Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Though Storms May Come....Stand
The greatest God, it is he who owns the storm, and im not speaking of man made storms, but the one who lets the rain, who loans the wind, who absorbes the force of the river when they desire for it to rage and destroy. The God who subdues death at his will.
This God I am praying to, the God of Abraham, God of Moses.
His son, the door.
I pray for his mercy, for the whirlwind to get caught in his lasso, where he can love it into a downy chick.
And the winds that follow, to sleep quietly in their heavenly designated corners.
Please God, I know we deserve...
This God I am praying to, the God of Abraham, God of Moses.
His son, the door.
I pray for his mercy, for the whirlwind to get caught in his lasso, where he can love it into a downy chick.
And the winds that follow, to sleep quietly in their heavenly designated corners.
Please God, I know we deserve...
#forgiveness
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#strength
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Black Heart Red
What does black heart do when love is red
Looking for love in run down places
Quick one nighter but nothing lasting
What no one knows is the black heart has a soul
He doesn’t want to admit it
He lets nobody see it but he takes it out late at night
Looking for something deeper
Not getting any younger
Feelin lonely on this red heart day
See love all around but it doesn’t get
Deep in the black heart
Have a red heart near but she has no place in her life for my black soul
But this black heart...
Looking for love in run down places
Quick one nighter but nothing lasting
What no one knows is the black heart has a soul
He doesn’t want to admit it
He lets nobody see it but he takes it out late at night
Looking for something deeper
Not getting any younger
Feelin lonely on this red heart day
See love all around but it doesn’t get
Deep in the black heart
Have a red heart near but she has no place in her life for my black soul
But this black heart...
#forgiveness
#honesty
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
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A Mission Of Love
Feel the wonders of every word
bring poetry scent to the world
break any chain of hate and rise
our differences, let's harmonize.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The peace and Love of fairy tales
let's relish, give no heed to pains
I'm human inside who's awake
my seeds of Love are true not fake.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The heart but a rich land to feed
to a mission of Love souls cede
true nature no need to translate ...
bring poetry scent to the world
break any chain of hate and rise
our differences, let's harmonize.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The peace and Love of fairy tales
let's relish, give no heed to pains
I'm human inside who's awake
my seeds of Love are true not fake.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The heart but a rich land to feed
to a mission of Love souls cede
true nature no need to translate ...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
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Gary Lineker a genuine Brit and quite discernibly also, a man of high stature!
By Stanley Collymore
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
#courage
#forgiveness
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Rancid Love
My love is rancid
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
#forgiveness
#love
#respect #support
#respect #support
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Don’t Fall in Love with Me
Don’t fall in love with me, I beg you now,
I’m a storm you can’t calm, and I don’t know how
to stay when the darkness swallows me whole,
to hold on to love when I’m losing control.
I’ll make you smile, I’ll make you believe,
but in the end, I’m the one who will leave.
My heart’s a wreck, a broken machine,
held together by threads you’ve never seen.
I’ll give you pieces I can’t even keep,
whisper promises I’ll break in my sleep.
I’ll let you in close, but when you’re inside,
you’ll find all the places where I...
I’m a storm you can’t calm, and I don’t know how
to stay when the darkness swallows me whole,
to hold on to love when I’m losing control.
I’ll make you smile, I’ll make you believe,
but in the end, I’m the one who will leave.
My heart’s a wreck, a broken machine,
held together by threads you’ve never seen.
I’ll give you pieces I can’t even keep,
whisper promises I’ll break in my sleep.
I’ll let you in close, but when you’re inside,
you’ll find all the places where I...
#FallingInLove
#forgiveness
#honesty
#ILoveYou
#relationships
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remOrse
The skeletons of the past must not hold back the dream of a new life, even
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
#forgiveness
#ImSorry
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#regret
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I am coming back
I am coming back
To reality now
Because for a long time now
I was living in my dream world
I was feeling safe
In my dream world
I didn't want to leave my dream world
People told me that I was a crazy person
To live in my dream world
I had lots of peace in my dream world
That I needed badly
To reality now
Because for a long time now
I was living in my dream world
I was feeling safe
In my dream world
I didn't want to leave my dream world
People told me that I was a crazy person
To live in my dream world
I had lots of peace in my dream world
That I needed badly
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#motivational
#redemption
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A poem for my daughter
I mess up sometimes
I make mistakes
I give too much in a world that takes
I fail I fall
I go back to old ways
I do regret what I did in past days
I lose my temper
I over think
I waste to much of myself on drink
I gotta say through it all to you
I always mean the best I do
And I will always love so true
I make mistakes
I give too much in a world that takes
I fail I fall
I go back to old ways
I do regret what I did in past days
I lose my temper
I over think
I waste to much of myself on drink
I gotta say through it all to you
I always mean the best I do
And I will always love so true
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope #love
#hope #love
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Thoughts of mind
Because of my past
I know where you belong.
It's only for my weakness
that I had now become so strong.
I lost my voice too many times
the one that tells me how I
shine.
Sometime after
I had broken from your spell.
I start to see my happiness
I missed so very well.
I opened up my eyes one night
alert to walls that held me tight.
Lies that kept me weak inside
the ones that made me hide my pride.
I took the wish I held so tight ...
I know where you belong.
It's only for my weakness
that I had now become so strong.
I lost my voice too many times
the one that tells me how I
shine.
Sometime after
I had broken from your spell.
I start to see my happiness
I missed so very well.
I opened up my eyes one night
alert to walls that held me tight.
Lies that kept me weak inside
the ones that made me hide my pride.
I took the wish I held so tight ...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
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unconditionaly
entertaining my fathomless wholly beguiling imagination
I just got back from picking the best stars in the cosmos
I got a ring from Saturn will she take it back
if I disappoint needless point, really
you can't buy love not mine anyway
selfish me asking the stars to leave
their beautiful heaven all colors aglow
it's been some time, grieving
it will take you away to other places
the gravity of the situation has me on shakey feet
denial of self or indulgence of a vast imagination
there are no confines or restrictions
if...
I just got back from picking the best stars in the cosmos
I got a ring from Saturn will she take it back
if I disappoint needless point, really
you can't buy love not mine anyway
selfish me asking the stars to leave
their beautiful heaven all colors aglow
it's been some time, grieving
it will take you away to other places
the gravity of the situation has me on shakey feet
denial of self or indulgence of a vast imagination
there are no confines or restrictions
if...
#forgiveness
#ILoveYou
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Cold war
When will the cold war
That is going on in the world end?
I think it is so sad that the children have to live in the Countries that they have cold wars
But the children are the victim of this cold war because sometimes they End up killed by bombs that they fired in The air
And the children becomes the innocent victim of the cold war
I also wished that I could bring some children out of the Countries that are in war to save them and give them a life here in Canada that they don't have at home
That is going on in the world end?
I think it is so sad that the children have to live in the Countries that they have cold wars
But the children are the victim of this cold war because sometimes they End up killed by bombs that they fired in The air
And the children becomes the innocent victim of the cold war
I also wished that I could bring some children out of the Countries that are in war to save them and give them a life here in Canada that they don't have at home
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#gratitude
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DU Poetry : Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique