Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 10:05pm
7th Apr 2025 10:05pm
Stagnant water
All stagnant water
Gives off a horrid odor
Did you bathe in it?
Gives off a horrid odor
Did you bathe in it?
#haiku
144 reads
14 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 7:51pm
3rd Apr 2025 7:51pm
a little frog
a little frog
sits on a warm rock
busy relaxing
sits on a warm rock
busy relaxing
#haiku
40 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 7:49pm
3rd Apr 2025 7:49pm
a stalactite gleams
a stalactite gleams
black water drips
the only sound
black water drips
the only sound
#haiku
21 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 5:22pm
18th Mar 2025 5:22pm
a white-powdered landscape
a white-powdered landscape
sunbeams illuminate
nothing
sunbeams illuminate
nothing
#haiku
53 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 9:25pm
7th Mar 2025 9:25pm
marred by insults
marred by insults
the heart heals with time
scar tissue remains
the heart heals with time
scar tissue remains
#haiku
62 reads
0 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 6:16pm
6th Mar 2025 6:16pm
skimming the updraft
skimming the updraft
a hawk soars past my head
with playful ease
a hawk soars past my head
with playful ease
#haiku
50 reads
0 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 9:49am
4th Mar 2025 9:49am
Lifeward
INWARD
I am the god man
I am a dreamer of dreams
Today is my fault
OUTWARD
Baldy the doorman
My door is open to you
The back yard calls us
UPWARD
Ghost in a tin can
You are taller than I think
We are that Spirit
I am the god man
I am a dreamer of dreams
Today is my fault
OUTWARD
Baldy the doorman
My door is open to you
The back yard calls us
UPWARD
Ghost in a tin can
You are taller than I think
We are that Spirit
#God
#haiku
104 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 4:21pm
26th Feb 2025 4:21pm
Uniqueness
Each poet unique
No one better than the rest
All voices matter.
No one better than the rest
All voices matter.
#haiku
#identity
#inspirational
#MyInspiration
#senryu
120 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 6:42pm
3rd Feb 2025 6:42pm
Burnt Rice
Fatigue and strain take over
Heavy eyes drift shut
Burnt rice brings back the present
Heavy eyes drift shut
Burnt rice brings back the present
#haiku
192 reads
19 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
Woke Non-Haiku
All conscious in vegan dream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
because nobody
listens to the cabbage scream
#haiku
#philosophical
103 reads
7 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 11:48am
3rd Feb 2025 11:48am
Coffee Haiku, a Cycle
Cup of coffee left.
On low wall outside office.
Collecting raindrops.
Two days pass, a third.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
Is it now more rain?
A light winter frost.
It glazes leaves and walkways.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
On low wall outside office.
Collecting raindrops.
Two days pass, a third.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
Is it now more rain?
A light winter frost.
It glazes leaves and walkways.
Coffee cup remains, sat there.
#coffee
#haiku
#nature #winter
#nature #winter
95 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 10:40am
28th Jan 2025 10:40am
Nevertheless Haiku
In your verses deep
I find pieces of myself
Hearts entwined through ink
I find pieces of myself
Hearts entwined through ink
#haiku
#LifeAsAWriter
#mirror
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
117 reads
11 Comments
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