Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 00:06am
9th Apr 2025 00:06am
behind the shop counter intuitive ..
will you take a cheque
you kidding old timer
strictly cash or card
happy birthday
you kidding old timer
strictly cash or card
happy birthday
#aging
#money
72 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 10:44am
4th Apr 2025 10:44am
So True
I'm a line of credit,
With no real value.
I open an account,
So I can devalue.
This fiat money,
Holds nothing true.
Just harassment and entrapment,
And lawsuits.
One day I'll wake up,
And subdue you.
You're my true currency,
And I pursue you.
With no real value.
I open an account,
So I can devalue.
This fiat money,
Holds nothing true.
Just harassment and entrapment,
And lawsuits.
One day I'll wake up,
And subdue you.
You're my true currency,
And I pursue you.
#greed
#money
#monsters
68 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 1:36am
3rd Apr 2025 1:36am
Vegan to her is Ketchup
Perfection sucks
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
#CharlesBukowski
#confessional
#identity
#money
#porn
117 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 11:46am
4th Mar 2025 11:46am
Wake The f**k Up!
This democracy is so full of hypocrisy
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#money
#politics
#rebellion
169 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
Disguised Dictatorship
Reign of corruption
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#money
#politics
120 reads
12 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 10:06pm
23rd Feb 2025 10:06pm
MONEY
MONEY
“Wishy-Washy” leafy green
Your deceptive lies are unforeseen
With your haughtiness of arrogance
You stand alongside God in attracting elegance.
Blinding the essence of life and reality of death
Fatally consuming every stride of one’s very breath
Root of pride – Root of lies
For you – everyone complies!
Even a saint may beam a thief
As you betray all to a life of grief!
When they become your captive prey
Yet, no one shuns you far away
“Wishy-Washy” faded green
Your warmth pricks...
“Wishy-Washy” leafy green
Your deceptive lies are unforeseen
With your haughtiness of arrogance
You stand alongside God in attracting elegance.
Blinding the essence of life and reality of death
Fatally consuming every stride of one’s very breath
Root of pride – Root of lies
For you – everyone complies!
Even a saint may beam a thief
As you betray all to a life of grief!
When they become your captive prey
Yet, no one shuns you far away
“Wishy-Washy” faded green
Your warmth pricks...
#consumerism
#money
3 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 00:12am
3rd Feb 2025 00:12am
The Do's & Don't's of Dating
Money for sex
Dinner for sex
Why? Why? Why? Why?
If I didn't pay would I still get laid?
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Here is a token of my affection
Why? Why? Why? Why?
Down on your knees and show your appreciation
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Do you pay for your friends?
Do you pay for your date?
Well, whoever will fuck
Will get a free plate
Dating is prostitution
The dating
Keep waiting
and masturbating
Dinner for sex
Why? Why? Why? Why?
If I didn't pay would I still get laid?
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Here is a token of my affection
Why? Why? Why? Why?
Down on your knees and show your appreciation
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Do you pay for your friends?
Do you pay for your date?
Well, whoever will fuck
Will get a free plate
Dating is prostitution
The dating
Keep waiting
and masturbating
#dating
#money
#sex
132 reads
6 Comments
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 9:29pm
31st Jan 2025 9:29pm
Villanelle Nr.25 — Gaza Stripped
In a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
sea-view apartments will slowly arise
owned by the wealthy…, and ever so hip
Palestinian blood? Merely a blip
of history’s shit with the media lies
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
And then will arrive a cruise-liner-ship
spilling its tourists and drug-lords and spies
all posing as wealthy, dressed ever so hip
The past will be screwed through a tightened lip
which views as taboo the carnage and cries
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
The vile God of...
sea-view apartments will slowly arise
owned by the wealthy…, and ever so hip
Palestinian blood? Merely a blip
of history’s shit with the media lies
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
And then will arrive a cruise-liner-ship
spilling its tourists and drug-lords and spies
all posing as wealthy, dressed ever so hip
The past will be screwed through a tightened lip
which views as taboo the carnage and cries
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
The vile God of...
#military
#money
#morality
#villanelle
#war
139 reads
8 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:18pm
18th Jan 2025 3:18pm
$20 Frankie
Frankie is a gurl...
...a wannabe girl...
...very passable!
Without the makeup...
...and very close shave...
...and, of course the fake boobs...
Frankie looks like Elliot Page.
Made up...he looks like Ellen Page!
That's where he got the idea!
Ellen transitioned to Elliot.
Frankie just fakes it!
Convincingly well!
He turns tricks in the alley..
...outside my window...
...and in cars cruising here!
He likes guys!
He loves $$$
Blowjobs only!
Special panties tuck... ...
...a wannabe girl...
...very passable!
Without the makeup...
...and very close shave...
...and, of course the fake boobs...
Frankie looks like Elliot Page.
Made up...he looks like Ellen Page!
That's where he got the idea!
Ellen transitioned to Elliot.
Frankie just fakes it!
Convincingly well!
He turns tricks in the alley..
...outside my window...
...and in cars cruising here!
He likes guys!
He loves $$$
Blowjobs only!
Special panties tuck... ...
#city
#dirty
#money #sex
#money #sex
108 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
Haters of the Truth
You commend the poet with flattery when you agree with what he writes,
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
#anger
#hate
#money
#murder
#racism
116 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
Weh Unu Tink Bout Dis?
(Patois)
Peeple oo cyarry news pah addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A unu skill mek unu get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyah wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey unu cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill unu wid wok.
Nuff a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ah bad mine.
Unu wah fi win big mony frah adda peeple ah live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pah rieshawse ah Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony an tek gud kier...
Peeple oo cyarry news pah addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A unu skill mek unu get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyah wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey unu cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill unu wid wok.
Nuff a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ah bad mine.
Unu wah fi win big mony frah adda peeple ah live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pah rieshawse ah Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony an tek gud kier...
#Christian
#greed
#job
#marijuana
#money
82 reads
0 Comments
Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 5:11am
26th Dec 2024 5:11am
Rant 2.0
I always used to watch youtube and stuff everytime I do something. But the thing is I started questioning everything on YouTube suggestions and I uncovered the blindsided part of YouTube for myself. The entertainment videos? Views and likes in millions. The educational lectures and full serious from even prestigious universities like MIT, yale, Columbia stays at max 900 views. It's quite embarrassing honestly. The rich, absurd vultures getting famous for the most insane things is honesty the worst thing I've ever seen.
We are the clowns of a circus and we choose to be so even after...
We are the clowns of a circus and we choose to be so even after...
#consumerism
#money
78 reads
2 Comments
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