Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sweden tody
Sweden today
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions #forgiveness
#emotions #forgiveness
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Through this life
They elders say that through this one life, that you will have encounters that we may never truly understand. FOR each one will be different, than the one before it 🤔 For sure each one will have lessons, that we must learn to navigate through the next, chapter of our lives. FOR nothing in particular in life comes easy 🤨 as it will have challenges that could make you or break you, down to the point of just giving up to fight against the deepness, of that damage of the truth of your heart and spiritual soul.🙏 Your own health of your will being or it could be your mistake...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
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Rehab
I feed my heart and the warmth washes my skin
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
#apathy
#emptiness
#forgiveness
#redemption
#TimeHeals
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It's in this space and time
When tears fall from up above what could happen in your, brain 🧠 that is your mind and heart ❤️ and spiritual subconsciousness of your own thoughts. 🧐 For I just don't want you to go through the process of the sounds, of the rain drops. 💧 I want you to think 🤔 about the last time, that in your own time. WHEN you shed tears from your own eyes due, to the very deepness of the truth of the hurt and spiritual pain. THAT you had and have to go through, 🤔 in your own personal life. 🙏 For sure your tears will be more than tears falling...
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#strength
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New Beginnings
It has been so long
Since we have been alone
It brings back memories
Of you and I
Sweet kisses, I miss
In the moonlight
Tender touches, I reminisce
Of you and I
You look so good
I never understood
Why did it have to end
Tell me why
You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny
Let's start a new
You and I
This time, there will be no end
My lover and friend
Since we have been alone
It brings back memories
Of you and I
Sweet kisses, I miss
In the moonlight
Tender touches, I reminisce
Of you and I
You look so good
I never understood
Why did it have to end
Tell me why
You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny
Let's start a new
You and I
This time, there will be no end
My lover and friend
#forgiveness
#relationships
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Suffering from apathy
Even if we don't speak,
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
#emotions
#forgiveness
#happiness
#love
#TimeHeals
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Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
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Dust
They are fooling you all.
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
#forgiveness
#hope
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Decisions Need To Be Made
There's a tumor on her spleen, nodules in her lungs, and an even bigger mass than the one they removed two years ago along with her ovaries now pressing on her lower organs and prohibiting proper functions of her bladder and bowel. She called me yesterday asking me to intercede for her and talk to her Dr.
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#strength
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Six feet under
Not a good start
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
#courage
#forgiveness
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
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Mindful
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#WritingPoetry
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XOXO
All I know is
be real keep integrity
takes too much energy
to level down for a snake
When the grass low
I’m good it's cool
when I’m not
it's chaos folks levitate
Run don’t walk
mowed at that growl
a howl’s far worse
nape hairs stood on ends
If you got me fucked up
was a person
I’d collect bodies
not friends
Steel fiber
sharpens teeth
off with their heads
Queen of Hearts salt remarks
Overstand I’m a different pedigree
seasoned lone wolf
murder to eat by Nature
no false starts ...
be real keep integrity
takes too much energy
to level down for a snake
When the grass low
I’m good it's cool
when I’m not
it's chaos folks levitate
Run don’t walk
mowed at that growl
a howl’s far worse
nape hairs stood on ends
If you got me fucked up
was a person
I’d collect bodies
not friends
Steel fiber
sharpens teeth
off with their heads
Queen of Hearts salt remarks
Overstand I’m a different pedigree
seasoned lone wolf
murder to eat by Nature
no false starts ...
#deception
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hypocrisy
#respect
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DU Poetry : Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique