i hide among the trees, a watchful eye
They obey the inner feel onto whereon they lie
Still they are sheep, goats and rams,a clique
Taken blissfully or driven blindly, unto the hills
They know the route they must always take ...
#religion
#spiritual
#redemption
#philosophical
#morality
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4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 6:27pm
7th Apr 2024 6:27pm
Being Good Humans
Wisdom
Like pillars of humanity and understanding
Wisdom is a guiding light in a life
We see the world, we see the truth
Able to discern what is wrong and what is right
Courage
Like a guardian at the gate of our minds
Courage stands strong ready to defend
With inner strength and steady determination
The heart’s fortress will be resilient
Justice
Like a moral compass showing us true north
We’ll learn the principles of fairness and rightness
Allowing us to make decisions in virtue and equity
Falling in alignment...
Like pillars of humanity and understanding
Wisdom is a guiding light in a life
We see the world, we see the truth
Able to discern what is wrong and what is right
Courage
Like a guardian at the gate of our minds
Courage stands strong ready to defend
With inner strength and steady determination
The heart’s fortress will be resilient
Justice
Like a moral compass showing us true north
We’ll learn the principles of fairness and rightness
Allowing us to make decisions in virtue and equity
Falling in alignment...
#courage
#philosophical
#morality
#wisdom
#NaPoWriMo2024
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3 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 1:08pm
6th Apr 2024 1:08pm
Sacrament of the Present
Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing,
there is a field. I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about. Rumi
As she accepted the sacrament of the present moment,
she embraced darkness and light, life, and death.
As her body and spirit was joined to another,
she found the wisdom of 'both/and' over 'either/or.'
She prayed silently, Let me be receptive to all that is.
And then, with the gentle pulsing of her hips in repeated acts of
giving and receiving, she...
there is a field. I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about. Rumi
As she accepted the sacrament of the present moment,
she embraced darkness and light, life, and death.
As her body and spirit was joined to another,
she found the wisdom of 'both/and' over 'either/or.'
She prayed silently, Let me be receptive to all that is.
And then, with the gentle pulsing of her hips in repeated acts of
giving and receiving, she...
#love
#erotic
#morality
104 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 3:47am
6th Apr 2024 3:47am
Choose Your Words...Carefully
There is power in words and the way we choose to respond
Pausing
Thinking in those split seconds knowing that what we say next
Will have weight…
…and consequence
- Wisdom
- Courage
- Justice
- Temperance
These serve as guiding stars as we traverse
Through life in the universe
Like light illuminating the path we’re on
Directing us to true north
Using the intelligence of the wise
The bravery of the courageous
The fairness of the righteous
And the self-control of those seeking truth ...
Pausing
Thinking in those split seconds knowing that what we say next
Will have weight…
…and consequence
- Wisdom
- Courage
- Justice
- Temperance
These serve as guiding stars as we traverse
Through life in the universe
Like light illuminating the path we’re on
Directing us to true north
Using the intelligence of the wise
The bravery of the courageous
The fairness of the righteous
And the self-control of those seeking truth ...
#identity
#philosophical
#morality #NaPoWriMo2024
#morality #NaPoWriMo2024
69 reads
3 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 1:45am
6th Apr 2024 1:45am
Prayer of Confession
Last night, my lips spoke the
pleasing words of deceit to a
man who was not my husband.
I have strayed from the path of fidelity,
seeking sexual gratification in
the arms of a stranger.
As my bed linens hold the stains of a man's lust,
my feeble words of confession hold the stain of hypocrisy.
Surely, there can be no mercy for me.
pleasing words of deceit to a
man who was not my husband.
I have strayed from the path of fidelity,
seeking sexual gratification in
the arms of a stranger.
As my bed linens hold the stains of a man's lust,
my feeble words of confession hold the stain of hypocrisy.
Surely, there can be no mercy for me.
#sex
#betrayal
#morality #prayer
#morality #prayer
137 reads
4 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 5:16am
2nd Apr 2024 5:16am
The New Hate
Versed against desire
What words in motion to sate the thirst for fire
Crucifixion before resurrection
The cross is not just an escapists will to survive
Dying to self is the means by which we truly come alive
The lost art of sacrifice
It’s like we’re falling in every way but love
Pulled apart by the divided grips of gravity
Starving and feeding
The scarcity of hope is the feast of our depravity
It’s not a question of the truth Your heart will tell
But the replies of bloodthirsty compatibility or the unrequited hell
...
What words in motion to sate the thirst for fire
Crucifixion before resurrection
The cross is not just an escapists will to survive
Dying to self is the means by which we truly come alive
The lost art of sacrifice
It’s like we’re falling in every way but love
Pulled apart by the divided grips of gravity
Starving and feeding
The scarcity of hope is the feast of our depravity
It’s not a question of the truth Your heart will tell
But the replies of bloodthirsty compatibility or the unrequited hell
...
#corruption
#politics
#spiritual
#morality
#rebellion
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
31st Mar 2024 3:41am
31st Mar 2024 3:41am
BLACK FANGS
B. L. A. C. K. F. A. N. G. S.
L. E. S. A. N. A. S. O. R. O.
O. F. N. O. T. U. A. C.
O. T. A. N. W. A. A. R. S. I.
D. O. N. I. I. L. V. I. P. E.
T. V. G. B. N. I. I. S. I. T.
H. E. E. A. G. S. D. H. N. Y.
I. R. L. L. T. E. G.
R. S. I. K. I. A. D. S.
S. L. S. N. C. S. G. U.
T. U. A. T. O. S. N. R. C.
Y. C. N. I. W. F. A. A. I. C. ...
L. E. S. A. N. A. S. O. R. O.
O. F. N. O. T. U. A. C.
O. T. A. N. W. A. A. R. S. I.
D. O. N. I. I. L. V. I. P. E.
T. V. G. B. N. I. I. S. I. T.
H. E. E. A. G. S. D. H. N. Y.
I. R. L. L. T. E. G.
R. S. I. K. I. A. D. S.
S. L. S. N. C. S. G. U.
T. U. A. T. O. S. N. R. C.
Y. C. N. I. W. F. A. A. I. C. ...
#morality
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 2:09pm
21st Mar 2024 2:09pm
MAGA
They've got a trigger finger itch
the likes of which you ought believe
are the first person shooter glitch
installed since Adam first beat Eve
and bruised that finger in the act
but blamed it all on the lady
since testosterone negates fact
and proceeds to call it shady.
Yet some of us are poison free
and see abuse through neutral eyes,
to mark susceptibility,
which bullies see as their next prize,
(in a one on one conspectus)...
but when meek numbers grow in size
those fuckers will respect us,
and all the...
the likes of which you ought believe
are the first person shooter glitch
installed since Adam first beat Eve
and bruised that finger in the act
but blamed it all on the lady
since testosterone negates fact
and proceeds to call it shady.
Yet some of us are poison free
and see abuse through neutral eyes,
to mark susceptibility,
which bullies see as their next prize,
(in a one on one conspectus)...
but when meek numbers grow in size
those fuckers will respect us,
and all the...
#politics
#PopCulture
#morality #responsibility
#morality #responsibility
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3 Comments
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