Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 6:42pm
3rd Feb 2025 6:42pm
Burnt Rice
Fatigue and strain take over
Heavy eyes drift shut
Burnt rice brings back the present
Heavy eyes drift shut
Burnt rice brings back the present
#haiku
91 reads
19 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
Woke Non-Haiku
All conscious in vegan dream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
#haiku
#philosophical
60 reads
7 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 11:48am
3rd Feb 2025 11:48am
Coffee Haiku, a Cycle
Cup of coffee left.
On low wall outside office.
Collecting raindrops.
Two days pass, a third.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
Is it now more rain?
A light winter frost.
It glazes leaves and walkways.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
On low wall outside office.
Collecting raindrops.
Two days pass, a third.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
Is it now more rain?
A light winter frost.
It glazes leaves and walkways.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
#coffee
#haiku
#nature #winter
#nature #winter
47 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 10:40am
28th Jan 2025 10:40am
Nevertheless Haiku
In your verses deep
I find pieces of myself
Hearts entwined through ink
I find pieces of myself
Hearts entwined through ink
#haiku
#LifeAsAWriter
#mirror
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
61 reads
11 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:01am
18th Jan 2025 3:01am
Vanished in Your Void
Hit with splintered shards
cast from the piercing darkness
settled in your stare.
Invoking spells with hushed tones
that snake, coiling as shadows
with ardent effort.
It is neath this gaze
where my screams become silent
and I am no more.
cast from the piercing darkness
settled in your stare.
Invoking spells with hushed tones
that snake, coiling as shadows
with ardent effort.
It is neath this gaze
where my screams become silent
and I am no more.
#dark
#haiku
#relationships
19 reads
8 Comments
god_of_Confusion
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 5:31pm
9th Jan 2025 5:31pm
Wind haiku sonnet
The wind whispers past
it flows as it does daily
a song synced as one
Music in the trees
sense the melodies within
they play on and on
Moment of stillness
the message is always there
go see for yourself
Nature wastes no time
the sacredness includes you
the same as all life
Look up to see the mirror
every being reflects you
it flows as it does daily
a song synced as one
Music in the trees
sense the melodies within
they play on and on
Moment of stillness
the message is always there
go see for yourself
Nature wastes no time
the sacredness includes you
the same as all life
Look up to see the mirror
every being reflects you
#haiku
#nature
#SelfReflection
#universe
#wind
53 reads
0 Comments
O_Dee
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 7:52pm
15th Dec 2024 7:52pm
Pennies
I save my pennies
that the wizened apple of my self
might know some comfort
that the wizened apple of my self
might know some comfort
#aging
#haiku
37 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:14am
9th Dec 2024 3:14am
Is It Going To Be Good Or Bad For Us?
Though we celebrate it's coming, we don't know what the new year would bring.
#confusion
#dialogue
#haiku
#NewYear
#nonfiction
63 reads
0 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
My Delirium
Lavender gardens
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
#erotic
#haiku
#passion
#senryu
#sexy
188 reads
5 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 8:08pm
22nd Nov 2024 8:08pm
Bring To Light a Hidden and Silent Life
There was a serene beauty prevailing around her as she everyday trod the path to work.. She looked so absorbed in her own thoughts that one might not spot the mysterious and cloudy stare into her eyes..
She knew her way to home and work by heart.. she seemed to be in a perfect tune with time and place.. all her movements appeared to be synchronized with the tempo of the sounds surrounding her..
Such a harmonious living human being! If only one could step into her world and bring to light her hidden and silent life!
Of those who watched her from afar would...
She knew her way to home and work by heart.. she seemed to be in a perfect tune with time and place.. all her movements appeared to be synchronized with the tempo of the sounds surrounding her..
Such a harmonious living human being! If only one could step into her world and bring to light her hidden and silent life!
Of those who watched her from afar would...
#beauty
#haiku
#LifeChangingMoment
#prose
#WritingPoetry
78 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 8:15pm
19th Nov 2024 8:15pm
Snotty Haiku
Sticky green mischief
Nose's hidden treasure falls
Silent sneeze secrets
Nose's hidden treasure falls
Silent sneeze secrets
#environment
#flowers
#funny
#haiku
#illness
77 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 11:26am
6th Nov 2024 11:26am
In the Glass
Temptation breakdown
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
#haiku
243 reads
21 Comments
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