Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
#lover
Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Betty
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 10:25pm
13th Oct 2024 10:25pm
Even then love knew
Esoteric bullshit like
love at first sight
could eat a bag
of hot dick
because I’ve born fucking witness
on this ragged road
of shoulda-coulda-woulda
shaking my empty bones
in a self-sabotage closet
Lust is.
Desire is.
Obsession is.
but love.
love was illiterate
until I caught you
watching me
watching you
(watch me)
back before we twisted sheets
and made lust bleed for mercy
before my teeth found your shoulder
and the sweaty outline...
love at first sight
could eat a bag
of hot dick
because I’ve born fucking witness
on this ragged road
of shoulda-coulda-woulda
shaking my empty bones
in a self-sabotage closet
Lust is.
Desire is.
Obsession is.
but love.
love was illiterate
until I caught you
watching me
watching you
(watch me)
back before we twisted sheets
and made lust bleed for mercy
before my teeth found your shoulder
and the sweaty outline...
#love
#lover
#passion #Romanticism
#passion #Romanticism
330 reads
30 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:55pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:55pm
Orgasmic Meditation
#erotic
#lover
#orgasm
#passion
#seductive
215 reads
5 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 1:10am
19th Nov 2024 1:10am
Cut
The blade becomes implausible to survival
sharpened against time's compression
mixed with dust and sorrows
waiting on the lust in me
my blood shed at your doorstep
tip of the blade
till it's deep inside
bite my lip until you taste it
then leave me here to die
sharpened against time's compression
mixed with dust and sorrows
waiting on the lust in me
my blood shed at your doorstep
tip of the blade
till it's deep inside
bite my lip until you taste it
then leave me here to die
#emotional
#lover
56 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 11:20am
29th Aug 2024 11:20am
a futile love story...
your unheard voice
which i hear in my silence,
you are the man
who has given me
warmth through your words
in heavy snowfall
whose presence
has always shown
the sunrise to my
sleeping shadow
who has filled my dry eyes
with the brightness of self-confidence
who has shaded this restless earth
in the form of a purple sky
who has given moon-like satisfaction
to my hungry pen
who has given his
supernatural glow to this budding bud
who is a happy soul,
whose presence makes
my moment...
which i hear in my silence,
you are the man
who has given me
warmth through your words
in heavy snowfall
whose presence
has always shown
the sunrise to my
sleeping shadow
who has filled my dry eyes
with the brightness of self-confidence
who has shaded this restless earth
in the form of a purple sky
who has given moon-like satisfaction
to my hungry pen
who has given his
supernatural glow to this budding bud
who is a happy soul,
whose presence makes
my moment...
#love
#lover
185 reads
14 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 3:18am
15th Jul 2024 3:18am
Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
There is thunder
inside me
My heartbeat
beats loudly
Chaotically
(for)
My God
My Lover
I descend, upon her
My hands extend soft lightning
from my fingers, to
Her chest rising, swelling
Blending angst with hunger
Equality within our needs
So in tuned
with my needs and
the rocking headboard
he occasionally bangs
his head on
Overly eager, but I
try to compensate
with calm whispers
Though as deep voiced
as I am inside her
In sync...
inside me
My heartbeat
beats loudly
Chaotically
(for)
My God
My Lover
I descend, upon her
My hands extend soft lightning
from my fingers, to
Her chest rising, swelling
Blending angst with hunger
Equality within our needs
So in tuned
with my needs and
the rocking headboard
he occasionally bangs
his head on
Overly eager, but I
try to compensate
with calm whispers
Though as deep voiced
as I am inside her
In sync...
#FallingInLove
#lover
564 reads
20 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 6:10pm
22nd Nov 2024 6:10pm
Sold
#erotic
#lover
#ShortStory
131 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
8th Apr 2022 1:12am
8th Apr 2022 1:12am
Beach Glass
Smooth as beach glass, blue and green
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
#secrets
#beach
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
602 reads
25 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 10:18pm
30th Aug 2024 10:18pm
Porn
#dirty
#erotic
#lover
399 reads
17 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
12th Apr 2023 00:42am
12th Apr 2023 00:42am
occurred to me
today was hard
I don’t want to bore you
already look pissed off
with my clothes then
into bed
turns out she’d already
heard
I don’t want to bore you
already look pissed off
with my clothes then
into bed
turns out she’d already
heard
#lover
124 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Dec 2019 7:49pm
1st Dec 2019 7:49pm
Massa House
#sex
#erotic
#lover
952 reads
6 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 8:13am
26th Oct 2024 8:13am
Your Woman....
..will always have a home within me
......no matter your unspoken aches
the masks you have to wear
...........the tasks you have to bear
just make it home to me baby..
...spread your thighs...and your mind
let me remind you...
...what a steeled...stilled Love feels like
etched in stone...we're all alone
...away from the battlefield we call Life
let's fuck...as we strive
...to steal pleasure away from
the pandemonium of our day to day
.......
......no matter your unspoken aches
the masks you have to wear
...........the tasks you have to bear
just make it home to me baby..
...spread your thighs...and your mind
let me remind you...
...what a steeled...stilled Love feels like
etched in stone...we're all alone
...away from the battlefield we call Life
let's fuck...as we strive
...to steal pleasure away from
the pandemonium of our day to day
.......
#hope
#love
#lover
207 reads
4 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 9:48pm
11th Jun 2024 9:48pm
I wish I Would've Paid Attention
You caught me on the rebound
Still nursing a bruised heart
From the Iove before you
But you gave me hope
That love could last erasing
all of the pain from the past
How could I know our love
Would go so wrong
That you'd starve me of
Affection and your attention
Chipping away at my love
Until there was nothing there
I searched my past for
Something I might have done
To make you want to bring
Another woman into the picture
But I just couldn't think of one
Don't know why you had to ...
Still nursing a bruised heart
From the Iove before you
But you gave me hope
That love could last erasing
all of the pain from the past
How could I know our love
Would go so wrong
That you'd starve me of
Affection and your attention
Chipping away at my love
Until there was nothing there
I searched my past for
Something I might have done
To make you want to bring
Another woman into the picture
But I just couldn't think of one
Don't know why you had to ...
#despair
#love
#lover #sadness
#lover #sadness
184 reads
5 Comments
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