Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Abracadabra
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 6:43pm
22nd Aug 2024 6:43pm
*Diamond in the Shadows*
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Everyone's a gambler
for money or love
It's a sin
like nobody knows....
Everyone's a gambler
for money or love
It's a sin
like nobody knows....
#betrayal
#love
#money #unicorns
#money #unicorns
123 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Aug 2024 9:10pm
8th Aug 2024 9:10pm
My Final Words...To You
To you my love,
By the time you read this letter, I will be passed on
Please don't cry.
I know how much you loved me & I loved you.
The pressure from my wife and "The Boss" was getting the best of me.
I know she was going to find out everything about me and all of my secrets.
I owed "The Boss" over $30,000.00
He was out to kill me.
It was either me serving prison time, or being beat and murdered by him or me committing suicide.
Obviously I went with the latter.
No one can or will trace me to you.
No one knew...
By the time you read this letter, I will be passed on
Please don't cry.
I know how much you loved me & I loved you.
The pressure from my wife and "The Boss" was getting the best of me.
I know she was going to find out everything about me and all of my secrets.
I owed "The Boss" over $30,000.00
He was out to kill me.
It was either me serving prison time, or being beat and murdered by him or me committing suicide.
Obviously I went with the latter.
No one can or will trace me to you.
No one knew...
#betrayal
#deception
#lover
#money
#wife
94 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 11:11am
7th Aug 2024 11:11am
Wake Up World!
Your head is being cemented in my sand
Pay attention, I'm not gonna repeat myself
The entire world is made of connections
So many imposters, trying to feed and then eat you
How much longer until our society falls?
A steady decline
We're incompetent as human beings
Many have tried & failed at playing god
The one's that succeed in playing god are the 1%
The right people get the only pass
How much money & pull do you have to make a change?
So many solutions and possible answers
Sadly they are thrown away, because there placed in...
Pay attention, I'm not gonna repeat myself
The entire world is made of connections
So many imposters, trying to feed and then eat you
How much longer until our society falls?
A steady decline
We're incompetent as human beings
Many have tried & failed at playing god
The one's that succeed in playing god are the 1%
The right people get the only pass
How much money & pull do you have to make a change?
So many solutions and possible answers
Sadly they are thrown away, because there placed in...
#CallToAction
#God
#ignorance
#money
#politics
96 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 11:04am
7th Aug 2024 11:04am
If Only Sheep Need A Leader, Then Why Are You Such A Follower?
Hello sheep of planet earth
I'm here to tell you something about most of you
You're all being duped as you live your pathetic, mundane lives
The ruling class are watching and following every single move you make
Don't forget, get the latest smart device for yourself or for your home
You deserve it
Can you picture life without all of these awesome, high-tech devices
No!?
I figured you'd answer with no
You're all so goddamn lame and fake
Everyone is so comfortable and lethargic
That's the key to their control
You all rather watch some...
I'm here to tell you something about most of you
You're all being duped as you live your pathetic, mundane lives
The ruling class are watching and following every single move you make
Don't forget, get the latest smart device for yourself or for your home
You deserve it
Can you picture life without all of these awesome, high-tech devices
No!?
I figured you'd answer with no
You're all so goddamn lame and fake
Everyone is so comfortable and lethargic
That's the key to their control
You all rather watch some...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#money
#politics
128 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
Wrong side of the street
Paradise is here
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
#haiku
#money
#poverty #rhyming
#poverty #rhyming
109 reads
10 Comments
mrmelodyseven
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 1:40am
28th Jul 2024 1:40am
People May But
People may make the
world go round
but money make it
spin
world go round
but money make it
spin
#money
93 reads
4 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
26th Jul 2024 2:15am
26th Jul 2024 2:15am
Algorithm Two (PG-13)
This best-selling formula is popular with guys like Rick Ross, 2Chainz, Future, Migos, Trinidad James, and a host of others.
Unlike the rap of Dr. Dre's influence, where memorable music carries the most weight in a song; flash, cash, and overdone excess are the selling points in this newer music.
Here it goes:
Look what I got
Look at what I'm gonna get
Look what you ain't got
Broke Bruther!!
I don't want your girl
But you know that she wants me
Just to prove the point
I'm gon "touch" her!!
Yeah, chump, ...
Unlike the rap of Dr. Dre's influence, where memorable music carries the most weight in a song; flash, cash, and overdone excess are the selling points in this newer music.
Here it goes:
Look what I got
Look at what I'm gonna get
Look what you ain't got
Broke Bruther!!
I don't want your girl
But you know that she wants me
Just to prove the point
I'm gon "touch" her!!
Yeah, chump, ...
#greed
#money
#music
#poverty
#sex
116 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 11:15am
14th Jul 2024 11:15am
Useless
Corporate Executives in diapers
Useless as they are
Having their entourage with them
Maids, butler's, secretaries, advisor's etc...
Always there to look out for their best interests
Men & Woman in business attire crying in restaurants when their help is nowhere to be found
One quick phone call and someone is on their way
She arrived
Just in time before that meeting at 9 am!
The maid took the babbling exec to the restroom to change his diaper
She held his hand
The patrons there looked in disgust and continued eating
This shit...
Useless as they are
Having their entourage with them
Maids, butler's, secretaries, advisor's etc...
Always there to look out for their best interests
Men & Woman in business attire crying in restaurants when their help is nowhere to be found
One quick phone call and someone is on their way
She arrived
Just in time before that meeting at 9 am!
The maid took the babbling exec to the restroom to change his diaper
She held his hand
The patrons there looked in disgust and continued eating
This shit...
#fiction
#money
#power #support
#power #support
97 reads
6 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
25th Jun 2024 9:58am
25th Jun 2024 9:58am
Willing to Spin
I have enough money, (me and my wife)
To lead a comfortable middle class life
Even have enough extra money to spare
To take a chance to be a lottery millionaire
So far, not been as lucky as I would have imagined
Catching a break is harder than catching a dragon
To be honest, I never expect to win
But the wheel of fortune only works for those willing to spin
To lead a comfortable middle class life
Even have enough extra money to spare
To take a chance to be a lottery millionaire
So far, not been as lucky as I would have imagined
Catching a break is harder than catching a dragon
To be honest, I never expect to win
But the wheel of fortune only works for those willing to spin
#dreams
#money
75 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 6:59pm
24th Jun 2024 6:59pm
Don't take love for granted
What happened to you?
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives...
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives...
#greed
#heartbroken
#money
#poverty
#relationships
176 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jun 2024 11:29am
20th Jun 2024 11:29am
The Unfortunate Child
There once was a little girl named Abigail Browning
Her parents were quite wealthy & kind
She had a doll whose name was Ashley
One day her father, a colonel in the army was ordered to go to Southeast Asia
Several months later he was killed in a native attack
Abigail's mother fell into a deep depression that proved fatal
Her only relative was an aunt, who just recently drowned on a beach at Coney Island
Abigail Browning was left in the hands of the family lawyer
He immediately placed her into a boarding school
Sadly, she was punished by the...
Her parents were quite wealthy & kind
She had a doll whose name was Ashley
One day her father, a colonel in the army was ordered to go to Southeast Asia
Several months later he was killed in a native attack
Abigail's mother fell into a deep depression that proved fatal
Her only relative was an aunt, who just recently drowned on a beach at Coney Island
Abigail Browning was left in the hands of the family lawyer
He immediately placed her into a boarding school
Sadly, she was punished by the...
#childhood
#fiction
#money
#poverty
#sadness
91 reads
6 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
16th Jun 2024 10:51am
16th Jun 2024 10:51am
Producer Man
She was only seventeen.
Offered her own teenage dream.
He told her,come with me,I'll make you a star!
He told her,that he just wants her to get far.
But the truth slowly rised.
She signed the contract,unsupervised.
She got her car and moved far away.
Just to obey his wishes and be famous one day.
Sign right here,and sign she did.
She didn't know what she wanted.
Soon,she regretted the deal she did.
He knew his way to get her to listen.
Making her into someone else.
A contract,she didn't listen.
And...
Offered her own teenage dream.
He told her,come with me,I'll make you a star!
He told her,that he just wants her to get far.
But the truth slowly rised.
She signed the contract,unsupervised.
She got her car and moved far away.
Just to obey his wishes and be famous one day.
Sign right here,and sign she did.
She didn't know what she wanted.
Soon,she regretted the deal she did.
He knew his way to get her to listen.
Making her into someone else.
A contract,she didn't listen.
And...
#betrayal
#money
#regret
86 reads
0 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
