Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Love
Simplicity, not synchronicity.
#forgiveness
#hope
#love #strength
#love #strength
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Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
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Dust
They are fooling you all.
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
#forgiveness
#hope
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Decisions Need To Be Made
There's a tumor on her spleen, nodules in her lungs, and an even bigger mass than the one they removed two years ago along with her ovaries now pressing on her lower organs and prohibiting proper functions of her bladder and bowel. She called me yesterday asking me to intercede for her and talk to her Dr.
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#strength
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Six feet under
Not a good start
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
#courage
#forgiveness
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
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Mindful
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#WritingPoetry
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XOXO
All I know is
be real keep integrity
takes too much energy
to level down for a snake
When the grass low
I’m good it's cool
when I’m not
it's chaos folks levitate
Run don’t walk
mowed at that growl
a howl’s far worse
nape hairs stood on ends
If you got me fucked up
was a person
I’d collect bodies
not friends
Steel fiber
sharpens teeth
off with their heads
Queen of Hearts salt remarks
Overstand I’m a different pedigree
seasoned lone wolf
murder to eat by Nature
no false starts ...
be real keep integrity
takes too much energy
to level down for a snake
When the grass low
I’m good it's cool
when I’m not
it's chaos folks levitate
Run don’t walk
mowed at that growl
a howl’s far worse
nape hairs stood on ends
If you got me fucked up
was a person
I’d collect bodies
not friends
Steel fiber
sharpens teeth
off with their heads
Queen of Hearts salt remarks
Overstand I’m a different pedigree
seasoned lone wolf
murder to eat by Nature
no false starts ...
#deception
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hypocrisy
#respect
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We don't talk no more
I would like to have a conversation, with you as man to woman and woman to man. WHY is that you and I don't talk, like we use to do when we first connected, on so many levels of our own opinions. As we exchange thoughts and the subconsciousness, of our thoughts and lives together as one. 🙏 For sure what has changed over time ⌚ in each of our lives, that we never really have time to talk about situations, that we have to face in our lives. 💕 For don't we still have love and support, and understanding to make it easier. TO survive in this hard cold world. 🌍 For...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#love
#respect
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Dear Lord
Dear Lord
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
#courage
#forgiveness
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The Feast of Decay
Foolishness and Error walk hand in hand,
Their chains bind tight both soul and flesh,
As Man, enthralled by shadows grand,
Nourishes guilt, though bound afresh.
Sin stands defiant, repentance meek,
While trembling vows the spirit drain.
In tears, Man finds the peace they seek,
Yet falls to murk and mire again.
Enthroned above, the Devil grins,
Craftsman of craft, he works unseen;
He shapes our will like molten glass,
And hones our lead to keep it mean.
The Devil's strings direct the dance,
With foul delights...
Their chains bind tight both soul and flesh,
As Man, enthralled by shadows grand,
Nourishes guilt, though bound afresh.
Sin stands defiant, repentance meek,
While trembling vows the spirit drain.
In tears, Man finds the peace they seek,
Yet falls to murk and mire again.
Enthroned above, the Devil grins,
Craftsman of craft, he works unseen;
He shapes our will like molten glass,
And hones our lead to keep it mean.
The Devil's strings direct the dance,
With foul delights...
#corruption
#devil
#forgiveness
#morality
#redemption
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Overdue
Guilt enraptures skin
and flesh
till its bone
and blood.
Greedy fingers wanting
always wanting
never wrapping comfortably
around what they want.
Praise
a frivolous thing
handed to those
undeserving.
And I am one
who has not earned
what they desire
so deeply.
Claws rip deep
thoughts cut deeper
marrow mixing
yellow and red.
Snow and rain
sun changing them
yet do they
deserve to be changed?
and flesh
till its bone
and blood.
Greedy fingers wanting
always wanting
never wrapping comfortably
around what they want.
Praise
a frivolous thing
handed to those
undeserving.
And I am one
who has not earned
what they desire
so deeply.
Claws rip deep
thoughts cut deeper
marrow mixing
yellow and red.
Snow and rain
sun changing them
yet do they
deserve to be changed?
#forgiveness
#greed
#ImSorry #regret
#ImSorry #regret
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How Long [Redux]
There are times when a man needs to back down from his strength
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me?
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything?
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you...
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me?
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything?
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you...
#forgiveness
#love
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DU Poetry : Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique