Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 4:38am
12th Apr 2024 4:38am
Metrology Of Life
Why measure one's success
by their financial solvency?
As age overtakes me
I've had a profound epiphany
That true happiness
is not found
in things pecuniary
but free to everybody
The sky's not blue and sunny, and gentle breezes do not caress
only for those with money
A smile, a touch, a kiss, a hug, a tender word, a bedtime song
Are slices of joy everlasting
with love given gratis
to the poor, the rich, and those in between
In the end what really counts
Is what we've given
how we've got along
Not what's in ...
by their financial solvency?
As age overtakes me
I've had a profound epiphany
That true happiness
is not found
in things pecuniary
but free to everybody
The sky's not blue and sunny, and gentle breezes do not caress
only for those with money
A smile, a touch, a kiss, a hug, a tender word, a bedtime song
Are slices of joy everlasting
with love given gratis
to the poor, the rich, and those in between
In the end what really counts
Is what we've given
how we've got along
Not what's in ...
#happiness
#nature
#money #LifeGoals
#money #LifeGoals
119 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 6:27pm
5th Apr 2024 6:27pm
Free Money
I found a wallet
I ignored all credentials
Up 300 bucks
Feeling good right now
Yeah I know I'm a scumbag
You would do the same
I ignored all credentials
Up 300 bucks
Feeling good right now
Yeah I know I'm a scumbag
You would do the same
#happiness
#money
#haiku
116 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 10:19pm
26th Mar 2024 10:19pm
Money Damages Love
He wants mom to die
Inheritance will be grand
Greed has made him vile
Inheritance will be grand
Greed has made him vile
#mother
#family
#money
#haiku
#greed
139 reads
7 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
16th Mar 2024 11:20am
16th Mar 2024 11:20am
Letter of Thanks to David
Dear David,
I wanted to express my deepest gratitude for your ongoing support throughout my pregnancy. Your generous financial contributions have made a significant difference and have alleviated so much of the stress that comes with preparing for the arrival of our baby.
While I understand that our relationship had unintended consequences, I am genuinely thankful for the memories we share, particularly of that fateful night. I do regret the strain it placed on your marriage, and I hope that with time, wounds will heal.
On a brighter note, I am incredibly...
I wanted to express my deepest gratitude for your ongoing support throughout my pregnancy. Your generous financial contributions have made a significant difference and have alleviated so much of the stress that comes with preparing for the arrival of our baby.
While I understand that our relationship had unintended consequences, I am genuinely thankful for the memories we share, particularly of that fateful night. I do regret the strain it placed on your marriage, and I hope that with time, wounds will heal.
On a brighter note, I am incredibly...
#money
#gratitude
#pregnancy
185 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Mar 2024 10:57am
16th Mar 2024 10:57am
Hungry Dopes
A pizza delivery man was beaten to death a few towns over where I live 3 years ago. Three teenage geniuses who decided this was the way to get some free food. They took all of the delivery man's pizza, but left the $500 that was in the man's pocket!
#violence
#death
#money
#food
#ignorance
120 reads
6 Comments
GreaterPeril
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 9:56pm
8th Mar 2024 9:56pm
work no. 3
i abandoned all hope today
standing in front of the time clock
watched the glimmer drain
from my baby blue bloodshots
in the spiders web of software
honeyed flies they caught there
skipped lunch for stockholder cruises
i won't answer phones anymore
carpal tunnel, finger tip bruises
i'm running out of friends to ignore
standing in front of the time clock
watched the glimmer drain
from my baby blue bloodshots
in the spiders web of software
honeyed flies they caught there
skipped lunch for stockholder cruises
i won't answer phones anymore
carpal tunnel, finger tip bruises
i'm running out of friends to ignore
#depression
#money
#greed
115 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 2:28pm
22nd Feb 2024 2:28pm
Dial Portugal 1944
Under the cloak of neutrality,
Portugal, land of ancient navigators,
watched the world in calamity,
in the silence of their own fears.
Salazar, with his iron hand,
kept the war out the door,
but the echo of the conflict was sincere,
and in the gloom, hope was dead.
The Tagus reflected the moonlight
while spies danced in Lisbon.
War, a shadow that continues
in the story that memory sings.
Tungsten fueled the economy,
dark business in dark times.
Neutrality was a utopia
or a game between several...
Portugal, land of ancient navigators,
watched the world in calamity,
in the silence of their own fears.
Salazar, with his iron hand,
kept the war out the door,
but the echo of the conflict was sincere,
and in the gloom, hope was dead.
The Tagus reflected the moonlight
while spies danced in Lisbon.
War, a shadow that continues
in the story that memory sings.
Tungsten fueled the economy,
dark business in dark times.
Neutrality was a utopia
or a game between several...
#soldiers
#war
#money
#historical
#military
108 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
18th Feb 2024 7:17pm
18th Feb 2024 7:17pm
All Hotels Are Whorehouses
Some people would not object to the view that small hotels are brothels,
But if you say big hotels are whorehouses, many people would disagree with you.
Illicit sexual activities take place in all hotels, so they are all the same.
The size of the building makes no difference; neither does the owner’s prestige.
Single-storey hotels, inns, motels and guesthouses are small brothels.
And a resort hotel that resembles a skyscraper is nothing but a large whorehouse.
Tycoons who lack integrity profit greatly from sex by running hotels and sex shops, ...
But if you say big hotels are whorehouses, many people would disagree with you.
Illicit sexual activities take place in all hotels, so they are all the same.
The size of the building makes no difference; neither does the owner’s prestige.
Single-storey hotels, inns, motels and guesthouses are small brothels.
And a resort hotel that resembles a skyscraper is nothing but a large whorehouse.
Tycoons who lack integrity profit greatly from sex by running hotels and sex shops, ...
#sex
#money
#greed
#morality
#philosophical
130 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
16th Feb 2024 2:04am
16th Feb 2024 2:04am
paperbacks, before nineteen seventy one
in his jacket he discovered half a crown, got in a right 2/6d about it
doesn’t matter now, but back then it was the price of a penguin
doesn’t matter now, but back then it was the price of a penguin
#money
#PopCulture
120 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 1:28am
26th Jan 2024 1:28am
So-called Police Intelligence
The leaders of the police force claim that they have an intelligent organization,
But its evil-minded members have not demonstrated real intelligence.
There is no evidence whatsoever that police are truly intelligent people.
Unwise persons are not intelligent; it requires wisdom to be intelligent.
Police are generally arrogant persons, and they lack the ability to reason.
In fact, the police cannot have a sensible conversation with anybody.
The police regard having a conversation with someone as arguing.
Furthermore, they behave...
But its evil-minded members have not demonstrated real intelligence.
There is no evidence whatsoever that police are truly intelligent people.
Unwise persons are not intelligent; it requires wisdom to be intelligent.
Police are generally arrogant persons, and they lack the ability to reason.
In fact, the police cannot have a sensible conversation with anybody.
The police regard having a conversation with someone as arguing.
Furthermore, they behave...
#corruption
#politics
#evil
#money
#HumanRights
131 reads
0 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
31st Dec 2023 8:25am
31st Dec 2023 8:25am
'24's At The Front Door
I wanna erase the pain revolving around my cerebellum
Reflecting a time of peace like an antebellum
The serum, unlike red rum, is my creativity
Waving the white flag when writing poetry
Another year meets history as we're approaching 2024
Expeditiously escorting 2023 right outta the back door
I for sure don't want anymore of what '23 had to offer
Devising a plan for how I can add dollars to my coffer
I want my daughter and I to reestablish our bond
A bond that's floated away like lily pads in a pond
Want my marriage to...
Reflecting a time of peace like an antebellum
The serum, unlike red rum, is my creativity
Waving the white flag when writing poetry
Another year meets history as we're approaching 2024
Expeditiously escorting 2023 right outta the back door
I for sure don't want anymore of what '23 had to offer
Devising a plan for how I can add dollars to my coffer
I want my daughter and I to reestablish our bond
A bond that's floated away like lily pads in a pond
Want my marriage to...
#love
#peace
#money
#NewYear
#MentalHealth
272 reads
10 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
24th Dec 2023 4:41pm
24th Dec 2023 4:41pm
Career Changes and Life Changes
I've always been an independent real estate agent like my mom was before me. Because of my need for stability and benefits I went with a larger company starting last June. In July, I posed for this photo with other new real estate agents.
The sweet woman in the middle is Rebecca. She had the most sales for one month for a new agent and has acted like a mentor for me. I now sell properties all over the Dallas area. It was this company's August training that changed the course of my life. The company has been good to me and let me work flexible hours while I'm pregnant.
The sweet woman in the middle is Rebecca. She had the most sales for one month for a new agent and has acted like a mentor for me. I now sell properties all over the Dallas area. It was this company's August training that changed the course of my life. The company has been good to me and let me work flexible hours while I'm pregnant.
#money
#pregnancy
#job
225 reads
3 Comments
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