Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique
#holiday
Poems about holidays seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
After the Banquet
Christmas Day
Post-prandial droop
Listening to Ed Sheeran
For whatever reason
Bloated and satisfied
Below, family and friends
While I sit upstairs
Good to rest
Good to unspool
Good to be
Post-prandial droop
Listening to Ed Sheeran
For whatever reason
Bloated and satisfied
Below, family and friends
While I sit upstairs
Good to rest
Good to unspool
Good to be
#love
#family
#holiday
#meditation
#PersonalGrowth
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nineteen sixties
donkeys are nicer than hotels
that clog up the scenery of the beaches as they carry kids along the
sand upon which
the hoteliers will never never understand
that clog up the scenery of the beaches as they carry kids along the
sand upon which
the hoteliers will never never understand
#holiday
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A leaf.
A green 🥭
Leaf 🍃 bear
My water of lilies.
In the pond of
Autumn🍂
And the leaves
That grafts and crests the Penny.
Romancen
Regards
Essex Lynny.
Leaf 🍃 bear
My water of lilies.
In the pond of
Autumn🍂
And the leaves
That grafts and crests the Penny.
Romancen
Regards
Essex Lynny.
#holiday
#FathersDay
#NewYear
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1 Comment
StevO Tha Seagull III
It was a beautiful morning, in the seaside town of Tenby.
All the holiday makers were in their best summer garms, lookin' trendy.
StevO The Seagull was gliding around over the town, listening to drill music in his headphones, baring a frown!
Sunglasses on his boatrace, that were balancing on his beak, when he decided to glide down for a better look on the street.
He saw a bald slaphead, with an angry red face, and decided to take a crap, on his head in the place.
The man had a fit Mrs, that couldn't help but laugh, and the man yanked her by...
All the holiday makers were in their best summer garms, lookin' trendy.
StevO The Seagull was gliding around over the town, listening to drill music in his headphones, baring a frown!
Sunglasses on his boatrace, that were balancing on his beak, when he decided to glide down for a better look on the street.
He saw a bald slaphead, with an angry red face, and decided to take a crap, on his head in the place.
The man had a fit Mrs, that couldn't help but laugh, and the man yanked her by...
#birds
#beach
#holiday #travel
#holiday #travel
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THE HIDDEN YOU
#beach
#holiday
#rhyming
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4 Comments
Thing About Saint Patrick's Day
Epic thing about Saint
Patrick's Day is people
trying to catch leprechauns
for their pot of gold.
Patrick's Day is people
trying to catch leprechauns
for their pot of gold.
#holiday
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#mythology
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upon this lovely january morn
a debut saltation for 2024
“I like the dreams of the future better than the history
of the past.”—Thomas Jefferson
upon this lovely january morn,
o how my heart, intrepid in its pulse,
keeps vigil, as the fledgling year is born,
while earth's nerves, in her afterbirth, convulse!
she sucks her first breath from the virgin wind
...
“I like the dreams of the future better than the history
of the past.”—Thomas Jefferson
upon this lovely january morn,
o how my heart, intrepid in its pulse,
keeps vigil, as the fledgling year is born,
while earth's nerves, in her afterbirth, convulse!
she sucks her first breath from the virgin wind
...
#hope
#holiday
#TimeHeals
#MovingOn
#NewYear
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NUDIST RESORT AD JINGLE
Our nudist beach
is out of reach
of prying eyes,
so, gals and guys,...
Come take a break,
air bits that shake
out in the sun,
no cossies on.
Here you can strip
to take a dip.
in the cool sea
naturally.
Or just sunbathe
away from wave
for those who plan
all-over tan!
is out of reach
of prying eyes,
so, gals and guys,...
Come take a break,
air bits that shake
out in the sun,
no cossies on.
Here you can strip
to take a dip.
in the cool sea
naturally.
Or just sunbathe
away from wave
for those who plan
all-over tan!
#beach
#holiday
#rhyming #travel
#rhyming #travel
130 reads
6 Comments
New Year's Day (Reveille) Reprise
#lust
#holiday
#coffee
158 reads
10 Comments
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
May all of you have a wonderful holiday and New Year
May peace and strength be with you all!
May peace and strength be with you all!
#holiday
109 reads
14 Comments
Reindeer Game
#holiday
#limerick
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4 Comments
Family Christmas Car Rides From The Past
Sitting in the back was always my preference.
I couldn’t tell you why I just wanted to vibe.
Vibe alone at the time.
Big headphones blocked my ears.
Visualization at such a young age was really activated.
Back then I wasn't even over stimulated.
Like many today.
Overstimulated.
Who are we to blame them?
If I fell asleep I’d wake up after like I never slept.
Can’t wait to see Grandma and Grandpa.
The home cooked food would be eaten as long as I could handle.
I anticipated some really cool gifts.
I’d make sure my sugar intake...
I couldn’t tell you why I just wanted to vibe.
Vibe alone at the time.
Big headphones blocked my ears.
Visualization at such a young age was really activated.
Back then I wasn't even over stimulated.
Like many today.
Overstimulated.
Who are we to blame them?
If I fell asleep I’d wake up after like I never slept.
Can’t wait to see Grandma and Grandpa.
The home cooked food would be eaten as long as I could handle.
I anticipated some really cool gifts.
I’d make sure my sugar intake...
#family
#Christmas
#holiday #memories
#holiday #memories
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DU Poetry : Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique