Poems About Memories by Top Critiquers
#memories
Poems about memories by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Frigid Sky
Time is passing by and slowly
Losing all its breath
Sun is going down so lonely
In the frosty, distant west
Cold nasty winds are blowing
All the hopes fade away
While life is freezing
Into a snowy, powdery haze
Within a frozen moment
Into a crystal winter sky
Memories are melting
Tears open up my eyes
Soon salvation
Will bring a long-awaited end
Reaching primordial creation
Uniting with you, my old friend
Losing all its breath
Sun is going down so lonely
In the frosty, distant west
Cold nasty winds are blowing
All the hopes fade away
While life is freezing
Into a snowy, powdery haze
Within a frozen moment
Into a crystal winter sky
Memories are melting
Tears open up my eyes
Soon salvation
Will bring a long-awaited end
Reaching primordial creation
Uniting with you, my old friend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#memories
#rhyming
#winter
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8 Comments
My Heart Smiled
I’ve always had a fascination with the automobile. Growing up I loved my Hot Wheels collection above all other toys. Would always look at the stamp on the bottom of the car, so I could learn: make, model, year.
My dad worked on cars for extra money when I was young. He wasn’t a certified mechanic but he knew how to work on them. I even remember he did minor body work, and painted them as well. He pulled engines and transmissions, and other items before taking them off to be crushed.
My favorite car he worked on was a 1968 Mercury Cougar. It was blue and had a...
My dad worked on cars for extra money when I was young. He wasn’t a certified mechanic but he knew how to work on them. I even remember he did minor body work, and painted them as well. He pulled engines and transmissions, and other items before taking them off to be crushed.
My favorite car he worked on was a 1968 Mercury Cougar. It was blue and had a...
#memories
#nostalgia
38 reads
7 Comments
Life Lesson 6 (Uk) Defiance runs in the blood
Before the term road rage became common use, I'm pretty sure that my cousin, who was driving us back to the house, was exhibiting all the classic signs.
Not only was she speeding and diving in and out of traffic in her white Ford Granada car, but she was also letting out some colorful curse words, and I even had to turn my head and stare at her, wondering what was going through her mind.
We managed to return to the house in one piece to be greeted by the rest of the family. You would think that being born and raised in the United States, I would not...
Not only was she speeding and diving in and out of traffic in her white Ford Granada car, but she was also letting out some colorful curse words, and I even had to turn my head and stare at her, wondering what was going through her mind.
We managed to return to the house in one piece to be greeted by the rest of the family. You would think that being born and raised in the United States, I would not...
#family
#memories
110 reads
6 Comments
Better Off Solo
Mmmmm, yeah, yeah
Ohhhhh
Footsteps echo on the marble cold, ohhh
Glimmer of gold, stories untold
Past's soft murmur, tales of old
My future is bright and bold
Sipping my wine reminiscing our twilight
The shadow of our love now just a nightlight
A tale of two hearts, I don’t let myself get caught up in our past
We used to shine so bright
Now just a burned out flame, you don’t linger too long in my sight
Mmmm, yeah, yeah
Mmmmmm
Stray melodies, piano keys caress
Moments frozen, my...
Ohhhhh
Footsteps echo on the marble cold, ohhh
Glimmer of gold, stories untold
Past's soft murmur, tales of old
My future is bright and bold
Sipping my wine reminiscing our twilight
The shadow of our love now just a nightlight
A tale of two hearts, I don’t let myself get caught up in our past
We used to shine so bright
Now just a burned out flame, you don’t linger too long in my sight
Mmmm, yeah, yeah
Mmmmmm
Stray melodies, piano keys caress
Moments frozen, my...
#lyrics
#memories
#MovingOn
#relationships
#TimeHeals
132 reads
brenda
in my dark hours I keep a diary of sin
days I squanered, on days I regret
with thoughts that haunt, while I try to escape to sleep
lying there with a private cinema
replaying pivatol moments
so many mistakes along the way
with pitfalls I feel I should have avoided
my faded flowers memories of brighter days
before I learned how brutal the world could be
sheltered as a little girl
I wasn't prepared for the realities of life
too eager to experience things
I wish I had more focus as a youth
so bright of mind, it seems...
days I squanered, on days I regret
with thoughts that haunt, while I try to escape to sleep
lying there with a private cinema
replaying pivatol moments
so many mistakes along the way
with pitfalls I feel I should have avoided
my faded flowers memories of brighter days
before I learned how brutal the world could be
sheltered as a little girl
I wasn't prepared for the realities of life
too eager to experience things
I wish I had more focus as a youth
so bright of mind, it seems...
#LifeStruggles
#love
#memories
91 reads
4 Comments
Once upon a picture
from the mantlepiece
quivering questions
swirling soot soothes
chimney smoke signals
written by an old berber woman
lava levitates sanctum withered mouth
speaks storm like crawls
through a needles eye
one eyed truth
a fools journey
how wise are those
who have none
and twirling figures escaped
escalating science from silence
in a hazed compound
I saw my sister’s ballet slippers slip
she wants to be a ballerina
when she dances...
quivering questions
swirling soot soothes
chimney smoke signals
written by an old berber woman
lava levitates sanctum withered mouth
speaks storm like crawls
through a needles eye
one eyed truth
a fools journey
how wise are those
who have none
and twirling figures escaped
escalating science from silence
in a hazed compound
I saw my sister’s ballet slippers slip
she wants to be a ballerina
when she dances...
#childhood
#memories
92 reads
8 Comments
Forever in my Memory
I'm looking at my hands and seeing my father
I do this often
He was a quiet man
I wanted so much more from him
His passion
An occasional embrace
Knowledge
I'm still searching in my hands
For answers that won't come
Still I try ...
And will continue to try
There's so many answers somewhere
There was life then death
I remain focused...
I do this often
He was a quiet man
I wanted so much more from him
His passion
An occasional embrace
Knowledge
I'm still searching in my hands
For answers that won't come
Still I try ...
And will continue to try
There's so many answers somewhere
There was life then death
I remain focused...
#father
#love
#memories
#son
#wisdom
230 reads
32 Comments
Wild Blackberries
Blackberries visual entry
#childhood
#food
#memories #nostalgia
#memories #nostalgia
287 reads
18 Comments
It's another year in my life
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. 111 It's here at this moment in my life with another year in my life, coming that I am truly grateful and thankful and blessed. To be able to see another day in my life. For tomorrow is a blessing for me, on my 66 birthday. 🎉🎂 For sure it's on this day I silently reflect upon my life, as I journey and travel and walk the last four years of my own life. FOR let's go back to 2002 when I had a spinal infusion and I was unable to walk, 😭 or stand on my own two feet alone. 😔 IT was that moment in...
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#memories
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
76 reads
2 Comments
Fatso's Dad
My NY friend from high school.
You make me smile.
I miss you.
Can't believe we're still in touch.
Fatso enjoyed the house,
You bought for him and his gf.
I hope we talk soon.
You gave me the support,
When everyone was against me.
I'm glad your ex wife finally came through.
All the support you gave through her addiction,
Now you're here for me too.
I wish there was some way I can help you.
I hope your kids grow to be as awesome as you.
11 years and I still wish I could kiss you.
Fatso and his...
You make me smile.
I miss you.
Can't believe we're still in touch.
Fatso enjoyed the house,
You bought for him and his gf.
I hope we talk soon.
You gave me the support,
When everyone was against me.
I'm glad your ex wife finally came through.
All the support you gave through her addiction,
Now you're here for me too.
I wish there was some way I can help you.
I hope your kids grow to be as awesome as you.
11 years and I still wish I could kiss you.
Fatso and his...
#memories
62 reads
4 Comments
THE MEMORY LINGERS
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #memories
#rhyming #memories
383 reads
1 Comment
I f**k STRANGERS!
#dirty
#memories
#PTSD #sex
#PTSD #sex
72 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Memories by Top Critiquers