Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Poetically Yours
Now, it is past summer
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#respect
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Insanity
Insane
What is it?
Is it in the mind
is it in the membrane
is it in my head
where the fuck is it
where does it come from
inside, outside
yesterday, today
insane in my mind
is it me
is it you
i don't know.
Wish I Did...
What is it?
Is it in the mind
is it in the membrane
is it in my head
where the fuck is it
where does it come from
inside, outside
yesterday, today
insane in my mind
is it me
is it you
i don't know.
Wish I Did...
#forgiveness
#strength
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IT'S ONLY THE BEGINNING
From my own life I take a page from out of my life, as I reflect on the power of the mind and heart, and spiritual soul. For even though I was looking death in eye, I knew that I had to be able to share my own personal thoughts, for sure we will never know how someone else is doing in there own struggles. As life is a struggle In different stages of experience, whether in a relationship or with friends and family. 😔 Yet it is those times when we all will need that helping hand 🙏 to be able to share the deepness of what it means to be a kindred spiritual person. For sure it's...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#strength
#TimeHeals
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Parole for my Soul
Parole for my soul
Please mister jailer just a question
Can you give me redemption
And parole for my soul
And wash away my sins
Like taking ink off a blotter
Fingerprints disappear
But a stain remains deep in my heart
Please give me parole for my soul
Go to confession on my knees
Jesus please save me
Lift my spirit and my soul
Make me like the original
God above the heaven
With parole for my soul
Free me from Satan
And dirty deeds things just that diminish me
Not...
Please mister jailer just a question
Can you give me redemption
And parole for my soul
And wash away my sins
Like taking ink off a blotter
Fingerprints disappear
But a stain remains deep in my heart
Please give me parole for my soul
Go to confession on my knees
Jesus please save me
Lift my spirit and my soul
Make me like the original
God above the heaven
With parole for my soul
Free me from Satan
And dirty deeds things just that diminish me
Not...
#forgiveness
#prayer
#redemption #strength
#redemption #strength
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Don't give up on me
Don't give up on me
Don't tell me lies
Don't tell me secrets
Because I don't want to know your secrets
Please keep it private
Don't give up on me
Because I still need you friend
In my life
Don't give up on me
Please pray for me every night
Because I need some prayers
I will also pray for you friend
Also before you go to sleep every night
You must pray to God
It only takes a few minutes
Then you can go straight to bed
I hope you sleep all through the night
Without walking up in the middle of the night ...
Don't tell me lies
Don't tell me secrets
Because I don't want to know your secrets
Please keep it private
Don't give up on me
Because I still need you friend
In my life
Don't give up on me
Please pray for me every night
Because I need some prayers
I will also pray for you friend
Also before you go to sleep every night
You must pray to God
It only takes a few minutes
Then you can go straight to bed
I hope you sleep all through the night
Without walking up in the middle of the night ...
#admiration
#courage
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#inspirational
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2837 sonata
Now that he is growing up
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
#emotions
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
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Black Heart Red
What does black heart do when love is red
Looking for love in run down places
Quick one nighter but nothing lasting
What no one knows is the black heart has a soul
He doesn’t want to admit it
He lets nobody see it but he takes it out late at night
Looking for something deeper
Not getting any younger
Feelin lonely on this red heart day
See love all around but it doesn’t get
Deep in the black heart
Have a red heart near but she has no place in her life for my black soul
But this black heart...
Looking for love in run down places
Quick one nighter but nothing lasting
What no one knows is the black heart has a soul
He doesn’t want to admit it
He lets nobody see it but he takes it out late at night
Looking for something deeper
Not getting any younger
Feelin lonely on this red heart day
See love all around but it doesn’t get
Deep in the black heart
Have a red heart near but she has no place in her life for my black soul
But this black heart...
#forgiveness
#honesty
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
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A Mission Of Love
Feel the wonders of every word
bring poetry scent to the world
break any chain of hate and rise
our differences, let's harmonize.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The peace and Love of fairy tales
let's relish, give no heed to pains
I'm human inside who's awake
my seeds of Love are true not fake.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The heart but a rich land to feed
to a mission of Love souls cede
true nature no need to translate ...
bring poetry scent to the world
break any chain of hate and rise
our differences, let's harmonize.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The peace and Love of fairy tales
let's relish, give no heed to pains
I'm human inside who's awake
my seeds of Love are true not fake.
Unleash inner beauty and bond
reach out for me and sing your song.
The heart but a rich land to feed
to a mission of Love souls cede
true nature no need to translate ...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
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Gary Lineker a genuine Brit and quite discernibly also, a man of high stature!
By Stanley Collymore
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
#courage
#forgiveness
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Rancid Love
My love is rancid
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
#forgiveness
#love
#respect #support
#respect #support
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Don’t Fall in Love with Me
Don’t fall in love with me, I beg you now,
I’m a storm you can’t calm, and I don’t know how
to stay when the darkness swallows me whole,
to hold on to love when I’m losing control.
I’ll make you smile, I’ll make you believe,
but in the end, I’m the one who will leave.
My heart’s a wreck, a broken machine,
held together by threads you’ve never seen.
I’ll give you pieces I can’t even keep,
whisper promises I’ll break in my sleep.
I’ll let you in close, but when you’re inside,
you’ll find all the places where I...
I’m a storm you can’t calm, and I don’t know how
to stay when the darkness swallows me whole,
to hold on to love when I’m losing control.
I’ll make you smile, I’ll make you believe,
but in the end, I’m the one who will leave.
My heart’s a wreck, a broken machine,
held together by threads you’ve never seen.
I’ll give you pieces I can’t even keep,
whisper promises I’ll break in my sleep.
I’ll let you in close, but when you’re inside,
you’ll find all the places where I...
#FallingInLove
#forgiveness
#honesty
#ILoveYou
#relationships
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remOrse
The skeletons of the past must not hold back the dream of a new life, even
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
#forgiveness
#ImSorry
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#regret
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DU Poetry : Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique