Poems About Luck Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about luck seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
15th Feb 2023 5:42pm
15th Feb 2023 5:42pm
V's "for visitors"
No negotiations, from strange creation's considered alien's, extraterrestrials higher dimensional, more than celestial human beings!!
Unknown aerial phenomenons, unidentifiable and seldomly seened!!
That have most of the population, under the illusion that they from, Mars!
Little martians who appear to be green 💚!!
Better yet to any Opponent and competitor!!
They are more like some predators!!
Camouflage like a chameleon cold blooded like a reptilian, cloaked in disguise in plain sight!!
With the help of...
Unknown aerial phenomenons, unidentifiable and seldomly seened!!
That have most of the population, under the illusion that they from, Mars!
Little martians who appear to be green 💚!!
Better yet to any Opponent and competitor!!
They are more like some predators!!
Camouflage like a chameleon cold blooded like a reptilian, cloaked in disguise in plain sight!!
With the help of...
#apocalypse
#luck
#nightmares
#dystopian
#curse
368 reads
5 Comments
ThePoet632
CrossWords
CrossWords
Poem Published
15th Jan 2023 9:00am
15th Jan 2023 9:00am
Bipolars 'Mysterious Chemistry
i listen to that music, that calmly and wistfully takes me as far as zebra can live and her warmth she gives, soft and romantic, the eyes that never fail to send me back into epic times, Summerian heydays, but then sadly do i recal, the days best of all, when i would stroll along the path that knows my feelings, heart with your love beating, and lips humming your name'
it seems so long ago, a nostalgic past when we first got to know, that our chemistry was in trouble, unstable, until emotions find their frequency, aired with telepathy, and met around the pole of Love like...
it seems so long ago, a nostalgic past when we first got to know, that our chemistry was in trouble, unstable, until emotions find their frequency, aired with telepathy, and met around the pole of Love like...
#fate
#luck
388 reads
6 Comments
BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Beasty
Poem Published
13th Jan 2023 00:23am
13th Jan 2023 00:23am
Flesh Prison
God knows that if we'd ever meet Id break their teeth
So they play these jokes with my body and mind
Blood attacking itself, pain meds not working
Axe that though it's all my meds not working properly
Nails that split like these fucked up lips
Both only happy when I bite them off
Violence in these veins literally and spiritually
Busted doll vibes with these messed up joints
God loves to see me happy in the pain
It's mild, continuous torture at best
And sadistic fuckery at it's basic worst
Yes, let's bless and curse me in one breathe ...
So they play these jokes with my body and mind
Blood attacking itself, pain meds not working
Axe that though it's all my meds not working properly
Nails that split like these fucked up lips
Both only happy when I bite them off
Violence in these veins literally and spiritually
Busted doll vibes with these messed up joints
God loves to see me happy in the pain
It's mild, continuous torture at best
And sadistic fuckery at it's basic worst
Yes, let's bless and curse me in one breathe ...
#God
#spiritual
#monsters
#luck
#curse
270 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2023 10:29pm
10th Jan 2023 10:29pm
Possibly Love At First Sight
When she saw Mitch walk
towards the pool, Susan smiles
and says "hi" to him.
towards the pool, Susan smiles
and says "hi" to him.
#romantic
#summer
#fiction
#senryu
#luck
331 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2022 8:28pm
23rd Dec 2022 8:28pm
memories and mayhem
memories:
like losing two
nights somewhere
at that party in
Morgantown
after smoking
all that opium
like being thrown
out of a moving
van and rolling
across interstate
like walking away
from that head on
collision
like that time I had
a gun held
to my
head
and the night I met
you
...they haven't quite
killed me yet
like losing two
nights somewhere
at that party in
Morgantown
after smoking
all that opium
like being thrown
out of a moving
van and rolling
across interstate
like walking away
from that head on
collision
like that time I had
a gun held
to my
head
and the night I met
you
...they haven't quite
killed me yet
#fate
#luck
283 reads
6 Comments
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
9th Dec 2022 7:00am
9th Dec 2022 7:00am
No One Is Home
In these woods we dared to be
Though tales were told of tragedy
Of monsters hiding deep in woods
We shan't believe them no one should
Though we don't believe these tales
Could there be more beyond the trails?
Each tree we pass we trek deeper in woods
Down comes the rain and up go our hoods
With thunder and lightning our minds start to wander
Could there really be monsters way out yonder?
Now we're lost cant see our way back
We're frightened we may be under attack
Now running and leaping through trees and...
Though tales were told of tragedy
Of monsters hiding deep in woods
We shan't believe them no one should
Though we don't believe these tales
Could there be more beyond the trails?
Each tree we pass we trek deeper in woods
Down comes the rain and up go our hoods
With thunder and lightning our minds start to wander
Could there really be monsters way out yonder?
Now we're lost cant see our way back
We're frightened we may be under attack
Now running and leaping through trees and...
#fate
#luck
#nightmares #curse
#nightmares #curse
303 reads
0 Comments
LillyValleyPoems
Poem Published
29th Nov 2022 7:28pm
29th Nov 2022 7:28pm
Dopamine
I’d blame it on this Bluemoon
Wondering if I’ll finish this poem
Running out of time…
A concept I can drink around.
Wondering if I’ll finish this poem
Running out of time…
A concept I can drink around.
#luck
#nightmares
389 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
17th Nov 2022 1:12am
17th Nov 2022 1:12am
mission figs and God's good graces
sitting at the table
eating mission
figs
while listening to
chamber music
by my old friend,
Purcell
one fig after another
and I still don't have
any answers to
life
in the sky
the sun laughs
the birds turn to
turds and fall
from the trees
the last fig
gone
(like
you)
i wash my
hands
drink some
water
go upstairs
to rest
...
eating mission
figs
while listening to
chamber music
by my old friend,
Purcell
one fig after another
and I still don't have
any answers to
life
in the sky
the sun laughs
the birds turn to
turds and fall
from the trees
the last fig
gone
(like
you)
i wash my
hands
drink some
water
go upstairs
to rest
...
#luck
237 reads
4 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Oct 2022 1:01am
27th Oct 2022 1:01am
How Did I Lose Her Again?
The first time Olia broke up with me, I felt as if my life was over.
I thought love had ended for her and me, but good fortune was on our side.
After about two years had passed, she tried to rekindle our love.
I couldn’t believe it when Olia called me and said she wanted to see me.
When I went to Olia’s apartment, she could sense my uneasiness.
She spoke to me kindly, and she made me feel comfortable around her.
I didn’t expect this to happen, but somehow, she took me back.
Olia forgave me, and she gave me a chance that I didn’t deserve.
...
I thought love had ended for her and me, but good fortune was on our side.
After about two years had passed, she tried to rekindle our love.
I couldn’t believe it when Olia called me and said she wanted to see me.
When I went to Olia’s apartment, she could sense my uneasiness.
She spoke to me kindly, and she made me feel comfortable around her.
I didn’t expect this to happen, but somehow, she took me back.
Olia forgave me, and she gave me a chance that I didn’t deserve.
...
#love
#relationships
#breakup
#shame
#luck
311 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Sep 2022 12:08pm
15th Sep 2022 12:08pm
She Walked Down The Street
She walked down the street in
a dress so tight and smile
mile long but walked past me
and to who her date was to be.
a dress so tight and smile
mile long but walked past me
and to who her date was to be.
#fiction
#dialogue
#luck
#sensual
#temptation
293 reads
0 Comments
nealmorell
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2022 4:00pm
2nd Sep 2022 4:00pm
dream property prancer
the aura of the garden is stunning
statues like marble gods are sunning
this wildly familiar dream home
predictably finds me happily alone
with round hills rolling off in the distance
a sense of peace brings easy indifference
i return here in those vivid dreams
far more real than they might seem
while it’s clear that everything crumbles
an obsession with smooth can make me stumble
this realm of mine soothes and reminds
there’s more behind what meets the eye
i pray to live there when i die
to...
statues like marble gods are sunning
this wildly familiar dream home
predictably finds me happily alone
with round hills rolling off in the distance
a sense of peace brings easy indifference
i return here in those vivid dreams
far more real than they might seem
while it’s clear that everything crumbles
an obsession with smooth can make me stumble
this realm of mine soothes and reminds
there’s more behind what meets the eye
i pray to live there when i die
to...
#fate
#mythology
#luck
271 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 12:12pm
31st Aug 2022 12:12pm
Blonde Chick Walking On The Beach
I saw this blonde chick
walking on the beach
whose friends gave
her the name Cherry.
She said "hi" and
kept walking.
walking on the beach
whose friends gave
her the name Cherry.
She said "hi" and
kept walking.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#luck
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