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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 11:54am
21st Apr 2024 11:54am
Squashed
Help is on the way
Person wounded as he lays
Silenced, not to say
Person wounded as he lays
Silenced, not to say
#haiku
#hurt
#mystery
#rhyming
#silence
24 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 11:53am
21st Apr 2024 11:53am
Nightmares
Running out of steam
Can't overcome in my dreams
Fear repressed my screams
Can't overcome in my dreams
Fear repressed my screams
#dreams
#haiku
#nightmares #rhyming
#nightmares #rhyming
40 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 7:26pm
19th Apr 2024 7:26pm
Don't assume it's everyone else, it's you as well
Aren't we all raunchy
Innocent until proven...
Face it, you're guilty
Innocent until proven...
Face it, you're guilty
#erotic
#haiku
#lust
64 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 10:36am
19th Apr 2024 10:36am
Nearing the end
Will I see the light?
If so, I hope it ain't bright
Curtains will soon close
If so, I hope it ain't bright
Curtains will soon close
#dark
#death
#haiku
61 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 10:31am
19th Apr 2024 10:31am
A Loving Commitment
Love is what we share
I trust her and she trusts me
Nothing else matters
I trust her and she trusts me
Nothing else matters
#haiku
#honesty
#love
43 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 7:56pm
18th Apr 2024 7:56pm
Can't Stop...Dependent
Don't ever trust them
They stole cash from their child
Monkey's on their backs
They stole cash from their child
Monkey's on their backs
#addiction
#drugs
#father
#haiku
#mother
89 reads
6 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 3:52pm
18th Apr 2024 3:52pm
I ever wonder
a soft peck on cheek
a deep French passing the lip
I ever wonder
will them eyes twinkle
or them lips ever mumble
I ever wonder
will you feel the heat
or I’m cooled by your spit
I ever wonder
will you simply kneel
or I’m to make you heel
I ever wonder
do make it sloppy
do let me feel that trickle
I ever wonder
stretch me please, will you
sensuality of tongue
I ever wonder
my pleasures uncut
It’s the skin to skin lust
I ever wonder
heated...
a deep French passing the lip
I ever wonder
will them eyes twinkle
or them lips ever mumble
I ever wonder
will you feel the heat
or I’m cooled by your spit
I ever wonder
will you simply kneel
or I’m to make you heel
I ever wonder
do make it sloppy
do let me feel that trickle
I ever wonder
stretch me please, will you
sensuality of tongue
I ever wonder
my pleasures uncut
It’s the skin to skin lust
I ever wonder
heated...
#dreams
#erotic
#lust
#haiku
#senryu
86 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 11:30am
18th Apr 2024 11:30am
Eternal Shadows
Not proud of my past
New job, home, city & state
It all comes with you
New job, home, city & state
It all comes with you
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
#memories
56 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 11:19am
18th Apr 2024 11:19am
Only time will tell
I stare out towards you
I wonder if I love you
Only time will tell
I wonder if I love you
Only time will tell
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
#love #strength
#love #strength
71 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 8:44pm
17th Apr 2024 8:44pm
Warning
Life takes drastic turns
Always fasten your seat belt
Precautionary
Always fasten your seat belt
Precautionary
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
48 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 11:12am
17th Apr 2024 11:12am
Tasty Delights
When you expire
I'm sure you'll burn in fire
Time to grill you up
I'm sure you'll burn in fire
Time to grill you up
#death
#fire
#haiku
#satirical
#funny
50 reads
6 Comments
Josiah
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 5:38am
17th Apr 2024 5:38am
Her Love
Her love, like the wind
Pushed to knees, my mouth open
Whispers to my soul
Pushed to knees, my mouth open
Whispers to my soul
#haiku
#lover
67 reads
2 Comments
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