Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
XiaoLong
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
Artwork Sublime
She simply wonders
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
#haiku
#seductive
#senryu #sensual
#senryu #sensual
146 reads
3 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 6:10am
12th Oct 2024 6:10am
Seer abstractionism
Knowing colors lie.
You have the same things as I...
Fellow note taker.
You have the same things as I...
Fellow note taker.
#friendship
#haiku
#wisdom
62 reads
0 Comments
O_Dee
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:17pm
6th Oct 2024 7:17pm
Illuminated
Illuminated.
The hand that writes the season
letting the pen fall
The hand that writes the season
letting the pen fall
#fall
#haiku
#nature
44 reads
0 Comments
O_Dee
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:09pm
6th Oct 2024 7:09pm
The Long Car Journey
The long car journey.
Epic haiku production.
Illegible script.
Epic haiku production.
Illegible script.
#haiku
49 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 5:45am
6th Oct 2024 5:45am
moonlight
moonlight
cool air on my skin
the blanket's smell
cool air on my skin
the blanket's smell
#haiku
50 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 5:43am
6th Oct 2024 5:43am
a November breeze
a November breeze
one palo verde blooms
anyway
one palo verde blooms
anyway
#haiku
79 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 11:34pm
29th Aug 2024 11:34pm
September
Late summer mornings
How I long for cooler days
Green and yellow shades
How I long for cooler days
Green and yellow shades
#fall
#haiku
#LifeCycle
#nature
#summer
115 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 11:58pm
4th Aug 2024 11:58pm
The Cemetary
Peaceful & quiet
Sanctum for birds and people
To grieve and be free
Sanctum for birds and people
To grieve and be free
#birds
#escape
#graveyard
#haiku
#nature
91 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Aug 2024 12:24pm
3rd Aug 2024 12:24pm
Easier to turn away
Why don't you read me
Can't you see I'm not happy
Go on, ignore me
Can't you see I'm not happy
Go on, ignore me
#haiku
#marriage
#relationships #sadness
#relationships #sadness
113 reads
4 Comments
KrumblyKrumb16
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 3:30pm
28th Jul 2024 3:30pm
Isn't it beautiful what was
We are cameras,
Desperately capturing,
A fleeting sunset.
Desperately capturing,
A fleeting sunset.
#breakup
#haiku
#love
129 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 12:58pm
28th Jul 2024 12:58pm
Lots of Haiku
Reversed Haiku
Put his hand in his rose
Couldn't buy the heart
Decided to steal her pocket
Bi-reversed Haiku
Put his hand in his heart
Couldn't buy the pocket
Decided to steal her rose
Given Haiku
no given to reverse...
no verse to be given
uneven just uneven
Put his hand in his rose
Couldn't buy the heart
Decided to steal her pocket
Bi-reversed Haiku
Put his hand in his heart
Couldn't buy the pocket
Decided to steal her rose
Given Haiku
no given to reverse...
no verse to be given
uneven just uneven
#emotional
#haiku
#love
#revenge
#rose
101 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
Wrong side of the street
Paradise is here
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
#haiku
#money
#poverty #rhyming
#poverty #rhyming
146 reads
12 Comments
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