Poems About Memories by Top Critiquers
#memories
Poems about memories by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Caged Memories
Walking in the shadow of twilight down the avenue
of cobblestone and caged memories lingering in my
soul as hush falls the dusk in silence of relentless cold
between shadow and echoes intimacy lusting in twilight's
tapestry turning memories into poetry
of cobblestone and caged memories lingering in my
soul as hush falls the dusk in silence of relentless cold
between shadow and echoes intimacy lusting in twilight's
tapestry turning memories into poetry
#erotic
#memories
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last last laugh
"HEY!
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
"PRAYING?"
"STOP IT!"
"I'M THE ONLY GOD YOU NEED!"
"CHRIST! YOU MAKE ME SICK!"
"YOU CAN'T BE NO KID OF MINE!"
"I WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!"
"YOUR NOTHING BUT A FAT USELESS
FUCK!"
"YOU'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING."
"I KNOW YOUR MOM'S OUT WHORING
AROUND!"
"HOW WOULD YOU LIKE THAT BLOND...
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
"PRAYING?"
"STOP IT!"
"I'M THE ONLY GOD YOU NEED!"
"CHRIST! YOU MAKE ME SICK!"
"YOU CAN'T BE NO KID OF MINE!"
"I WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!"
"YOUR NOTHING BUT A FAT USELESS
FUCK!"
"YOU'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING."
"I KNOW YOUR MOM'S OUT WHORING
AROUND!"
"HOW WOULD YOU LIKE THAT BLOND...
#memories
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A Memory Rings
When silence sings
A memory rings
A heart springs
And words wear wings
*****
I compose my rhapsody
Passionate and full of melody
With shades of artistic unity
Satiated with peaceful beauty
*****
There’s a poem in your eyes
Raw feelings of Nature ties
And all the wonder it implies
Your verses in my mind I eternize
*****
Your hidden rainbows of the mind
To every single hue I relate and bind
A magic wave of wand, one of a kind
A treasure of human nature is mined
***** ...
A memory rings
A heart springs
And words wear wings
*****
I compose my rhapsody
Passionate and full of melody
With shades of artistic unity
Satiated with peaceful beauty
*****
There’s a poem in your eyes
Raw feelings of Nature ties
And all the wonder it implies
Your verses in my mind I eternize
*****
Your hidden rainbows of the mind
To every single hue I relate and bind
A magic wave of wand, one of a kind
A treasure of human nature is mined
***** ...
#memories
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
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old bloke
no one flies kites these days
it’s all drones
on and on the old bloke in the pub
but nobody listens
since they’re all on their phones
and he finds it quite sad ..
it’s all drones
on and on the old bloke in the pub
but nobody listens
since they’re all on their phones
and he finds it quite sad ..
#memories
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Laughlin from the Sky
A sudden land blaze
Where am I?
The sky is honest
The land tells lies.
So many patchwork quilts
Neat human geometry
the higher you go.
45 minutes from Phoenix
a small crop of flashing signs below,
a river behind them.
I'm always guessing in the air
Where am I?
But I'm fairly certain i know this: Laughlin, Nevada
A weekend...what?
Fourteen years ago?
I want to start parsing that weekend
Neat cognitive geometry
Remembering this
Selectively forgetting that. ...
Where am I?
The sky is honest
The land tells lies.
So many patchwork quilts
Neat human geometry
the higher you go.
45 minutes from Phoenix
a small crop of flashing signs below,
a river behind them.
I'm always guessing in the air
Where am I?
But I'm fairly certain i know this: Laughlin, Nevada
A weekend...what?
Fourteen years ago?
I want to start parsing that weekend
Neat cognitive geometry
Remembering this
Selectively forgetting that. ...
#lust
#memories
#travel
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6 Comments
Abyss Of A Vampire’s Touch
DRACON’S CASTLE
Sighisoara, Romania
Naynina pulled the BMW around the circular driveway. She rested the engine and withdrew the key. She opened the door and pushed it close. She hurried around the front of the vehicle to the passenger side. She opened the door.
Mordecai opened the door. He flashed over to the vehicle.
“I don’t know what happened.”
Mordecai did not acknowledge Naynina’s presence. He lifted Dracon’s body from out the SUV and hauled his body over his shoulder. His presence moved at...
Sighisoara, Romania
Naynina pulled the BMW around the circular driveway. She rested the engine and withdrew the key. She opened the door and pushed it close. She hurried around the front of the vehicle to the passenger side. She opened the door.
Mordecai opened the door. He flashed over to the vehicle.
“I don’t know what happened.”
Mordecai did not acknowledge Naynina’s presence. He lifted Dracon’s body from out the SUV and hauled his body over his shoulder. His presence moved at...
#fairies
#memories
#vampires
#witches
#love
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The gunk on the bottom drawer
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#love
#memories
#minimalist
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Four for the Road
Four for the Road
I Walpi
Bruja voice of a thousand tears
Takes us to the sky born wheel
Where pueblo wonders through centuries
Upon flower mesa that blossoms love
For children of dusty walls
Whose cast iron dreams
Are a coal stove in a pottery room
With a lady of ancient designs
Whose smile is the murmuring sun
That glimmers through a veil of sand
When her ceramic children
With motifs as sacred as the land
Are too strange for homes of...
I Walpi
Bruja voice of a thousand tears
Takes us to the sky born wheel
Where pueblo wonders through centuries
Upon flower mesa that blossoms love
For children of dusty walls
Whose cast iron dreams
Are a coal stove in a pottery room
With a lady of ancient designs
Whose smile is the murmuring sun
That glimmers through a veil of sand
When her ceramic children
With motifs as sacred as the land
Are too strange for homes of...
#city
#desert
#memories
#spiritual
#travel
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their heaven...only under her pleated skirt
the very first time
when i went to our
ancestral farm with a relative,
N i saw an old n ruined
but beautiful farm house
it had broken doors,
wrapped in layers of old memories...
a desolate courtyard
and an old walnut tree
standing in it,
beneath which
a flock of squirrels were playing ...
i started imagining
if i had ever come here?
in my childhood,,,
n meanwhile the chirping
of birds started making
noise in my ears...
but it was very soothing..
the wind was blowing
at its speed,...
when i went to our
ancestral farm with a relative,
N i saw an old n ruined
but beautiful farm house
it had broken doors,
wrapped in layers of old memories...
a desolate courtyard
and an old walnut tree
standing in it,
beneath which
a flock of squirrels were playing ...
i started imagining
if i had ever come here?
in my childhood,,,
n meanwhile the chirping
of birds started making
noise in my ears...
but it was very soothing..
the wind was blowing
at its speed,...
#memories
#relationships
#romantic
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Embalmed Memories (with Adagio)
in haunted obsession longing your voice
coaxing the passion embracing my soul
embalming memories of thirsting breasts
climaxing in the depth of your throat
surrendering to the gallows, dark's epitome
hung by the scote's testicles
exquisitely adorned in twilight's mascara
no greater pleasure to give thee my wings
of my earthly reward
worship me as I worship you
bring forth all inhibitions
and shatter them on the alter of us
I feel you pulsing
filling me with the afterglow of the...
coaxing the passion embracing my soul
embalming memories of thirsting breasts
climaxing in the depth of your throat
surrendering to the gallows, dark's epitome
hung by the scote's testicles
exquisitely adorned in twilight's mascara
no greater pleasure to give thee my wings
of my earthly reward
worship me as I worship you
bring forth all inhibitions
and shatter them on the alter of us
I feel you pulsing
filling me with the afterglow of the...
#love
#memories
#passion
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Foxes & Wolves
I wondered back then
A long time ago
At fourteen in middle school
A year before the quinceanera I never had
Where I’d be later in life
Everyone my age left middle school
and their teens early
My girlz grew up way too fast
String bikinis
Hickeys on tummies
Laughing in detention
Fights in the restroom
at school or the movie theater
Wasn’t my thing though, never was
I wasn’t scared of fighting
but my mother was a different story
And my friends knew it
They didn’t have to answer to her ...
A long time ago
At fourteen in middle school
A year before the quinceanera I never had
Where I’d be later in life
Everyone my age left middle school
and their teens early
My girlz grew up way too fast
String bikinis
Hickeys on tummies
Laughing in detention
Fights in the restroom
at school or the movie theater
Wasn’t my thing though, never was
I wasn’t scared of fighting
but my mother was a different story
And my friends knew it
They didn’t have to answer to her ...
#confessional
#SelfReflection
#memories #nostalgia
#memories #nostalgia
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Dear Little One
Dear little one,
finder of pennies and cool rocks
(because you were always looking down)
rarely meeting the world eye to eye.
It was easier to stay lost in thought
drifting away hours
in a record player or book…
Oh, but you were observant.
Quietly watching and listening
for the moment when they might take notice --
“Such an easy child,” they’d say.
You didn’t ask for much
(they taught you early there was no point)
Learned to take care of your needs --
the lunches
the drives
the...
finder of pennies and cool rocks
(because you were always looking down)
rarely meeting the world eye to eye.
It was easier to stay lost in thought
drifting away hours
in a record player or book…
Oh, but you were observant.
Quietly watching and listening
for the moment when they might take notice --
“Such an easy child,” they’d say.
You didn’t ask for much
(they taught you early there was no point)
Learned to take care of your needs --
the lunches
the drives
the...
#healing
#love
#memories #SelfReflection
#memories #SelfReflection
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DU Poetry : Poems About Memories by Top Critiquers