Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Possibly, Maybe part 2
How will it be done?
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
#murder
#haiku
#rhyming #nonfiction
#rhyming #nonfiction
78 reads
4 Comments
Possibly, Maybe
I may kill my wife
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
#haiku
#LifeAsAWriter
#nonfiction #rhyming
#nonfiction #rhyming
54 reads
11 Comments
Push Forward, Don't Pull Back
Living for today
Obituary yearbook
Move forward or die
Obituary yearbook
Move forward or die
#motivational
#haiku
#uplifting
88 reads
16 Comments
Were All Mislead
Don't judge Satanists
Politicians are evil
Priests are guilty too
Politicians are evil
Priests are guilty too
#corruption
#evil
#haiku #TruthOfLife
#haiku #TruthOfLife
82 reads
11 Comments
Tangled Vortex
My life is a dream
Death is my reality
A doubtful future
Death is my reality
A doubtful future
#haiku
#confusion
52 reads
8 Comments
Cranes
Worlds above, cranes swoop
Brisk city strides with coffee
Loose bolts kill us all
Brisk city strides with coffee
Loose bolts kill us all
#haiku
69 reads
1 Comment
Ambassador for World Peace
If Lennon was here,
Would he still delegate peace?
Our world's in danger
Would he still delegate peace?
Our world's in danger
#earth
#peace
#haiku #music
#haiku #music
54 reads
3 Comments
An Unnatural Achievment
Foreplay with no friends
Premature until the end
Succumbed to The Bends
Focus, there’s no lens
Kids should never make amends
Just click now and send
Thank you, I ‘am
Premature until the end
Succumbed to The Bends
Focus, there’s no lens
Kids should never make amends
Just click now and send
Thank you, I ‘am
#haiku
#rhyming
56 reads
0 Comments
Fra Diavolo
Delicious Demons
Fry, Bake, Skewer, Spicy Hot
Angels have bad taste
Fry, Bake, Skewer, Spicy Hot
Angels have bad taste
#devil
#angels
#food #haiku
#food #haiku
44 reads
6 Comments
Revelation
Your a growth on me
Remove your skin & reveal
Truth will set you free
Remove your skin & reveal
Truth will set you free
#motivational
#inspirational
#haiku
48 reads
2 Comments
Helping Hand
You're a budding rose
I'm a withered aging plant
Help me see the light
I'm a withered aging plant
Help me see the light
#motivational
#flowers
#haiku #aging
#haiku #aging
104 reads
6 Comments
Your All Beautiful
Women do rule men
Sexy chicks I will obey
This poem is for you
Sexy chicks I will obey
This poem is for you
#women
#haiku
88 reads
13 Comments
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