Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 9:18pm
10th Jul 2024 9:18pm
Liberated Whispers
In the dim glow of desire’s flame
TheOralizer builds his spell.
A libertine of language, unchained,
his words a symphony of forbidden delight.
He whispers secrets in the night
not clinging to conventions or norms.
His lexicon a rebellion against monotony,
a manifesto of passion and unbridled longing.
“Undress your inhibitions,” he murmurs,
as ink spills across the parchment of our souls.
Each syllable a brushstroke on the canvas of ecstasy,
painting desire in shades of crimson and midnight blue.
His verses...
TheOralizer builds his spell.
A libertine of language, unchained,
his words a symphony of forbidden delight.
He whispers secrets in the night
not clinging to conventions or norms.
His lexicon a rebellion against monotony,
a manifesto of passion and unbridled longing.
“Undress your inhibitions,” he murmurs,
as ink spills across the parchment of our souls.
Each syllable a brushstroke on the canvas of ecstasy,
painting desire in shades of crimson and midnight blue.
His verses...
#erotic
#freedom
#happiness
#hope
#sexy
130 reads
5 Comments
congress
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 11:30am
10th Jul 2024 11:30am
Anthem for doomed dawn
We are in the spirit of inequality fued
Dreamers didn't have any quality food
See us again maneuvering in solitude
Teach us critiques, keep the similitude
Free us from what you kept us deposited
Getting tired can only serve us pure hatred
Get inspired then you will not get any regret
Getting hired have cheapest labour at best
Getting fired can only pay you when you left
Setting fires across the streets for the unrest
Freedom fighters singing songs of freedom
Freedom fighters in...
Dreamers didn't have any quality food
See us again maneuvering in solitude
Teach us critiques, keep the similitude
Free us from what you kept us deposited
Getting tired can only serve us pure hatred
Get inspired then you will not get any regret
Getting hired have cheapest labour at best
Getting fired can only pay you when you left
Setting fires across the streets for the unrest
Freedom fighters singing songs of freedom
Freedom fighters in...
#freedom
#HumanRights
#inequality
#oppression
#poverty
110 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Jul 2024 7:29pm
5th Jul 2024 7:29pm
Independence
The wind chimes spoke freedom to me
more than fireworks ever could.
The breeze, you see, was liberty
and detonations are no good.
I understand the sacrifice
and the warrior spirit need
since compromise will not suffice
to stop the hateful and their greed.
And though the embers also spoke
about the movement in the air
they said as much about the folk
in exploitation everywhere.
Then south by southeast, each burst flew,
after every exhausted blast,
like a voice, exhaled anew... ...
more than fireworks ever could.
The breeze, you see, was liberty
and detonations are no good.
I understand the sacrifice
and the warrior spirit need
since compromise will not suffice
to stop the hateful and their greed.
And though the embers also spoke
about the movement in the air
they said as much about the folk
in exploitation everywhere.
Then south by southeast, each burst flew,
after every exhausted blast,
like a voice, exhaled anew... ...
#freedom
#HumanRights
#ignorance
#inequality
#politics
167 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Jul 2024 11:08am
4th Jul 2024 11:08am
248 years ago
Independence Day
Our forefathers should see us now
What is left of our freedom?
Our forefathers should see us now
What is left of our freedom?
#corruption
#freedom
#politics
145 reads
10 Comments
Bonanza1
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 00:30am
3rd Jul 2024 00:30am
Glory for Rations
There was an outpouring
Time used and not spent
down slots
Of old machines
Where the jackpot was kept
Within the cage
Rolling... it rolled
By vision not not
not fear
Did our fingers tremble
tremble tremble
From exhausted sinews
And the gaze over taped up spectacle
Was a vertical one
The vertical expanded
the horizontals' possibility
One of our own ...
Time used and not spent
down slots
Of old machines
Where the jackpot was kept
Within the cage
Rolling... it rolled
By vision not not
not fear
Did our fingers tremble
tremble tremble
From exhausted sinews
And the gaze over taped up spectacle
Was a vertical one
The vertical expanded
the horizontals' possibility
One of our own ...
#consumerism
#freedom
#tradition
149 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 8:28pm
1st Jul 2024 8:28pm
New York and it's Asinine Laws
New York has some really stupid laws
Recently I've been reading some of them
Here's a handful that are truly ridiculous
1) It's Illegal to Sell Dog or Cat hair
Well I hate both cats & dogs, so for me I think all animals should be banned
2) It's illegal to have a puppet show in your window
I've done that numerous times with placing a sock puppet on my cock
Several times my ex-girlfriend would get involved and decorate her torso and pussy with paints and makeups
Loads of fun
Many observers watched and I even...
Recently I've been reading some of them
Here's a handful that are truly ridiculous
1) It's Illegal to Sell Dog or Cat hair
Well I hate both cats & dogs, so for me I think all animals should be banned
2) It's illegal to have a puppet show in your window
I've done that numerous times with placing a sock puppet on my cock
Several times my ex-girlfriend would get involved and decorate her torso and pussy with paints and makeups
Loads of fun
Many observers watched and I even...
#freedom
#ignorance
#LifeStruggles
#politics
#rebellion
121 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 8:46pm
29th Jun 2024 8:46pm
AAA (Against All Authority)
World War III
Who will be involved
When will it be?
Man and machine
No way out
Erasing more green
Damaged statues
Yesterday's thoughts
Conquer, defuse
The word of the majority
Abolish all government
Disempower all authority
Who will be involved
When will it be?
Man and machine
No way out
Erasing more green
Damaged statues
Yesterday's thoughts
Conquer, defuse
The word of the majority
Abolish all government
Disempower all authority
#dark
#freedom
#politics
#rhyming
#war
133 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Jun 2024 6:45pm
27th Jun 2024 6:45pm
I am who I am
I'm not your anything
I'm not your god
I'm not your slave
I'm not your lover
I'm not your assassin
I am every thing I am
I'm not your god
I'm not your slave
I'm not your lover
I'm not your assassin
I am every thing I am
#freedom
#identity
#SelfWorth
126 reads
5 Comments
Just-Rob
Poem Published
27th Jun 2024 6:09pm
27th Jun 2024 6:09pm
It Isn't Me
I want to disappear to some faraway place
Just get up and go and not leave a trace
No forwarding address for me to be found
Break free from the ties and be no longer bound
Alone as ive always been, nobody should care
If they do come looking I wouldn't be there
Off in the unknown Id be happy and free
Nowhere at all is where I want to be
A hint of a memory lost in the years
A piece of nostalgia hidden in tears
A faint thought of missing in somebodys mind
A feeling of loss that can't be defined
...
Just get up and go and not leave a trace
No forwarding address for me to be found
Break free from the ties and be no longer bound
Alone as ive always been, nobody should care
If they do come looking I wouldn't be there
Off in the unknown Id be happy and free
Nowhere at all is where I want to be
A hint of a memory lost in the years
A piece of nostalgia hidden in tears
A faint thought of missing in somebodys mind
A feeling of loss that can't be defined
...
#escape
#freedom
#memories
225 reads
6 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
26th Jun 2024 00:36am
26th Jun 2024 00:36am
Drink the Koolaid
The silence of sheep appalls me
Walking on either side of me
How many of you took the jab
And how many times, how many
We don't talk about that
Pretending to walk in a cloud of unknowing
The people who forced sick elderly to stay in old folks homes
To pad the numbers, they needed deaths
Deaths gave reason to treachery
Whose only true reason was basest tyranny
How did you like your masks
Did you keep those souvenirs
Learning how to obediently distance
Simon says, "Jump!"
Did you just jump or did you ask...
Walking on either side of me
How many of you took the jab
And how many times, how many
We don't talk about that
Pretending to walk in a cloud of unknowing
The people who forced sick elderly to stay in old folks homes
To pad the numbers, they needed deaths
Deaths gave reason to treachery
Whose only true reason was basest tyranny
How did you like your masks
Did you keep those souvenirs
Learning how to obediently distance
Simon says, "Jump!"
Did you just jump or did you ask...
#death
#drugs
#freedom #prison
#freedom #prison
247 reads
18 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 11:56am
24th Jun 2024 11:56am
Fool's Gold
we all just
so digital
swimming in our phones
walking in our laptops
sleeping with our tablets
eyes deep in
thoughts arrested
make believe beauty
fairytale adventures
all at the touch
of your finger
grab a bag o'chips
and sit on down
where we going today...
so digital
swimming in our phones
walking in our laptops
sleeping with our tablets
eyes deep in
thoughts arrested
make believe beauty
fairytale adventures
all at the touch
of your finger
grab a bag o'chips
and sit on down
where we going today...
#culture
#dark
#freedom
142 reads
4 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 2:35am
21st Jun 2024 2:35am
freedom and chains
Birds are a miracle because they prove to us there is a finer, simpler
state of being[,] which we may strive to attain.”—Douglas Coupland
“Man is a bird without wings and a bird is a man without sorrow.”
—Louis de Bernieres
softly feathered, fluffy bird,
yours the sweetest song i’ve heard,
how inclined your head, to look
as, perhaps, i were a book
you must struggle hard to read!
what new lessons could i teach
one whose wit i must beseech
to expand the narrowness
into which i now recess?
edify my...
state of being[,] which we may strive to attain.”—Douglas Coupland
“Man is a bird without wings and a bird is a man without sorrow.”
—Louis de Bernieres
softly feathered, fluffy bird,
yours the sweetest song i’ve heard,
how inclined your head, to look
as, perhaps, i were a book
you must struggle hard to read!
what new lessons could i teach
one whose wit i must beseech
to expand the narrowness
into which i now recess?
edify my...
#birds
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#freedom
#humankind
107 reads
0 Comments
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