Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 00:12am
3rd Feb 2025 00:12am
The Do's & Don't's of Dating
Money for sex
Dinner for sex
Why? Why? Why? Why?
If I didn't pay would I still get laid?
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Here is a token of my affection
Why? Why? Why? Why?
Down on your knees and show your appreciation
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Do you pay for your friends?
Do you pay for your date?
Well, whoever will fuck
Will get a free plate
Dating is prostitution
The dating
Keep waiting
and masturbating
Dinner for sex
Why? Why? Why? Why?
If I didn't pay would I still get laid?
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Here is a token of my affection
Why? Why? Why? Why?
Down on your knees and show your appreciation
Buy! Bye! Buy! Bye!
Do you pay for your friends?
Do you pay for your date?
Well, whoever will fuck
Will get a free plate
Dating is prostitution
The dating
Keep waiting
and masturbating
#dating
#money
#sex
60 reads
6 Comments
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 9:29pm
31st Jan 2025 9:29pm
Villanelle Nr.25 — Gaza Stripped
In a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
sea-view apartments will slowly arise
owned by the wealthy…, and ever so hip
Palestinian blood? Merely a blip
of history’s shit with the media lies
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
And then will arrive a cruise-liner-ship
spilling its tourists and drug-lords and spies
all posing as wealthy, dressed ever so hip
The past will be screwed through a tightened lip
which views as taboo the carnage and cries
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
The vile God of...
sea-view apartments will slowly arise
owned by the wealthy…, and ever so hip
Palestinian blood? Merely a blip
of history’s shit with the media lies
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
And then will arrive a cruise-liner-ship
spilling its tourists and drug-lords and spies
all posing as wealthy, dressed ever so hip
The past will be screwed through a tightened lip
which views as taboo the carnage and cries
in a couple of years on the Gaza Strip
The vile God of...
#military
#money
#morality
#villanelle
#war
64 reads
8 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:18pm
18th Jan 2025 3:18pm
$20 Frankie
Frankie is a gurl...
...a wannabe girl...
...very passable!
Without the makeup...
...and very close shave...
...and, of course the fake boobs...
Frankie looks like Elliot Page.
Made up...he looks like Ellen Page!
That's where he got the idea!
Ellen transitioned to Elliot.
Frankie just fakes it!
Convincingly well!
He turns tricks in the alley..
...outside my window...
...and in cars cruising here!
He likes guys!
He loves $$$
Blowjobs only!
Special panties tuck... ...
...a wannabe girl...
...very passable!
Without the makeup...
...and very close shave...
...and, of course the fake boobs...
Frankie looks like Elliot Page.
Made up...he looks like Ellen Page!
That's where he got the idea!
Ellen transitioned to Elliot.
Frankie just fakes it!
Convincingly well!
He turns tricks in the alley..
...outside my window...
...and in cars cruising here!
He likes guys!
He loves $$$
Blowjobs only!
Special panties tuck... ...
#city
#dirty
#money #sex
#money #sex
71 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
14th Jan 2025 3:29pm
Haters of the Truth
You commend the poet with flattery when you agree with what he writes,
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
But you make disdainful comments when you disagree with his work.
You challenge his writing because you have bad intentions towards him.
Furthermore, you raise nonsensical side points to anger and entrap the writer.
The poet would rather not have conversations with evil-minded people.
On many occasions, you dissent to the views of the poet and create confusions.
You deliberately misrepresent the poet’s arguments to mislead the readers.
The people who oppose the work of the...
#anger
#hate
#money
#murder
#racism
63 reads
0 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 5:35pm
10th Jan 2025 5:35pm
Karma comes knocking
Cornfields and cattle spurs
road meandering onwards
bitter wind making the snow dance
come upon st. charles
ice cream shop sign says
closed for the season
more road more towns
some of these places
look to have committed
some kind of self treason
empty school
can almost see
children playing
turn the corner
nothing but graffiti and weeds
this isn’t the inner city
this is the land of
family values and character
monster trucks side by sides
with a lincoln
parked in that garage
payed...
road meandering onwards
bitter wind making the snow dance
come upon st. charles
ice cream shop sign says
closed for the season
more road more towns
some of these places
look to have committed
some kind of self treason
empty school
can almost see
children playing
turn the corner
nothing but graffiti and weeds
this isn’t the inner city
this is the land of
family values and character
monster trucks side by sides
with a lincoln
parked in that garage
payed...
#corruption
#depression
#money #poverty
#money #poverty
69 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
Weh Yuh Tink Bout Dis?
(Patois)
Peeple oo cyarry news pahn addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A yuh skill mek yuh get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyahn wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey yuh cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill yuh wid wok.
Some a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ahn bad mine.
Unu wahn fi win adda peeple mony ahn live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pahn rieshawse ahn Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony ahn tek kier a unu bady.
As a matta a fak, di peeple dem oo...
Peeple oo cyarry news pahn addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A yuh skill mek yuh get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyahn wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey yuh cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill yuh wid wok.
Some a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ahn bad mine.
Unu wahn fi win adda peeple mony ahn live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pahn rieshawse ahn Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony ahn tek kier a unu bady.
As a matta a fak, di peeple dem oo...
#Christian
#greed
#job
#marijuana
#money
38 reads
0 Comments
Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 5:11am
26th Dec 2024 5:11am
Rant 2.0
I always used to watch youtube and stuff everytime I do something. But the thing is I started questioning everything on YouTube suggestions and I uncovered the blindsided part of YouTube for myself. The entertainment videos? Views and likes in millions. The educational lectures and full serious from even prestigious universities like MIT, yale, Columbia stays at max 900 views. It's quite embarrassing honestly. The rich, absurd vultures getting famous for the most insane things is honesty the worst thing I've ever seen.
We are the clowns of a circus and we choose to be so even after...
We are the clowns of a circus and we choose to be so even after...
#consumerism
#money
53 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 10:28am
24th Dec 2024 10:28am
Johnny Football
Johnny football
Don’t feel that tall
Terryville southeast of
San Antonio before Houston
Rubs his fingers money sign
Number 2 cuts through Alabama
Can’t keep up with this magician
Steps on Heisman stage
Trophy first time freshman
On nfl stage of drafting
Waiting for Manziels name to
Ring Goodell
Cleveland comes to the rescue
Still in the 1st round
Gunslinger no practice
Iverson in Texas
Living high life
With Drake and Lebron
Check into...
Don’t feel that tall
Terryville southeast of
San Antonio before Houston
Rubs his fingers money sign
Number 2 cuts through Alabama
Can’t keep up with this magician
Steps on Heisman stage
Trophy first time freshman
On nfl stage of drafting
Waiting for Manziels name to
Ring Goodell
Cleveland comes to the rescue
Still in the 1st round
Gunslinger no practice
Iverson in Texas
Living high life
With Drake and Lebron
Check into...
#addiction
#money
#sports
56 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 00:13am
17th Dec 2024 00:13am
Mi Noh Uo Nobaddi Nuttn
(Patois)
Winky Winky an ar tiifin son tiif mi $12,000 outa mi ouse.
Soh shi can tek dat ahn piay di lite bill weh shi sey mi uo.
Dem a squat inna di uol man yawd, an dem a live laka jangcro.
Shi love freenis, but dat a goh mek ar tun woklis.
Di wickid ooman noh piay noh rent fi bout fuo ier.
Shi a uze tiifin lite inna di plies caw shi noh wahn fi piay noh bill.
Di bad-smellin ooman uo $52,800 fi wata bill weh shi run up.
Mi nah shuo ar noh receit caw mi noh uo nobaddi nuttn.
Winky Winky an ar tiifin son tiif mi $12,000 outa mi ouse.
Soh shi can tek dat ahn piay di lite bill weh shi sey mi uo.
Dem a squat inna di uol man yawd, an dem a live laka jangcro.
Shi love freenis, but dat a goh mek ar tun woklis.
Di wickid ooman noh piay noh rent fi bout fuo ier.
Shi a uze tiifin lite inna di plies caw shi noh wahn fi piay noh bill.
Di bad-smellin ooman uo $52,800 fi wata bill weh shi run up.
Mi nah shuo ar noh receit caw mi noh uo nobaddi nuttn.
#home
#money
#son #women
#son #women
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
Maxed Out & Defeated
Advertising temptation
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
#CallToAction
#greed
#LifeStruggles #money
#LifeStruggles #money
76 reads
11 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
Red Wine and Money
Feel like the home team prevails
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#money #sports
#money #sports
76 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 7:05pm
5th Dec 2024 7:05pm
I Want A Divorce!
What happened to you?
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives ...
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives ...
#greed
#heartbroken
#money
#poverty
#relationships
151 reads
10 Comments
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