Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
#lover
Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
AverageJoe
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
The Scarlet of Desire (Redux)
When night falls in shadows which deepen your eyes
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
#lover
#lust
#passion
242 reads
7 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 3:49pm
4th Nov 2024 3:49pm
Sanctuary For Souls Heartfelt Refuge
welcone to my heart
use it as a pillow ~ for
your tired soul to rest
use it as a pillow ~ for
your tired soul to rest
#love
#lover
#senryu
152 reads
12 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 00:15am
6th Mar 2025 00:15am
I know I'm doing this wrong, but I can't stop
You look at me like I'm heartbreak
like you're waiting for me to move that
extra inch and break your ribcage open
on my way out the door
And I won't lie
sometimes I think of running
in the same way I always think of running
because there isn't a love that
has flooded my veins
that I haven't wanted to escape
and there isn't a love I've run from
that I could bleed out of my soul
Love haunts me more than hate
more than anger
more than fear
If it's possible to die from a feeling
I would...
like you're waiting for me to move that
extra inch and break your ribcage open
on my way out the door
And I won't lie
sometimes I think of running
in the same way I always think of running
because there isn't a love that
has flooded my veins
that I haven't wanted to escape
and there isn't a love I've run from
that I could bleed out of my soul
Love haunts me more than hate
more than anger
more than fear
If it's possible to die from a feeling
I would...
#emotional
#heartbroken
#hurt
#love
#lover
148 reads
6 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
31st Aug 2023 10:55pm
31st Aug 2023 10:55pm
irony
you dripped sarcasm
true to form it was your arsenal
you assault me with poison barbed words
and I cringe inside hearing them
it hurt to be just another woman you were no good for
a Sadist you pride yourself not needing anyone, not really
you deconstruction of my pride took years
systematically charming me then pushing me away
I was the anti heroine for you
just a side chick who could bear your abuse
inflicting emotional damage your forte
and I bore it well
no one would know how many times you tore me down
just to...
true to form it was your arsenal
you assault me with poison barbed words
and I cringe inside hearing them
it hurt to be just another woman you were no good for
a Sadist you pride yourself not needing anyone, not really
you deconstruction of my pride took years
systematically charming me then pushing me away
I was the anti heroine for you
just a side chick who could bear your abuse
inflicting emotional damage your forte
and I bore it well
no one would know how many times you tore me down
just to...
#lust
#lover
196 reads
2 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 00:33am
10th Apr 2025 00:33am
addiction
the chills never saw the summer heat
not that we would ever meet
I'm a little sick inside
and don't even know what to say
it's my participle was dangling
all over your jagged verse
I liked you
the way you cursed
when you came
I'll never be the same
worse, better
apart, together
spreading chapters in unheld inhibition
and every conceivable position
I crave for you
my drug
my drug
it's better
cause I'm a little sick inside
not that we would ever meet
I'm a little sick inside
and don't even know what to say
it's my participle was dangling
all over your jagged verse
I liked you
the way you cursed
when you came
I'll never be the same
worse, better
apart, together
spreading chapters in unheld inhibition
and every conceivable position
I crave for you
my drug
my drug
it's better
cause I'm a little sick inside
#addiction
#drugs
#lover
53 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 12:39pm
10th Apr 2025 12:39pm
Mmm...Dear Diary,
His muscular body serenades the reflection of my alluring mind
Mm… the imagination of my soft moans as he’s watching my finger dance inside me as I grind
Come closer… yes... real close… hold your tongue out
Now savor the sweeten taste from my creamy wet South
Let me smear it over your lips
Losing myself in the… mmm… a prisoner of his desire fetishes, his hunger when he eases inside me, softly kissing my lips
Widening my pussy for the long slips and hard dips
Binding my wrists behind my back ... pleasure with him, we blend...
Mm… the imagination of my soft moans as he’s watching my finger dance inside me as I grind
Come closer… yes... real close… hold your tongue out
Now savor the sweeten taste from my creamy wet South
Let me smear it over your lips
Losing myself in the… mmm… a prisoner of his desire fetishes, his hunger when he eases inside me, softly kissing my lips
Widening my pussy for the long slips and hard dips
Binding my wrists behind my back ... pleasure with him, we blend...
#lover
#mythology
#water
125 reads
runningturtle87
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 12:21pm
6th Sep 2024 12:21pm
Back and Forth
Back and Forth
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
#BDSM
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
266 reads
4 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 7:39am
25th Feb 2025 7:39am
When the moon was looking at us through the hazy window
grey roof
legs waving in the air
colorless moaning spots hitting the wall
poems, dancing in the ashtray stealing the moon's glow
Inbox 60% full
overflow yet to happen
the chirm of dawn
sinking into a star before the sun rises...
legs waving in the air
colorless moaning spots hitting the wall
poems, dancing in the ashtray stealing the moon's glow
Inbox 60% full
overflow yet to happen
the chirm of dawn
sinking into a star before the sun rises...
#lover
#lust
#orgasm
241 reads
15 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
9th May 2022 11:20pm
9th May 2022 11:20pm
Nite Nite
When it comes to massages I've given my fair share
All along the temples and the scalp, running my fingers through their hair
Slowly down their nape, outward over the shoulders and down their arms
Greeting the tips of each finger with a kiss to show that I mean no harm
Now it's time to dig in and work your back
Gently but firmly up and down your spine til the top of your butt crack
Spreading out in wide sweeping motions
Hands searching all around the scapulas for knots gliding on lotion
Several kinks found and slowly kneaded out
I watch...
All along the temples and the scalp, running my fingers through their hair
Slowly down their nape, outward over the shoulders and down their arms
Greeting the tips of each finger with a kiss to show that I mean no harm
Now it's time to dig in and work your back
Gently but firmly up and down your spine til the top of your butt crack
Spreading out in wide sweeping motions
Hands searching all around the scapulas for knots gliding on lotion
Several kinks found and slowly kneaded out
I watch...
#love
#lover
#erotic #dirty
#erotic #dirty
384 reads
2 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
17th Apr 2022 11:09pm
17th Apr 2022 11:09pm
Fribbledom
17 / 30
Fribbledom
If I told You that I’ll love You forever
because I am not physically
eternal then either I’d be lying
or merely playing a game –
Right?
Is it all a game, anyways,
this interaction lovers
fribble at?
In and out
breaking hearts
on a rebound
making up
from an inside
& outside it all looks to be a
silly confusing game.
I want to say, “ I love You for now.”
The present sounds a lot better
than both of us trying to inhale
the...
Fribbledom
If I told You that I’ll love You forever
because I am not physically
eternal then either I’d be lying
or merely playing a game –
Right?
Is it all a game, anyways,
this interaction lovers
fribble at?
In and out
breaking hearts
on a rebound
making up
from an inside
& outside it all looks to be a
silly confusing game.
I want to say, “ I love You for now.”
The present sounds a lot better
than both of us trying to inhale
the...
#relationships
#lover
#NaPoWriMo2022
449 reads
6 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 1:31pm
19th Aug 2024 1:31pm
In My Dream, You Appear
#lover
#passion
267 reads
5 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 12:28pm
23rd Jun 2022 12:28pm
well hung
your love
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
#sex
#lover
#seductive
512 reads
9 Comments
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