Gay Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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gay seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sandals
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 00:26am
31st Aug 2022 00:26am
Woman Touch U
#dark
#gay
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
#witches
254 reads
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Sandals
Poem Published
29th Aug 2022 4:14pm
29th Aug 2022 4:14pm
No....Don't Please Go
#dark
#gay
#gothic
#BDSM
#witches
218 reads
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Sandals
Poem Published
24th Aug 2022 4:16pm
24th Aug 2022 4:16pm
Hear
#dark
#gay
#gothic
#UnrequitedLove
#witches
269 reads
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
21st Aug 2022 11:49pm
21st Aug 2022 11:49pm
Depths and Shallows
And you know that my suit cost more than your house
I'm a scoundrel, a lover, a murderous louse
And I look good in your bed
And you think that I'm lookin' good - Electric Six, “Vengeance & Fashion”
A little thrill.
The dead land calls to me
and I demand its champion.
The perfect man in honesty
has always been a bag of dirt.
Outlined on a cinema screen,
the rule of thirds delighting him,
until in black-and-white even
he smoulders like a dog in hell.
The limited range of my urge
is what the dead land is. ...
I'm a scoundrel, a lover, a murderous louse
And I look good in your bed
And you think that I'm lookin' good - Electric Six, “Vengeance & Fashion”
A little thrill.
The dead land calls to me
and I demand its champion.
The perfect man in honesty
has always been a bag of dirt.
Outlined on a cinema screen,
the rule of thirds delighting him,
until in black-and-white even
he smoulders like a dog in hell.
The limited range of my urge
is what the dead land is. ...
#lust
#men
#gay #sex
#gay #sex
403 reads
0 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
13th Aug 2022 11:26pm
13th Aug 2022 11:26pm
A Granite Sappho
(an attempt at a lesbian love poem)
I’ve lived in granite all my life.
The streets, the smells, the sounds are grey.
But you were like a Grecian wind,
an outpouring of colour in
a housecoat and flat shoes.
A granite Sappho’s what I am,
and you’re my healing muse.
This letter breaks my heart...
Why must you take the tender breath from me?
I know that I’m too lah-de-dah.
But that’s my cover, dear...
Your husband thinks I’m some posh tart
too up ‘erself to think or love.
It’s not within himself to...
I’ve lived in granite all my life.
The streets, the smells, the sounds are grey.
But you were like a Grecian wind,
an outpouring of colour in
a housecoat and flat shoes.
A granite Sappho’s what I am,
and you’re my healing muse.
This letter breaks my heart...
Why must you take the tender breath from me?
I know that I’m too lah-de-dah.
But that’s my cover, dear...
Your husband thinks I’m some posh tart
too up ‘erself to think or love.
It’s not within himself to...
#women
#lesbian
#gay #LGBT
#gay #LGBT
329 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 9:18pm
12th Aug 2022 9:18pm
I Fear U.......U Know Why?
#love
#gay
#satirical
#funny
#learning
201 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 9:14pm
12th Aug 2022 9:14pm
Never
I cheated on u with another
I could've done write from the beginning
But I didn't and admit my ah wrong
Could u take me back to rewrite the song
That it be not painful as was
Because me it hurt also too
Just like u said it would
When I wouldn't listen to u
Never will I take u back
U fuck up I didn't girl
U should've paid attention to me
When I was the soul of thy world
We women for women
Our bond is different ah carefree
U don't suppose to break this
The in luv with u heart of me
When all...
I could've done write from the beginning
But I didn't and admit my ah wrong
Could u take me back to rewrite the song
That it be not painful as was
Because me it hurt also too
Just like u said it would
When I wouldn't listen to u
Never will I take u back
U fuck up I didn't girl
U should've paid attention to me
When I was the soul of thy world
We women for women
Our bond is different ah carefree
U don't suppose to break this
The in luv with u heart of me
When all...
#love
#lesbian
#gay
#breakup
#LifeStruggles
286 reads
0 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
11th Aug 2022 1:33am
11th Aug 2022 1:33am
Steady
This one did not work
Well life will become something else
Though this one did not work
This will be an ah good for my ah health
Her 5'0 one hundred 36 pound frame
Really like she said wasn't for me
She sometimes within my arms
Felt guilty of it not being an ah womanly
Only...a female that's gay or lesbian be
I couldn't argue at all about this with she
I let her go as asked all because of this
She felt it better than our ah kiss
............Steady...........Steady.............Steady
Steady it keeps me...
Well life will become something else
Though this one did not work
This will be an ah good for my ah health
Her 5'0 one hundred 36 pound frame
Really like she said wasn't for me
She sometimes within my arms
Felt guilty of it not being an ah womanly
Only...a female that's gay or lesbian be
I couldn't argue at all about this with she
I let her go as asked all because of this
She felt it better than our ah kiss
............Steady...........Steady.............Steady
Steady it keeps me...
#dark
#lesbian
#gay
#respect
#bisexual
315 reads
0 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
10th Aug 2022 3:40am
10th Aug 2022 3:40am
Homoousion
#lust
#gay
#sex #erotic
#sex #erotic
329 reads
7 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
5th Aug 2022 11:21pm
5th Aug 2022 11:21pm
A Christian Understanding
for Sandi Toksvig
An arch of holy men looks out
and you would write to them and plead
an understanding deeper than just flesh?
Like Webster they are much obsessed by death,
and haven’t known of human love
since latching on to mother’s tits
like lichen to a ruined yard.
Don’t fool yourself, my dear.
The cretinous lizard
would sooner bathe
in your wife’s blood
than entertain a moment’s doubt,
if it was that a few hardline nonces
would look on him this day
and swing the hand of God his way.
An arch of holy men looks out
and you would write to them and plead
an understanding deeper than just flesh?
Like Webster they are much obsessed by death,
and haven’t known of human love
since latching on to mother’s tits
like lichen to a ruined yard.
Don’t fool yourself, my dear.
The cretinous lizard
would sooner bathe
in your wife’s blood
than entertain a moment’s doubt,
if it was that a few hardline nonces
would look on him this day
and swing the hand of God his way.
#gay
#marriage
#LGBT #Christian
#LGBT #Christian
375 reads
1 Comment
Sandals
Poem Published
3rd Aug 2022 3:16pm
3rd Aug 2022 3:16pm
A Lesbian Luv Story
#lesbian
#gay
#fiction
#ShortStory
#UnrequitedLove
440 reads
0 Comments
Girthquake
Poem Published
28th Jul 2022 1:18am
28th Jul 2022 1:18am
Husbands f**k Each Other
#gay
#sex
#betrayal
#identity
#LGBT
459 reads
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