Poems About Men Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about men seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Northern_Soul
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 7:22pm
3rd Jul 2024 7:22pm
Idles
I think God is all of man”
he said out loud
as he tumbled out of himself
perched amongst pillows
rocks, avalanches
God wrapped his hands
around his knees
filled with ache and miracles
sighing out a silent divinity
deserving of adoration
total
and utter
surrender
he said out loud
as he tumbled out of himself
perched amongst pillows
rocks, avalanches
God wrapped his hands
around his knees
filled with ache and miracles
sighing out a silent divinity
deserving of adoration
total
and utter
surrender
#God
#men
208 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 4:58pm
30th Jun 2024 4:58pm
The Schoolboys and the Rastafarian Men (With original Patois quotations)
Two schoolboys, Dan and Josh, attended the Independent City All Age School in St. Catherine. In the evenings, they used to walk through a cane field near the school when they were going home. Many tall coconut trees bordered the cane field. Dan and Josh would cut sugar cane and pick coconuts to eat. In addition to that, they would carry some sugar cane and coconuts home.
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
#men
#school
#curse
#water
#children
125 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 9:51pm
21st Jun 2024 9:51pm
Putin and Biden
Two miserable old men with erectile dysfunction want to decide the fate of the world.
If you do not withdraw your supports for them now, you will certainly regret it.
The American president and the Russian president enjoyed the days of their youth.
So why do they want to destroy the lives of others, especially young people?
Putin and Biden should be spending quality time with their grandchildren and having fun.
What are these two complete idiots doing in the nastiness of politics at their age?
The bloody-minded warmongers are evidently senile...
If you do not withdraw your supports for them now, you will certainly regret it.
The American president and the Russian president enjoyed the days of their youth.
So why do they want to destroy the lives of others, especially young people?
Putin and Biden should be spending quality time with their grandchildren and having fun.
What are these two complete idiots doing in the nastiness of politics at their age?
The bloody-minded warmongers are evidently senile...
#children
#fate
#men
#politics
#war
144 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 1:41am
17th Jun 2024 1:41am
A RIGHTEOUS LOVE
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ but before I began writing, this message of what is A RIGHTEOUS LOVE 💖 for how many people have or had a righteous love in their lives, and can remember what it felt like when you finally realize. THAT you have a real life relationship, with someone who is on the same page that you are in there life. For I know that some of you are going to be able, to understand were I am going with this stimulating conversation. For a righteous love is a good love of honesty and truth and trust, with respect and support and understanding of...
#friendship
#men
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#women
156 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 8:52pm
14th Jun 2024 8:52pm
Bleeding
In the moon’s tender glow hearts ache
and weep for love unrequited,
secrets buried deep.
They bleed for stolen kisses,
promises untold.
In the quiet of night,
where passion takes hold.
Raindrops fall like tears tracing
sorrow’s path, for friendships shattered
dreams that couldn’t last.
They bleed for memories etched
in fading ink and the ache of absence
when loved ones sink.
Against taunting tornadoes they stand
their ground, bleeding resilience,
courage profound.
...
and weep for love unrequited,
secrets buried deep.
They bleed for stolen kisses,
promises untold.
In the quiet of night,
where passion takes hold.
Raindrops fall like tears tracing
sorrow’s path, for friendships shattered
dreams that couldn’t last.
They bleed for memories etched
in fading ink and the ache of absence
when loved ones sink.
Against taunting tornadoes they stand
their ground, bleeding resilience,
courage profound.
...
#anxiety
#clouds
#men
#sadness
#sky
219 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 4:44pm
3rd May 2024 4:44pm
Not All Women Are the Same
When some men have bad experiences with women, they argue that all women are the same.
This is definitely a nonsensical reasoning, and I do not support this unfounded assertion.
In fact, women have different characters, attitudes, intentions, and personalities.
Some worthless men complain that they always meet spiteful and unfaithful women,
But they fail to see that their unpleasant personalities attract these kinds of females.
Men should look in the mirror and improve their behaviours instead of degrading women.
Some men try to catch women with money...
This is definitely a nonsensical reasoning, and I do not support this unfounded assertion.
In fact, women have different characters, attitudes, intentions, and personalities.
Some worthless men complain that they always meet spiteful and unfaithful women,
But they fail to see that their unpleasant personalities attract these kinds of females.
Men should look in the mirror and improve their behaviours instead of degrading women.
Some men try to catch women with money...
#men
#women
#relationships
#sex
#violence
273 reads
5 Comments
PoemStranger
Poem Published
2nd May 2024 2:32am
2nd May 2024 2:32am
The Worst Sounding Restaurants in the World - FUK MI SUSHI & SEAFOOD
#humankind
#men
#women
136 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 7:23pm
26th Apr 2024 7:23pm
Your Brother Barry
I just got a call from
Your brother, Barry
Complaining about
His mean wife Mary
Claimed things between them
had gotten very hairy
Actually, more like really scary
He didn't know why
He'd ever gotten married
I didn't have even a hunch
That's when he told me
"Thanks so much but
I fixed her hinney for good
By making believe she was food
He just chopped her up
Cooked her whole body
And served it up for lunch
Your brother, Barry
Complaining about
His mean wife Mary
Claimed things between them
had gotten very hairy
Actually, more like really scary
He didn't know why
He'd ever gotten married
I didn't have even a hunch
That's when he told me
"Thanks so much but
I fixed her hinney for good
By making believe she was food
He just chopped her up
Cooked her whole body
And served it up for lunch
#husband
#marriage
#men
#murder
#wife
196 reads
6 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
25th Apr 2024 11:31am
25th Apr 2024 11:31am
So You Think You're A Stud
#anxiety
#men
#MentalHealth
147 reads
20 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Apr 2024 7:23am
25th Apr 2024 7:23am
ERECTILE EXCITEMENT AND DYSFUNCTIONAL DISAPPOINTMENT
#erotic
#men
#rhyming #sex
#rhyming #sex
160 reads
1 Comment
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 10:29pm
21st Apr 2024 10:29pm
The Lady Blue (The Near Seduction)
One afternoon while I was home sunbathing next to the pool, Joe unexpectedly showed up here.
"I probably shouldn't be here," he said standing next to the lawn chair looking down at me, then added, "I'll leave it you want me to."
"It's alright, I replied as I shielded my eyes from the sun and looked up at him. I was thinking about how handsome he looked looking down and ogling me. "Please stay!"
It all started innocently enough with him offering to put sun lotion on my back. I closed my eyes enjoying the way his hands...
"I probably shouldn't be here," he said standing next to the lawn chair looking down at me, then added, "I'll leave it you want me to."
"It's alright, I replied as I shielded my eyes from the sun and looked up at him. I was thinking about how handsome he looked looking down and ogling me. "Please stay!"
It all started innocently enough with him offering to put sun lotion on my back. I closed my eyes enjoying the way his hands...
#lust
#men
#sexy
182 reads
8 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
The Lady Blue (The Affair)
At last, I was living a dream life. I was having a hot and heavy romance with with Gary. I found I was unquestionably and hopelessly in love with him. I had grown up admiring him and fantasized about us having a close relationship. It did not occur to me to turn away from him even though he wasn't really mine.
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover
#men
#sex
213 reads
12 Comments
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