Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
O_Dee
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 7:52pm
15th Dec 2024 7:52pm
Pennies
I save my pennies
that the wizened apple of my self
might know some comfort
that the wizened apple of my self
might know some comfort
#aging
#haiku
31 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:14am
9th Dec 2024 3:14am
Is It Going To Be Good Or Bad For Us?
Though we celebrate it's coming, we don't know what the new year would bring.
#confusion
#dialogue
#haiku
#NewYear
#nonfiction
49 reads
0 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
My Delirium
Lavender gardens
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
#erotic
#haiku
#passion
#senryu
#sexy
181 reads
5 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 8:08pm
22nd Nov 2024 8:08pm
Bring To Light a Hidden and Silent Life
There was a serene beauty prevailing around her as she everyday trod the path to work.. She looked so absorbed in her own thoughts that one might not spot the mysterious and cloudy stare into her eyes..
She knew her way to home and work by heart.. she seemed to be in a perfect tune with time and place.. all her movements appeared to be synchronized with the tempo of the sounds surrounding her..
Such a harmonious living human being! If only one could step into her world and bring to light her hidden and silent life!
Of those who watched her from afar would...
She knew her way to home and work by heart.. she seemed to be in a perfect tune with time and place.. all her movements appeared to be synchronized with the tempo of the sounds surrounding her..
Such a harmonious living human being! If only one could step into her world and bring to light her hidden and silent life!
Of those who watched her from afar would...
#beauty
#haiku
#LifeChangingMoment
#prose
#WritingPoetry
64 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 8:15pm
19th Nov 2024 8:15pm
Snotty Haiku
Sticky green mischief
Nose's hidden treasure falls
Silent sneeze secrets
Nose's hidden treasure falls
Silent sneeze secrets
#environment
#flowers
#funny
#haiku
#illness
60 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 11:26am
6th Nov 2024 11:26am
In the Glass
Temptation breakdown
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
#haiku
233 reads
21 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
Clear Haiku
Crystal clarity
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
#alcohol
#haiku
#MovingOn #sea
#MovingOn #sea
75 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 1:26pm
4th Nov 2024 1:26pm
Non Vodka Haiku
In lieu of a kiss
moonlight bathes silent trees
tender touch of wind
moonlight bathes silent trees
tender touch of wind
#haiku
#love
#nature #wind
#nature #wind
72 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
Dilemmhaiku
Very cold Vodka
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
#alcohol
#drugs
#haiku #WritingPoetry
#haiku #WritingPoetry
79 reads
6 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 10:36pm
31st Oct 2024 10:36pm
Postal
My Inspiration.
Arrives early in the morn.
So does the damn mail.
Arrives early in the morn.
So does the damn mail.
#haiku
98 reads
5 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
Artwork Sublime
She simply wonders
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
#haiku
#seductive
#senryu #sensual
#senryu #sensual
143 reads
3 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 6:10am
12th Oct 2024 6:10am
Seer abstractionism
Knowing colors lie.
You have the same things as I...
Fellow note taker.
You have the same things as I...
Fellow note taker.
#friendship
#haiku
#wisdom
57 reads
0 Comments
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