Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 10:47am
12th Jan 2025 10:47am
Fairy Tale
One day,I woke up astray.
The world looked unusual,like I took a different pathway.
This world was unfamiliar.
Is this where the staircase led?
It seemed the grass is red.
The sky was grey.
And people's faces had a grey hue.
And you'd wonder,too.
About what this world conveys.
About what it makes it.
Or about what makes it stay in this realm.
Where insects are huge.
And grass is a shade of red or grey.
With people,missing faces.
Everyone in different places.
One is a girl who sold and...
The world looked unusual,like I took a different pathway.
This world was unfamiliar.
Is this where the staircase led?
It seemed the grass is red.
The sky was grey.
And people's faces had a grey hue.
And you'd wonder,too.
About what this world conveys.
About what it makes it.
Or about what makes it stay in this realm.
Where insects are huge.
And grass is a shade of red or grey.
With people,missing faces.
Everyone in different places.
One is a girl who sold and...
#curse
#evolution
#happiness
#hope
#magic
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doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
Midnite's Scent
O Marri’onne, ethereal wraith,
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
52 reads
1 Comment
cheesa
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 6:13am
9th Jan 2025 6:13am
A place nobody knows
There's a place where I go in my dreams
A place where I hide and I'm still a child
A place away from worries and woes
A place nobody knows
There's a place i go when i sleep
A place noone can see me noone can peep
A pace I don't have to bite my tongue
A place I'm still young
A place away from all the tos and fros
A place nobody knows
A place where I hide and I'm still a child
A place away from worries and woes
A place nobody knows
There's a place i go when i sleep
A place noone can see me noone can peep
A pace I don't have to bite my tongue
A place I'm still young
A place away from all the tos and fros
A place nobody knows
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational #strength
#inspirational #strength
34 reads
2 Comments
magichearts
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 4:54pm
8th Jan 2025 4:54pm
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एक शर्मीले से लड़के के काँधे पर हाथ रख, एक मजबूर लड़की ने मुस्कुरा कर अपनी मालकिन से पूछा था, "कैसी लगेगी...
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
29 reads
0 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
Winter Glow
Where the pathway ends,
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
43 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 10:17am
8th Jan 2025 10:17am
Magic Touch
Times were slow,
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
#happiness
#love
#lyrics
#motivational
#relationships
91 reads
12 Comments
WritingRaven
Zippy
Zippy
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 9:04am
8th Jan 2025 9:04am
The Sparrow
The bird camouflaged in the dust
unremarkable dun, though very bold
throws back his head
then out pours liquid gold
unremarkable dun, though very bold
throws back his head
then out pours liquid gold
#admiration
#happiness
#respect
80 reads
3 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 4:58pm
7th Jan 2025 4:58pm
Let Me
Let me be clear
I hate nothing
About you
I never stop
Thinking about you
It's so easy to say
I most certainly love
Everything there is
about you
I hate nothing
About you
I never stop
Thinking about you
It's so easy to say
I most certainly love
Everything there is
about you
#happiness
#love
#passion
77 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:41pm
5th Jan 2025 8:41pm
.Meet me tonight
For it's been three years married and 11 years since we met 💕 Meet me in the garden of roses 🌹 SURROUNDED by the power of God's love, with the rosary flowers that you and I planted together. One day upon a starry night with it's perfect night of the aroma scents. THAT blows and comes out with the whispers and sounds of the birds in the tree of life. For your present is much needed to make this happen between you and I, as we shall forever remember the time ⌚of our lives. Just you and I alone in the night vibes expressing, the deepness of the love and happiness and the...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
64 reads
2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 10:46am
5th Jan 2025 10:46am
Letter To You
I am writing a letter today.
For a person I used to know by name.
I am writing to see if you are well.
I hope I find you happy,swell.
Let me write this letter in ink.
I'll stamp it and begin to think.
Maybe this letter will find you one day.
Years later,on a sunny day.
Maybe you will read my cursive and smile.
And remember our memories,that lasted a while.
I'm gonna add in cursive ink.
I'll stamp it in a blink.
I'll add in all my love and appreciation.
For our friendship,a whole another nation.
For...
For a person I used to know by name.
I am writing to see if you are well.
I hope I find you happy,swell.
Let me write this letter in ink.
I'll stamp it and begin to think.
Maybe this letter will find you one day.
Years later,on a sunny day.
Maybe you will read my cursive and smile.
And remember our memories,that lasted a while.
I'm gonna add in cursive ink.
I'll stamp it in a blink.
I'll add in all my love and appreciation.
For our friendship,a whole another nation.
For...
#happiness
#memorial
#nostalgia
#sadness
#uplifting
46 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
The Voice of Abiding Gratitude I Shall Ever Raise
Grace and mercy
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#NewYear
69 reads
5 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 10:49am
2nd Jan 2025 10:49am
Beach Memories
It was a hot,summer day.
Sun shining,problems at bay.
There was sounds of laughter.
The way the sun felt on my skin.
And I forget all problems I've been.
There were kids digging holes.
Sandcastle contests,people pose for pictures.
To keep as a memory of today.
This sunny,warm summer day.
I wore a swimsuit in blue.
I sunbathed,a red hue.
I were under some shade with a book.
And I would take a look at the water.
The sand,next to my father.
I remember when I was a kid.
And I would go to the...
Sun shining,problems at bay.
There was sounds of laughter.
The way the sun felt on my skin.
And I forget all problems I've been.
There were kids digging holes.
Sandcastle contests,people pose for pictures.
To keep as a memory of today.
This sunny,warm summer day.
I wore a swimsuit in blue.
I sunbathed,a red hue.
I were under some shade with a book.
And I would take a look at the water.
The sand,next to my father.
I remember when I was a kid.
And I would go to the...
#beach
#happiness
#memories
#nostalgia
#sadness
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