Heartbroken by Top Critiquers Poems
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heartbroken by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
"GUNNA"!!
Gunna, tell on you cause, I'm gunna testify!
Why?
Cause I'm gunna cooperate!!
Cause if not, I'm gunna go to jail!
So I'm gunna do probation, and free myself from this label 🏷 once none as "YSL"!!
Gunna, gunna, gunna, hey 👋 gunna go you know me, gunna, and I'm gunna tell!!
"Gunna"
Re!!
Why?
Cause I'm gunna cooperate!!
Cause if not, I'm gunna go to jail!
So I'm gunna do probation, and free myself from this label 🏷 once none as "YSL"!!
Gunna, gunna, gunna, hey 👋 gunna go you know me, gunna, and I'm gunna tell!!
"Gunna"
Re!!
#loneliness
#heartbroken
#shame
#frustration
#disappointment
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Faded and forgotten
A stalk of wilted flower
broken pencils on the floor
circles etched on wood
that's a memory of me
red red rose
petals dried between pages
of a tear spattered diary
left dusty on a shelf
just a flower
discarded and forgotten
wilted on glass vase
casting shadows on the wall
that's me.
broken pencils on the floor
circles etched on wood
that's a memory of me
red red rose
petals dried between pages
of a tear spattered diary
left dusty on a shelf
just a flower
discarded and forgotten
wilted on glass vase
casting shadows on the wall
that's me.
#sadness
#love
#heartbroken
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"Don't need to mention the names....."
But ever notice those famous singers that been around forever.
They have been there since you were young and were maybe
forced to listen to them by an older sibling.
You have listened to them so long they seep into your head
and take root. So now when they are played on the old time
radio.. You enjoy the old tunes. Though you faintly seem
to remember when you were younger and not that big into it.
Like I told a friend once...."You know you're getting old
when you start understanding and appreciating Mellon camp." ...
They have been there since you were young and were maybe
forced to listen to them by an older sibling.
You have listened to them so long they seep into your head
and take root. So now when they are played on the old time
radio.. You enjoy the old tunes. Though you faintly seem
to remember when you were younger and not that big into it.
Like I told a friend once...."You know you're getting old
when you start understanding and appreciating Mellon camp." ...
#anger
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#heartbroken
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Ice Knife
it used to be
i’d wake to your heart beat
should of been easy to see
but I was in love, in love
with the way you were using me
guess it’s true what they say
the more beautiful the girl
the sharper her fangs
Hunnie, you’re a savage
maybe that’s why I need you
confusing the moment
for a scent that would last forever
tearing me limb from limb
I can’t simply let go
nor will I stick around
the very thought is a ice knife
thinking you put a curse on me
feeling it harder when I’m alone
over...
i’d wake to your heart beat
should of been easy to see
but I was in love, in love
with the way you were using me
guess it’s true what they say
the more beautiful the girl
the sharper her fangs
Hunnie, you’re a savage
maybe that’s why I need you
confusing the moment
for a scent that would last forever
tearing me limb from limb
I can’t simply let go
nor will I stick around
the very thought is a ice knife
thinking you put a curse on me
feeling it harder when I’m alone
over...
#rejection
#heartbroken
#UnrequitedLove #IMissYou
#UnrequitedLove #IMissYou
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Frosted Windows
He has no idea how hard I try.
Then when it's time to defend myself, this pain in my chest, this exhaustion, has no answer to give.
I can feel myself checking out.
Two loved ones dying of cancer, not enough determination to even make a sandwich.
I'm numb, I'm broken, I love just as deep, but defense mechanisms are massively protecting and hurting me at the same time.
This snow with the bright red Robin, she's fluttering about, ruffling her feathers as she picks from the assorted feed I throw out for them.
Yesterday I had doves, as I sip my coffee and stare out...
Then when it's time to defend myself, this pain in my chest, this exhaustion, has no answer to give.
I can feel myself checking out.
Two loved ones dying of cancer, not enough determination to even make a sandwich.
I'm numb, I'm broken, I love just as deep, but defense mechanisms are massively protecting and hurting me at the same time.
This snow with the bright red Robin, she's fluttering about, ruffling her feathers as she picks from the assorted feed I throw out for them.
Yesterday I had doves, as I sip my coffee and stare out...
#despair
#fear
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#sadness
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Long Ache
Departed
leaving me alone
no path to follow
future unsown
penetrating ache
always in bereavement
unable to heal
my heart’s discontent
years have passed
I am never the same
the loss of you
has no gain
leaving me alone
no path to follow
future unsown
penetrating ache
always in bereavement
unable to heal
my heart’s discontent
years have passed
I am never the same
the loss of you
has no gain
#grief
#heartbroken
#death
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DU Poetry : Heartbroken by Top Critiquers Poems