Poems About Morality Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about morality seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 5:57pm
15th Apr 2025 5:57pm
Univocalic (O)
Downtown Toronto,
shop front on dodgy block hosts groovy show.
How jolly!
Forty boho hobos, long of tooth,
toot obos, hoot horns,
clonk gongs, bop bongos.
Two bozos on obos of wood do solos—
two old boys on form!
Dozy hobos forgot words to songs
or how to hold gongs.
Horns now honk. OW!
How folky.
Boozy old hobo on bongos looks lost.
Bozo who owns dowdy wool hoody
flogs lots of goods
(CDs, on mono only - no promo!).
Now, no stock.
Odd-socks...
shop front on dodgy block hosts groovy show.
How jolly!
Forty boho hobos, long of tooth,
toot obos, hoot horns,
clonk gongs, bop bongos.
Two bozos on obos of wood do solos—
two old boys on form!
Dozy hobos forgot words to songs
or how to hold gongs.
Horns now honk. OW!
How folky.
Boozy old hobo on bongos looks lost.
Bozo who owns dowdy wool hoody
flogs lots of goods
(CDs, on mono only - no promo!).
Now, no stock.
Odd-socks...
#morality
#music
74 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 5:37pm
13th Apr 2025 5:37pm
Arcturus Boötes
I can hear their voices ringing in my ear
The tone
Stern and loving
But always with wisdom
Even if I didn’t heed to it
I could see the consequences
Like tidal waves coming to sweep me away
Oh, I paid the price
For the several times I didn’t listen to their advice
But also saved
For the many bullets I dodged
When I took their counsel to heart
When I saw how hard life had been
For my grandmother and mother
Their light looks like Arcturus up in the sky
Follow the Big Dipper as it arcs
No matter how lost...
The tone
Stern and loving
But always with wisdom
Even if I didn’t heed to it
I could see the consequences
Like tidal waves coming to sweep me away
Oh, I paid the price
For the several times I didn’t listen to their advice
But also saved
For the many bullets I dodged
When I took their counsel to heart
When I saw how hard life had been
For my grandmother and mother
Their light looks like Arcturus up in the sky
Follow the Big Dipper as it arcs
No matter how lost...
#morality
#mother
#stars
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
82 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 6:28pm
29th Mar 2025 6:28pm
I wonder..
Will anyone ask my daughter,
If she's happy?
Knowing all people do,
Is harrass me.
You cannot trust a government,
To protect children.
When they outwardly involve the type of people,
That would kill them.
It amazes me, someone would try to convince me,
That spying and releases porn of me,
Is something I should just let be.
That all the people involved,
Should get away for free.
My daughter would probably prefer money,
Rather than friendship with beasts.
She needs her...
If she's happy?
Knowing all people do,
Is harrass me.
You cannot trust a government,
To protect children.
When they outwardly involve the type of people,
That would kill them.
It amazes me, someone would try to convince me,
That spying and releases porn of me,
Is something I should just let be.
That all the people involved,
Should get away for free.
My daughter would probably prefer money,
Rather than friendship with beasts.
She needs her...
#freedom
#honesty
#morality #porn
#morality #porn
153 reads
9 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 11:40am
28th Mar 2025 11:40am
The Bells of Notre Dame
Can you hear the church bells ringing?
I put my hands up high,
And keep singing.
I turn my phone off,
And they keep peeking.
My daughter can finally learn,
What "hide and seek" means.
I let her know the government's secrets.
I let her know that they don't give a shit.
She goes to church, surrounded by people,
That know her worth and won't demean her.
The bells are ringing and light bulbs are gleaming.
Time to exorcise out all the demons.
The love is lost in this world tour. ...
I put my hands up high,
And keep singing.
I turn my phone off,
And they keep peeking.
My daughter can finally learn,
What "hide and seek" means.
I let her know the government's secrets.
I let her know that they don't give a shit.
She goes to church, surrounded by people,
That know her worth and won't demean her.
The bells are ringing and light bulbs are gleaming.
Time to exorcise out all the demons.
The love is lost in this world tour. ...
#morality
103 reads
7 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
Co-Creators
I kneel before him in prayer, caught in a whirlwind of
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
#God
#morality
#religion #sex
#religion #sex
199 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 8:16pm
8th Mar 2025 8:16pm
all war all of the time
what's the difference
between politics and war?
with politics nobody
keeps a body count
between politics and war?
with politics nobody
keeps a body count
#morality
120 reads
6 Comments
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:43pm
5th Mar 2025 1:43pm
A Modest Return
The dupe prefers a midnight shade to snare a single hide,
Drafts the freely given dark for ends you long denied.
Doesn’t need your genuflection, yet demands your sole attention,
Waited long to seize your mind, your behaviour modified.
Stumble if you want to, but I’ve seen it overtake you,
Now you forfeit what was once true,
For a modest return.
Scriptoriums in dusty hills announce the new diversion,
The flicker show grants its favours to the picture-perfect person,
Flung afar from every platform, deft manoeuvres make us conform,
We can...
Drafts the freely given dark for ends you long denied.
Doesn’t need your genuflection, yet demands your sole attention,
Waited long to seize your mind, your behaviour modified.
Stumble if you want to, but I’ve seen it overtake you,
Now you forfeit what was once true,
For a modest return.
Scriptoriums in dusty hills announce the new diversion,
The flicker show grants its favours to the picture-perfect person,
Flung afar from every platform, deft manoeuvres make us conform,
We can...
#culture
#identity
#morality
#politics
#responsibility
76 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 8:36pm
1st Mar 2025 8:36pm
Liabilities
Bill Burr has billionaires dead to rights, because of eminent domain logic.
Is not justifiable homicide, justifiable, because of the ascertained risk to the community?
-The Midnight Sonneteer
“The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one.”
-Surak of Vulcan
Is not justifiable homicide, justifiable, because of the ascertained risk to the community?
-The Midnight Sonneteer
“The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one.”
-Surak of Vulcan
#culture
#morality
#politics #responsibility
#politics #responsibility
149 reads
18 Comments
Knotshaker
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 2:00pm
1st Mar 2025 2:00pm
Walls
Look at these walls. They’re everywhere decreed.
Inside me. Inside you. Between us too.
‘tween my neighbors and me, walls intercede.
Houses of walls, fences blocking the view.
South at the border they build chunks of walls.
Hate chunks and fear chunks materialized
Steely expressions of bigoted drawls.
Essence of lynch mobs surrealialized.
A dike is a wall. It holds back the sea
Minds can hold walls that don’t need installing.
Billionaire dikes holding back you and me.
They mask the good; they hide the appalling.
...
Inside me. Inside you. Between us too.
‘tween my neighbors and me, walls intercede.
Houses of walls, fences blocking the view.
South at the border they build chunks of walls.
Hate chunks and fear chunks materialized
Steely expressions of bigoted drawls.
Essence of lynch mobs surrealialized.
A dike is a wall. It holds back the sea
Minds can hold walls that don’t need installing.
Billionaire dikes holding back you and me.
They mask the good; they hide the appalling.
...
#identity
#morality
#politics
#responsibility
#tradition
111 reads
2 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 8:17pm
24th Feb 2025 8:17pm
Mortal Sin
The suicides vainly scream
in the depths of hell
to shut ears in the heavens.
in the depths of hell
to shut ears in the heavens.
#morality
#religion
103 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 2:41pm
21st Feb 2025 2:41pm
History
As I woke, my eyes came to rest
on my lover’s penis lying limp and at ease.
I thought of its history with this man’s life.
They’d been together 34 years and he’d
handled it daily from the time his hands
began to explore his body.
It had known many women and now me as well.
I wondered what they were like,
what pleasure had they found in Shawn
as he moved through his youth and then adulthood.
In the morning light, his penis was a dark shadow,
reminding me of the first time
I was confronted with my father’s ...
on my lover’s penis lying limp and at ease.
I thought of its history with this man’s life.
They’d been together 34 years and he’d
handled it daily from the time his hands
began to explore his body.
It had known many women and now me as well.
I wondered what they were like,
what pleasure had they found in Shawn
as he moved through his youth and then adulthood.
In the morning light, his penis was a dark shadow,
reminding me of the first time
I was confronted with my father’s ...
#childhood
#father
#morality #sex
#morality #sex
255 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 1:11am
18th Feb 2025 1:11am
karmic wheel
unyielding pain has me meditating, entering an altered state
my third eye blinks open and I see the shadow world around me
many denizens balancing the Karmic wheel
my heart is broken and I wonder why
inquiring, the denizens only stop for moment, to answer my question
it you heart is to break it will be broken, because it is ordered
your understanding of this powerful emotion is in it's infancy
please consider your actions in regards to you self only
the wheel will remain balanced
then they point out over a desert city
where...
my third eye blinks open and I see the shadow world around me
many denizens balancing the Karmic wheel
my heart is broken and I wonder why
inquiring, the denizens only stop for moment, to answer my question
it you heart is to break it will be broken, because it is ordered
your understanding of this powerful emotion is in it's infancy
please consider your actions in regards to you self only
the wheel will remain balanced
then they point out over a desert city
where...
#karma
#kindness
#love
#morality
#spiritual
162 reads
8 Comments
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