Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Her Love
Her love, like the wind
Pushed to knees, my mouth open
Whispers to my soul
Pushed to knees, my mouth open
Whispers to my soul
#haiku
#lover
70 reads
2 Comments
Where am I ?
Quietly sitting
Like a moon light silhouette
Hiding in the dark
Like a moon light silhouette
Hiding in the dark
#haiku
#myself
#senryu #FeelingLost
#senryu #FeelingLost
90 reads
2 Comments
Friends
Pain creates anger
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
#anger
#friendship
#oppression
#haiku
#support
74 reads
11 Comments
Push Ahead, Don't Pull Back
Looking back towards me
You should see that I moved forth
You can make that change
You should see that I moved forth
You can make that change
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#haiku
#SelfDiscovery
41 reads
2 Comments
Vanished Thoughts
Like old photographs,
memories fade over time
Part of me has died
memories fade over time
Part of me has died
#haiku
#memories
58 reads
8 Comments
Free Money
I found a wallet
I ignored all credentials
Up 300 bucks
Feeling good right now
Yeah I know I'm a scumbag
You would do the same
I ignored all credentials
Up 300 bucks
Feeling good right now
Yeah I know I'm a scumbag
You would do the same
#happiness
#money
#haiku
50 reads
4 Comments
Stress Free
As if I should care
The less I can understand
Laid-back happy man
The less I can understand
Laid-back happy man
#happiness
#anxiety
#haiku #ignorance
#haiku #ignorance
84 reads
16 Comments
If at first you don't succeed...(you know the rest)
Three hours ago
I tried to take my own life
I'll try again soon
I tried to take my own life
I'll try again soon
#suicide
#haiku
#satirical
160 reads
11 Comments
Solemn Society
Show me how to laugh
Nobody laughs anymore
What have we become?
Nobody laughs anymore
What have we become?
#sadness
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#haiku
#philosophical
81 reads
8 Comments
Returning Home
Feel like a stranger
So many years have gone by
Where does this leave me?
So many years have gone by
Where does this leave me?
#loneliness
#haiku
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#emptiness
80 reads
13 Comments
Promises
Can you scratch my back?
Maybe. What's in it for me?
I'll give you the world.
Maybe. What's in it for me?
I'll give you the world.
#haiku
#satirical
64 reads
14 Comments
Money Damages Love
He wants mom to die
Inheritance will be grand
Greed has made him vile
Inheritance will be grand
Greed has made him vile
#mother
#family
#money
#haiku
#greed
71 reads
7 Comments
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