Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Styxian
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 10:54pm
15th Dec 2024 10:54pm
Red Skirt
Is this the awake...
Sprawled like so,
as with death, she sleeps
I'd think she left with it.
Eyes closed, but flitting
as her legs were
the first night we met
Now, as not one thing of her moves,
I watch my last kiss dry
slow, upon the shadowed curve
of her breast
Her skirt, the same one
that flick-flocked across my path
just days ago, now wraps
like a smock, over
the bony back of my chair
I bunch it up; All the flowers
that it smells like
All the flowers that it...
Sprawled like so,
as with death, she sleeps
I'd think she left with it.
Eyes closed, but flitting
as her legs were
the first night we met
Now, as not one thing of her moves,
I watch my last kiss dry
slow, upon the shadowed curve
of her breast
Her skirt, the same one
that flick-flocked across my path
just days ago, now wraps
like a smock, over
the bony back of my chair
I bunch it up; All the flowers
that it smells like
All the flowers that it...
#lover
#lust
388 reads
17 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 1:28pm
23rd Jun 2022 1:28pm
well hung
your love
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
#sex
#lover
#seductive
489 reads
9 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
8th Apr 2022 1:12am
8th Apr 2022 1:12am
Beach Glass
Smooth as beach glass, blue and green
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
#secrets
#beach
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
638 reads
25 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
12th Apr 2023 00:42am
12th Apr 2023 00:42am
occurred to me
today was hard
I don’t want to bore you
already look pissed off
with my clothes then
into bed
turns out she’d already
heard
I don’t want to bore you
already look pissed off
with my clothes then
into bed
turns out she’d already
heard
#lover
145 reads
0 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 7:26am
18th Jan 2025 7:26am
large earrings
i thought
of using
her large
earrings
like handles,
to pull
her closer
to me,
like
i do
when i
wrap
my fist
into her
long hair,
that spills
over
the joy
she is
giving me.
of using
her large
earrings
like handles,
to pull
her closer
to me,
like
i do
when i
wrap
my fist
into her
long hair,
that spills
over
the joy
she is
giving me.
#erotic
#lover
#lust
145 reads
14 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2023 11:47pm
22nd Dec 2023 11:47pm
Perversion
Tie my arms behind my back
and stack your razor kisses.
This Missus is ready for her spankings.
Thanking my lucky stars,
though scars form from trauma;
drama energizes the torment.
Savoring the moments of your best attribute,
brute yet gentle, therein lies my conflict.
Licked so hard that nothing matters.
Shattering all hope to break free.
Agree to disagree; I am not safe here.
I fear the repercussions of a good time.
Bedtime comes early; the night has begun.
Shunning myself, slipping into survival. ...
and stack your razor kisses.
This Missus is ready for her spankings.
Thanking my lucky stars,
though scars form from trauma;
drama energizes the torment.
Savoring the moments of your best attribute,
brute yet gentle, therein lies my conflict.
Licked so hard that nothing matters.
Shattering all hope to break free.
Agree to disagree; I am not safe here.
I fear the repercussions of a good time.
Bedtime comes early; the night has begun.
Shunning myself, slipping into survival. ...
#lust
#lover
#dirty
40 reads
7 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Dec 2019 7:49pm
1st Dec 2019 7:49pm
Massa House
#sex
#erotic
#lover
980 reads
6 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 10:45pm
22nd Oct 2024 10:45pm
Love Poem
When they first met,
they made love with their eyes...
In her lonely nights
thoughts of him-
loving and lustful
penetrated through her mind
into her heart,
impregnating her soul;
where the thoughts fused
with her emotions
forming a zygote
of words.
Thus, how poetry was
conceived ...
they made love with their eyes...
In her lonely nights
thoughts of him-
loving and lustful
penetrated through her mind
into her heart,
impregnating her soul;
where the thoughts fused
with her emotions
forming a zygote
of words.
Thus, how poetry was
conceived ...
#LifeAsAWriter
#love
#lover
#lust
#WritingPoetry
366 reads
22 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 9:25pm
9th Nov 2024 9:25pm
Putting It Off
Another lazy day
recuperating from another long work week
avoiding chores
to indulge in fantasy
sexual, of course
Wishing you'd drop by
to help take this edge off
(you know what I'm talking about, don't you?)
It could still be low key
but instead of a space heater and a blanket
I'd have you to keep me warm
We'd attempt to watch a movie
but it wouldn't take long
and my mouth would be on you and in you
and you would take my firmness in your hand
and do wonders to me
Clearly, craving becomes a...
recuperating from another long work week
avoiding chores
to indulge in fantasy
sexual, of course
Wishing you'd drop by
to help take this edge off
(you know what I'm talking about, don't you?)
It could still be low key
but instead of a space heater and a blanket
I'd have you to keep me warm
We'd attempt to watch a movie
but it wouldn't take long
and my mouth would be on you and in you
and you would take my firmness in your hand
and do wonders to me
Clearly, craving becomes a...
#lover
#lust
#sex
224 reads
9 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:30pm
29th Nov 2024 8:30pm
Dirty little slut...
To press me against the wall... harshly...
To the point of pain... not caring.
To break the kiss... from my tender lips, bleeding.
To give myself to you... completely.
To melt in your strong arms... powerless.
To fall on the bed of sighs and screams... begging.
To vulgarity sounds in a non-stop rhythm... unintelligible, confused.
To where you take me and don't stop... oblivion.
To stretch the night from yesterday to tomorrow... madness.
To know that the day is hidden behind the groans... darkness.
To forget absolutely about conscience and...
To the point of pain... not caring.
To break the kiss... from my tender lips, bleeding.
To give myself to you... completely.
To melt in your strong arms... powerless.
To fall on the bed of sighs and screams... begging.
To vulgarity sounds in a non-stop rhythm... unintelligible, confused.
To where you take me and don't stop... oblivion.
To stretch the night from yesterday to tomorrow... madness.
To know that the day is hidden behind the groans... darkness.
To forget absolutely about conscience and...
#boyfriend
#lover
#lust #sex
#lust #sex
378 reads
34 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 12:40pm
12th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Your Sweet As Honey
#erotic
#lover
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
263 reads
6 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 2:33pm
12th Nov 2023 2:33pm
strength in femininity
the oaken sweetness
of barrel-aged bourbon
her heart
of barrel-aged bourbon
her heart
#strength
#wife
#women
#marriage
#lover
193 reads
2 Comments
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