Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
Less is Happiness
As if I should care
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
#happiness
#ignorance
#senryu
129 reads
16 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
Crying During Crazy on You
There are a bunch of songs by Heart
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
#happiness
#music
153 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
Imagine
If Lennon was here,
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
#earth
#happiness
#music
#peace
#senryu
106 reads
10 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
GARDEN OF EXCUSES
Place a fence around the Garden of Excuses for habits
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
#determination
#dreams
#escape
#happiness
#healing
0 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 2:31am
3rd Mar 2025 2:31am
Ruby Slippers
tic toc
time is what i want
strength
is what i need
peace
in my mind is #1
easy mornings
is a slice of apple pie
travel
to a far away land...Hocus Pocus
a good night's sleep
is the "Pot of Gold" at the end of a rainbow
a calm day
is like a summer breeze
worthy words
easy as, ABC,123, you and me...
true love
blowin' through the jasmine in my mind ♥
time is what i want
strength
is what i need
peace
in my mind is #1
easy mornings
is a slice of apple pie
travel
to a far away land...Hocus Pocus
a good night's sleep
is the "Pot of Gold" at the end of a rainbow
a calm day
is like a summer breeze
worthy words
easy as, ABC,123, you and me...
true love
blowin' through the jasmine in my mind ♥
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
84 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 00:21am
28th Feb 2025 00:21am
suburban poet
waiting at a bus stop in bexley, and
she says she hates this peripheral out
of touch with the city sort of place,
and I understand why, but I rather
like the peace, and I think that the city can
be far too much in one’s face
she says she hates this peripheral out
of touch with the city sort of place,
and I understand why, but I rather
like the peace, and I think that the city can
be far too much in one’s face
#happiness
88 reads
6 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 4:30am
27th Feb 2025 4:30am
Go To Bed
I do not want to sleep
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good...
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good...
#happiness
#sexy
352 reads
24 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 8:11am
26th Feb 2025 8:11am
La La Land
La La Land
I am in La La Land and I do not care.
Here in La La Land everything is fair.
I do not worry 'bout no money.
I do not need a car.
Here in La La Land nothing is very far.
I met a man here too.
Said he has been here for years.
He is a lookin' for you.
So we have been here waitin',
sometimes lookin' around
but so fare you are nowhere to be found.
You should come here though,
place is really nice.
Weird how it's operated by a couple'a mice.
Housin's a good deal.
Place is rent...
I am in La La Land and I do not care.
Here in La La Land everything is fair.
I do not worry 'bout no money.
I do not need a car.
Here in La La Land nothing is very far.
I met a man here too.
Said he has been here for years.
He is a lookin' for you.
So we have been here waitin',
sometimes lookin' around
but so fare you are nowhere to be found.
You should come here though,
place is really nice.
Weird how it's operated by a couple'a mice.
Housin's a good deal.
Place is rent...
#funny
#happiness
#inspirational
88 reads
5 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:58pm
24th Feb 2025 11:58pm
A Fresh Start, Use It! (1st Pantoum)
The holiday’s over. Now is the season of resolve, discovery and change
My heart full of hope…I’m going to make it this time. This time next year I’ll be happy
This sentiment drives for change, recurs every year at this season
A seeding time nurtured by wisdom, and spiritual reason
My heart full of hope…I’m going to make it this time. This time next year I’ll be happy
A seeding time nurtured by wisdom, and spiritual reason
Trepidation creeps in, fearing that I, once again, will lose the plot, and shut down the show
This season can be trite, cliché,...
My heart full of hope…I’m going to make it this time. This time next year I’ll be happy
This sentiment drives for change, recurs every year at this season
A seeding time nurtured by wisdom, and spiritual reason
My heart full of hope…I’m going to make it this time. This time next year I’ll be happy
A seeding time nurtured by wisdom, and spiritual reason
Trepidation creeps in, fearing that I, once again, will lose the plot, and shut down the show
This season can be trite, cliché,...
#happiness
#healing
#hope
#LifeChangingMoment
#MentalHealth
77 reads
1 Comment
MasterG
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:19pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:19pm
I found
I listen to my heart beat
It’s sounds of defeat
Stopping only once
Performing not one stunt
Searching for its pair
It sees nothing but a glare
My vision comes clear
Your beauty brings fear
We are a match
Not just a patch
Our love is eternal
Not just external
The darkness turns bright
There is nothing to fight
Our love is of power
And goes beyond without fear
Master G
It’s sounds of defeat
Stopping only once
Performing not one stunt
Searching for its pair
It sees nothing but a glare
My vision comes clear
Your beauty brings fear
We are a match
Not just a patch
Our love is eternal
Not just external
The darkness turns bright
There is nothing to fight
Our love is of power
And goes beyond without fear
Master G
#girlfriend
#happiness
#love
128 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 10:16am
23rd Feb 2025 10:16am
Simple
Sharp edges gleaming,
Dancing in twilight shadows,
Passion cuts deep wounds.
Blades whisper secrets,
Glinting in forbidden light,
Desire's cold embrace.
Dancing in twilight shadows,
Passion cuts deep wounds.
Blades whisper secrets,
Glinting in forbidden light,
Desire's cold embrace.
#erotic
#happiness
#lust
#SelfDiscovery
#sexy
176 reads
7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 1:36pm
22nd Feb 2025 1:36pm
We as one love
We as one love always and forever as we each change each others life and world. 🌍 For I knew that you were the one that was sent, from above to really brighten up my life and show me that love, does exist in some people's hearts and the minds of those who haven't given up, on finding that special one. For sure it was you and I together as one love, with honesty and truth and trust. FROM the very beginning of our paths crossing, like a shooting star shooting across the distance skies. For sure we both had our share of the make believe stories of lies, and false promises that required...
#determination
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
105 reads
2 Comments
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