Poems About Hope by Top Critiquers
#hope
Poems about hope by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Will there ever be peace on earth?
Pestilence, death, destruction and gore
Disease, tragedy, bombs and war
Trudging through a world of shit, up to my goddamn waste
Thrashing, madness, fed up of this human race
The innocent souls cry out for peace
The cure has come to erase your disease
Ride the storm, kiss the dust
Peace on Earth, freedom or bust
Gluttons, greed, egotistical humans wanting more
Psychotic devolution, plaguing whore
Only one choice left, interstellar law
Obliterate, annihilate, disintegrate you all
Observing your cities crumbling down ...
Disease, tragedy, bombs and war
Trudging through a world of shit, up to my goddamn waste
Thrashing, madness, fed up of this human race
The innocent souls cry out for peace
The cure has come to erase your disease
Ride the storm, kiss the dust
Peace on Earth, freedom or bust
Gluttons, greed, egotistical humans wanting more
Psychotic devolution, plaguing whore
Only one choice left, interstellar law
Obliterate, annihilate, disintegrate you all
Observing your cities crumbling down ...
#earth
#hope
#inspirational
#peace
#war
112 reads
8 Comments
The Route
Spinning inside my head tonight
Your words left a lasting impression
It’s kinda overwhelming to think
Within the context of your confession
Truths are heavy when laced in guilt
Addiction leaves tiny splinters inside
What you felt was the bricks you carry
Veiled by liquid courage and selfish pride
There is no judgement in this room
Being a witness to every single doubt
I’ll help you return to former glories
Because I memorized the entire route
Your words left a lasting impression
It’s kinda overwhelming to think
Within the context of your confession
Truths are heavy when laced in guilt
Addiction leaves tiny splinters inside
What you felt was the bricks you carry
Veiled by liquid courage and selfish pride
There is no judgement in this room
Being a witness to every single doubt
I’ll help you return to former glories
Because I memorized the entire route
#courage
#hope
#redemption
193 reads
19 Comments
Blow Out The Candles
As birthdays go
This is one is not so bad
A smile on my face
My health
My family
New friends
New ventures etc...
There are thoughts hidden
behind the smile
Like it's cold outside
are people warm?
Do they have food?
There is a fire raging.
How are they?
There are wars all over
outside and internally
Will we make it as a people?
Blowing out these candles
I smile and feel the tracks of tears
of both joy and grief
I made a wish
Now, if this one comes true
we will all...
This is one is not so bad
A smile on my face
My health
My family
New friends
New ventures etc...
There are thoughts hidden
behind the smile
Like it's cold outside
are people warm?
Do they have food?
There is a fire raging.
How are they?
There are wars all over
outside and internally
Will we make it as a people?
Blowing out these candles
I smile and feel the tracks of tears
of both joy and grief
I made a wish
Now, if this one comes true
we will all...
#courage
#fear
#hope
179 reads
24 Comments
Rewriting My Story (revised)
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
#hope
#lyrics
#TimeHeals
51 reads
2 Comments
the multiple personality pages
sensitive malady, I am alone in thought
grateful for life
tender understanding
even in strife, blessed, to live at all
rising to greet each day
and beat the challenges thrown at me
God please guard my mind and tongue...
writing to express my delusions
to hold captive, the doubts that plague
capturing my demons, on page
so I can evaluate, my own health
diagnosis doctor?
voices with a side of granduer
elevating madness at times
I don't always see another way
it's impossible to...
grateful for life
tender understanding
even in strife, blessed, to live at all
rising to greet each day
and beat the challenges thrown at me
God please guard my mind and tongue...
writing to express my delusions
to hold captive, the doubts that plague
capturing my demons, on page
so I can evaluate, my own health
diagnosis doctor?
voices with a side of granduer
elevating madness at times
I don't always see another way
it's impossible to...
#dark
#hope
#MentalHealth #uplifting
#MentalHealth #uplifting
105 reads
6 Comments
One Liner....No 2
Even ants have shadows.
#hope
#love
#strength
51 reads
2 Comments
IT FEELS SO GOOD!
OH,
you are working
magic; it feels so
amazingly good;
never imagined anything
could feel so wonderful
YES!
You do it perfectly.
Harder...the stiffness
in my neck is
going away; the ache
is gone too.
YES
it feels so good now.
you are working
magic; it feels so
amazingly good;
never imagined anything
could feel so wonderful
YES!
You do it perfectly.
Harder...the stiffness
in my neck is
going away; the ache
is gone too.
YES
it feels so good now.
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational
#strength
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2 Comments
Single
The sight of this pretty little girl swinging
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat...
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#respect
#strength
90 reads
8 Comments
PC Babe … Yet Another Collage
Yet another work of art
I’m on a roll
Decided tonight
This is a one year project
Collages will be made daily
March 15, 2025 the project ends
Then I will try to get a gallery show
And if that fails
I’ll rent a space and do it myself
That’s actually a better idea anyway
Take no prisoners …
I’m on a roll
Decided tonight
This is a one year project
Collages will be made daily
March 15, 2025 the project ends
Then I will try to get a gallery show
And if that fails
I’ll rent a space and do it myself
That’s actually a better idea anyway
Take no prisoners …
#art
#dreams
#hope
#SelfReflection
#StreamOfConsciousness
214 reads
22 Comments
A method to the madness
For sure whatever is the reason there's always an responsible method, to the deepness of the madness, that you and I must truly understand that behind everything. There's a reaction with a raw and uncut point of consequence, that will affect us in ways. THAT sometimes don't make sense. 🤨 BUT yet it's still apart of us, through the process of the journey and travel and walk. THAT we must never forget how to navigate, through the process of what is happening in our lives. FOR sure everything, will stay with you in high sight of trying. Desperately to forget but you can't forget the...
#anger
#confusion
#grief
#hope
#love
55 reads
8 Comments
fruit tree
i.
each word you spit
instead of convey
sits heavy as a grave
on your shoulders
we can’t carry the whole world
in our arms, especially
across barbwire beliefs
and minefields of thought
whispering ‘enemy’
it’s time for a proper burial
if we can reach the river
and lay it all down
without giving in
and killing one another first
ii.
i once wanted to build a poem
resembling a tree house
made of light and truth
so that anytime it...
each word you spit
instead of convey
sits heavy as a grave
on your shoulders
we can’t carry the whole world
in our arms, especially
across barbwire beliefs
and minefields of thought
whispering ‘enemy’
it’s time for a proper burial
if we can reach the river
and lay it all down
without giving in
and killing one another first
ii.
i once wanted to build a poem
resembling a tree house
made of light and truth
so that anytime it...
#hope
#trees
566 reads
18 Comments
Shame On Me
Shame on me
For loving things
I can't restrain.
A snake on a leash.
A dog not following.
A cat ignoring.
A kid, envying.
Shame on me
For wanting things.
I could never obtain.
A lack of worldly sin.
A lottery win.
An image I can pretend.
A painting of the wind.
Shame on me
A human being,
Only something you're seeing.
Not much to invest.
Not a treasure chest.
Just hoping for the best.
For loving things
I can't restrain.
A snake on a leash.
A dog not following.
A cat ignoring.
A kid, envying.
Shame on me
For wanting things.
I could never obtain.
A lack of worldly sin.
A lottery win.
An image I can pretend.
A painting of the wind.
Shame on me
A human being,
Only something you're seeing.
Not much to invest.
Not a treasure chest.
Just hoping for the best.
#disappointment
#hope
148 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Hope by Top Critiquers