Poems About Men Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about men seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 9:11pm
20th Oct 2024 9:11pm
GONNA DO EM GONNA DO EM ALL (10-9-2024; Palm Springs, California)
i like em
like
i like em
so i m
gonna do em
like I like
gonna
do em do em do em
gonna
do em
like i know i like
cuz
i don t see
no good reason
not
to do so
no matter what
others
may feel think judge
do or say
so therefore
not to do so
makes no
fuckin sense to me
at all
so i m just
gonna go ahead
and keep on
doin em doin em
doin em ...
like
i like em
so i m
gonna do em
like I like
gonna
do em do em do em
gonna
do em
like i know i like
cuz
i don t see
no good reason
not
to do so
no matter what
others
may feel think judge
do or say
so therefore
not to do so
makes no
fuckin sense to me
at all
so i m just
gonna go ahead
and keep on
doin em doin em
doin em ...
#erotic
#happiness
#lust
#men
#sex
168 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 5:42pm
18th Oct 2024 5:42pm
Headf**k
It’s been a while
Where have I been
Fucking a guy
Living the dream?
He made me jump
He hit the spot
He fucked around
Then took the lot!
Boosted me up
Then kicked me down
Messed with my head
All around town
Took my money
Then stole my soul
Used MY good nature
To boost his own
Where have I been
Fucking a guy
Living the dream?
He made me jump
He hit the spot
He fucked around
Then took the lot!
Boosted me up
Then kicked me down
Messed with my head
All around town
Took my money
Then stole my soul
Used MY good nature
To boost his own
#abuse
#men
#relationships
193 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 1:26pm
18th Oct 2024 1:26pm
Man
Man, the softness of your presence
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#men
#mirror
182 reads
10 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 00:51am
10th Oct 2024 00:51am
her opinion of beards
I suppose beards are natural,
looking at him a little dubiously, but then so
would be very long toenails, they
all need trimming, eventually
looking at him a little dubiously, but then so
would be very long toenails, they
all need trimming, eventually
#men
90 reads
4 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 8:53am
4th Oct 2024 8:53am
What Lonely, Hopeless Alphas Don't Understand
Imagine this: you're living alone, you begin to think of companionship and simply not being alone. Your goal is to be honest about who you are and to be accepted for the shortcomings you are working towards fixing. So, alone you stay, making a space you can love so you may have one to learn how to love yourself, and you learn. Little by little, you learn how to make yourself feel secure and safe. You do so by being financially responsible enough to live a life that gives you freedom to do what you want. Your bills aren't just manageable, they're almost nonexistent with no credit card balances...
#hypocrisy
#men
#prose
#women
#dating
125 reads
3 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 00:34am
6th Sep 2024 00:34am
Ed
I used to talk to him.
In the backyard.
Filled with
dog shit.
We never
cleaned.
But his old yarns.
Were as lively.
As the sky burning purple and orange.
In these
prairie sunsets.
I suppose he was dying.
Then.
But,
not dead enough.
To not be able to tell.
A tall tale.
Or two that.
Changed,
every time he told them
I got lost in his.
Used to bes.
And, people who
ain't no angels.
Setting each other on fire.
For five dollar debts.
...
In the backyard.
Filled with
dog shit.
We never
cleaned.
But his old yarns.
Were as lively.
As the sky burning purple and orange.
In these
prairie sunsets.
I suppose he was dying.
Then.
But,
not dead enough.
To not be able to tell.
A tall tale.
Or two that.
Changed,
every time he told them
I got lost in his.
Used to bes.
And, people who
ain't no angels.
Setting each other on fire.
For five dollar debts.
...
#friendship
#men
124 reads
1 Comment
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
13th Aug 2024 8:21am
13th Aug 2024 8:21am
QUESTIONS OF DYSFUNCTION
#aging
#men
#rhyming
#sex
#women
183 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Aug 2024 3:04pm
11th Aug 2024 3:04pm
Was tempted to put whipped cream on my oatmeal this morning
Try to eat healthy
Oatmeal 5 days a week
No sugar
Always organic fruit
Pumpkin seeds
For my aging prostate
Unsweetened almond milk
You know the drill
This morning however
Was eying the whipped cream
The low fat stuff with bad chemicals
The Irish Whiskey in my bar
Half a pound of fatty bacon
Undercooked and 3 eggs over easy
Whole Wheat toast and lots of butter
I know what you're thinking
He's a rogue
Rules are for others
Farts loudly in places of worship ...
Oatmeal 5 days a week
No sugar
Always organic fruit
Pumpkin seeds
For my aging prostate
Unsweetened almond milk
You know the drill
This morning however
Was eying the whipped cream
The low fat stuff with bad chemicals
The Irish Whiskey in my bar
Half a pound of fatty bacon
Undercooked and 3 eggs over easy
Whole Wheat toast and lots of butter
I know what you're thinking
He's a rogue
Rules are for others
Farts loudly in places of worship ...
#food
#funny
#healing
#men
#MentalHealth
196 reads
29 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 4:14am
29th Jul 2024 4:14am
THROUGH THE TRUTH
Through the process of the truth what have you gotten, from hearing the deepness of the truth. 🤔 For sometimes we have to learn to get it out in the open, then make a right decision that is better for you to be able to 😞 move on. As with your own thoughts and hurt and pain and insight of what is called life. To finally look into what you truly want and need, in hindsight of the no honesty and truth and trust that exists in your life now. For we all are looking for that one to change our world and lives, around not just to make it better yet to come to the deepness of our...
#men
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
#women
106 reads
0 Comments
u53l355
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
Be A Man !
To be a man,
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
#depression
#family
#love
#men
#sacrifice
199 reads
4 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 9:28pm
18th Jul 2024 9:28pm
Reveal His Teeth
Real villains live amongst us daily
Some remain hidden from society
While others are front and center
Both lusting fear from the innocent
Constantly looking over our shoulder
Waiting for the other shoe to drop
Caught inside another conspiracy
Wading through some existing theory
Evil incarnate sitting upon his throne
Mass destruction laced in genocide
Spewing hatred with a forked tongue
Death delivered by pushing a button
Lone-wolf stalks prey on the street
Hunting by organization over impulse
Never...
Some remain hidden from society
While others are front and center
Both lusting fear from the innocent
Constantly looking over our shoulder
Waiting for the other shoe to drop
Caught inside another conspiracy
Wading through some existing theory
Evil incarnate sitting upon his throne
Mass destruction laced in genocide
Spewing hatred with a forked tongue
Death delivered by pushing a button
Lone-wolf stalks prey on the street
Hunting by organization over impulse
Never...
#evil
#men
172 reads
4 Comments
Northern_Soul
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 11:15am
11th Jul 2024 11:15am
Animal
the fucking legs on that, she says
her mind somewhere else
as she stares down the lifeguard
a set of perfectly chiselled quads
walking down the side of the pool
might be worth drowning,
she continues
as he fiddles with his phone
her eyes branding themselves
on his yeah-I-work-out ass
you not into it? she asks
dude… I’m really fucking not
don’t get me wrong, I’m hotter
than I’ve been in years,
but I’ve a drawer full...
her mind somewhere else
as she stares down the lifeguard
a set of perfectly chiselled quads
walking down the side of the pool
might be worth drowning,
she continues
as he fiddles with his phone
her eyes branding themselves
on his yeah-I-work-out ass
you not into it? she asks
dude… I’m really fucking not
don’t get me wrong, I’m hotter
than I’ve been in years,
but I’ve a drawer full...
#lust
#women
#men #aging
#men #aging
191 reads
0 Comments
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