Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique
#holiday
Poems about holidays seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SWIMMING NAKED IN THE SEA
Swimming naked in the sea
makes me feel wonderful, free,
merging with nature around,
chilling to the tidal sound.
Clothes to one side on dry land
leave plenty skin to be tanned
when I dry off on the shore
lain on towel on the floor.
That's the pleasure of nude bathing
in the tide's incoming waving.
Nobody else here is offended -
we are as nature intended.
makes me feel wonderful, free,
merging with nature around,
chilling to the tidal sound.
Clothes to one side on dry land
leave plenty skin to be tanned
when I dry off on the shore
lain on towel on the floor.
That's the pleasure of nude bathing
in the tide's incoming waving.
Nobody else here is offended -
we are as nature intended.
#beach
#holiday
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WE BLEND SO WELL
We blend so well
au naturel,
among the bods -
shapes evens, odds -
of those like us
who do not fuss
with what to wear
but go all-bare,
the tones of skin,
so varyin'.
Self-consciousness,
all other stress,
we thus release
in the sea breeze.
It's you and me,
of constraints free,
back to nature,
Temperature
meeting half way
cool of the bay
in which we swim
on tempted whim.
It is the place,
for touching base,
where we can talk
while in sun...
au naturel,
among the bods -
shapes evens, odds -
of those like us
who do not fuss
with what to wear
but go all-bare,
the tones of skin,
so varyin'.
Self-consciousness,
all other stress,
we thus release
in the sea breeze.
It's you and me,
of constraints free,
back to nature,
Temperature
meeting half way
cool of the bay
in which we swim
on tempted whim.
It is the place,
for touching base,
where we can talk
while in sun...
#beach
#holiday
#romantic
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2 Comments
Pumpkin Spice
Taurus field makes the ghost.
An evil laugh.
Souls who roast.
October night,
Moon in the sky.
Dreamers lost in a lullaby.
Fate comes to harvest the rye.
Grains of sorrow, that multiply.
The taco shell,
So crunchy and dry.
The forbidden fruit.
Hidden inside.
The spicy congregation,
Amongst the coast.
The Brookshire train wreck.
Victims tied to a post.
An exhilarating sensation.
While the mannequins pose.
The godless ritual,
Of being betrothed.
The pumpkin ripened in a pie. ...
An evil laugh.
Souls who roast.
October night,
Moon in the sky.
Dreamers lost in a lullaby.
Fate comes to harvest the rye.
Grains of sorrow, that multiply.
The taco shell,
So crunchy and dry.
The forbidden fruit.
Hidden inside.
The spicy congregation,
Amongst the coast.
The Brookshire train wreck.
Victims tied to a post.
An exhilarating sensation.
While the mannequins pose.
The godless ritual,
Of being betrothed.
The pumpkin ripened in a pie. ...
#holiday
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10 Comments
This One Independence Day Idiot
I remember that on this one Fourth of July,
we told Dad that the coals are hot and ready
for the burgers and ribs... but that was before
Oswald poured water on the barbecue grill.
we told Dad that the coals are hot and ready
for the burgers and ribs... but that was before
Oswald poured water on the barbecue grill.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#holiday
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JoBeth's Newest Party Dress
Richard spotted
JoBeth's newest
party dress.
JoBeth's newest
party dress.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#holiday
#seductive
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2 Comments
What Are You Looking At, Prick?
Nicole came to
our little party
all in blue and
noticed that Grant
has that certain
look in his eyes.
our little party
all in blue and
noticed that Grant
has that certain
look in his eyes.
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#holiday
#seductive
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Halloween
And when spooky month is near.
We dress in costumes and produce fear.
We wear costumes,special gear.
To chase all the bad spirits away.
In order to collect as much candy as possible.
Knocking on the door,walking down the path.
We collect candy,a sweet delight.
Whether you are dressed as a vampire.
Or if you are dressed as a monster.
An egyptian mummy, makes people run faster.
In this town we call home.
Let's all sing along to the pumpkin song.
Jack'o'lanterns, orange and green.
With a light,a...
We dress in costumes and produce fear.
We wear costumes,special gear.
To chase all the bad spirits away.
In order to collect as much candy as possible.
Knocking on the door,walking down the path.
We collect candy,a sweet delight.
Whether you are dressed as a vampire.
Or if you are dressed as a monster.
An egyptian mummy, makes people run faster.
In this town we call home.
Let's all sing along to the pumpkin song.
Jack'o'lanterns, orange and green.
With a light,a...
#Halloween
#holiday
#inspirational #motivational
#inspirational #motivational
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ARRIVING AT THE NUDE RESORT
Baring our all,
we let clothes fall,
like leaves from trees
in autumn breeze.
Stepping into
unhindered view
of the body
naturally,....
without the drapes
that mask its shapes
when 'bout our way
everyday.
Let the fresh air
touch skin and hair
as well, later,
as pool water.
Everyone
being as one
in nakedness,
nature's undress.
we let clothes fall,
like leaves from trees
in autumn breeze.
Stepping into
unhindered view
of the body
naturally,....
without the drapes
that mask its shapes
when 'bout our way
everyday.
Let the fresh air
touch skin and hair
as well, later,
as pool water.
Everyone
being as one
in nakedness,
nature's undress.
#holiday
#rhyming
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5 Comments
STEP INTO THE SEA....
Step into the sea
in all my glory,
There's no finer way
makes me feel O.K.,
when cold on my skin
next feels warm within,
and in such good mood,
I forget I'm nude.
At one with nature
when I so venture.
in all my glory,
There's no finer way
makes me feel O.K.,
when cold on my skin
next feels warm within,
and in such good mood,
I forget I'm nude.
At one with nature
when I so venture.
#beach
#holiday
#rhyming
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I BOUGHT A BIKINI (NOT THE ONE BY HER)
I bought a bikini
so you would notice me
when we went to the sea.
Make you think my body,
now out of puberty,
enviably sexy.
Undercut rivalry
of another beauty,
be all you want to see.
How about it, honey?
Is my figure easy
on your eye easily?
so you would notice me
when we went to the sea.
Make you think my body,
now out of puberty,
enviably sexy.
Undercut rivalry
of another beauty,
be all you want to see.
How about it, honey?
Is my figure easy
on your eye easily?
#beach
#holiday
#jealousy
#rhyming
#women
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Unsolved Mysteries
The families of Canadian tourists Maya Buttreeks and Jenny Tayla who had never met and whose daughters died under completely different circumstances in two different countries, faced a strangely similar problem. Maya died in July 1996 after falling on her forehead in a hotel lobby in Jamaica. Jenny died of a heart attack one month earlier, while vacationing in Sydney Australia. Maya was returned to Canada without her lungs, kidneys and part of his brain. Jenny was sent back to Canada with two hearts and four lungs. The families are still waiting for a believable explanation.
#death
#fiction
#holiday #mystery
#holiday #mystery
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Have a blast!!
If you're gonna get high or pound down booze
Think before you act, sparking up that fuse
You don't want to end up like this guy here
Enjoy the 4th everyone!
Think before you act, sparking up that fuse
You don't want to end up like this guy here
Enjoy the 4th everyone!
#holiday
#motivational
#temptation #ThrillSeeking
#temptation #ThrillSeeking
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DU Poetry : Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique