Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Email from David, the Father of My Baby
Lauryn,
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#support
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Forgiveness
My mother said, “Lauryn,
you’ll know when it’s time
to give yourself away. Just
be sure he’s worthy.”
Like many parents, my mother
was wrong about some things.
How could she have known that
the man taking my innocence
shared her bed?
I hope the daughter growing in me
will forgive my mistakes.
you’ll know when it’s time
to give yourself away. Just
be sure he’s worthy.”
Like many parents, my mother
was wrong about some things.
How could she have known that
the man taking my innocence
shared her bed?
I hope the daughter growing in me
will forgive my mistakes.
#motherhood
#forgiveness
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Sovereignty.
Before going to bed
Think how many people
Put life before us
To save our
Lives and money.
How many mother's
put their
Souls into living a livelihood.
Don't work hard
work right.
Give a widow her rights
To food, shelter and clothing
At no cost.
Use your energy cautiously.
Yes there are certain birds
Who can't fly but like emu, ostrich and ducks and chickens don't eat them. Certain people are giving energy while eating them.
Anyways. ...
Think how many people
Put life before us
To save our
Lives and money.
How many mother's
put their
Souls into living a livelihood.
Don't work hard
work right.
Give a widow her rights
To food, shelter and clothing
At no cost.
Use your energy cautiously.
Yes there are certain birds
Who can't fly but like emu, ostrich and ducks and chickens don't eat them. Certain people are giving energy while eating them.
Anyways. ...
#love
#grief
#forgiveness
#heartbroken
#memories
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Akmed
You are in my arms
a baby, infant, little angel
your eyes now closed
mine were too
wrapped in soft white cloth
I hug you, surrounded by angry stares
Akmed
It pains me to confess
I thought I was a good man
defending what was right
never will I forget you
the little angel who set me free
the angry faces saw my tears
I turned to them and the sky
silent as can be
I ripped off my uniform
we all understood
On this day
I rejoined humanity
a baby, infant, little angel
your eyes now closed
mine were too
wrapped in soft white cloth
I hug you, surrounded by angry stares
Akmed
It pains me to confess
I thought I was a good man
defending what was right
never will I forget you
the little angel who set me free
the angry faces saw my tears
I turned to them and the sky
silent as can be
I ripped off my uniform
we all understood
On this day
I rejoined humanity
#love
#forgiveness
#inspirational #redemption
#inspirational #redemption
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Only Words
Clean up your heart , then come down to clean the dirty streets.
You will never give what you don't have, so do not preach the good word,
people would never believe you, "silence is a mute adviser.."
Your garden is stark torrid, you only grow cactus and thorns,
So do not expect to see flowers blooming after what you sowed.
From Nature, stem every emotion, every thought and every creation,
The loss of any one of them, will make you emotionally unbalanced,
a shallow thinker, and a mediocre...
You will never give what you don't have, so do not preach the good word,
people would never believe you, "silence is a mute adviser.."
Your garden is stark torrid, you only grow cactus and thorns,
So do not expect to see flowers blooming after what you sowed.
From Nature, stem every emotion, every thought and every creation,
The loss of any one of them, will make you emotionally unbalanced,
a shallow thinker, and a mediocre...
#courage
#forgiveness
#inspirational
#admiration
#emotions
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Forgive And Forget
In the realm of forgiveness, a lesson profound,
Where hearts are lightened, true peace is found.
Let go of resentment, release all regret,
In the dance of forgiveness, let's not forget.
For to forgive is to heal, a balm for the soul,
To mend broken bonds, to make us whole.
Release the chains of anger, let them unwind,
Embrace compassion, leave no grudge behind.
But forgetting, dear friend, is a harder feat,
For memories linger, their mark complete.
Yet in forgiveness lies the strength to move on,
To rewrite the story, to find...
Where hearts are lightened, true peace is found.
Let go of resentment, release all regret,
In the dance of forgiveness, let's not forget.
For to forgive is to heal, a balm for the soul,
To mend broken bonds, to make us whole.
Release the chains of anger, let them unwind,
Embrace compassion, leave no grudge behind.
But forgetting, dear friend, is a harder feat,
For memories linger, their mark complete.
Yet in forgiveness lies the strength to move on,
To rewrite the story, to find...
#forgiveness
#FreeVerse
#TimeHeals
#LifeCycle
#redemption
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Free Yourself
Forgiveness…forgiveness is about letting go
Letting go of the anger and resentment toward someone else
It’s about freeing yourself of the past that cast a heavy burden
And finally being able to breathe by coming up to the surface
Forgiveness is about getting rid of those emotional chains
Those that once bound you, those that wouldn’t let you move ahead
Is about being able to see the truth that beyond all façades
We’re flawed and thus we must find absolution and make amends
Forgiveness is about releasing the thorns embedded within
When...
Letting go of the anger and resentment toward someone else
It’s about freeing yourself of the past that cast a heavy burden
And finally being able to breathe by coming up to the surface
Forgiveness is about getting rid of those emotional chains
Those that once bound you, those that wouldn’t let you move ahead
Is about being able to see the truth that beyond all façades
We’re flawed and thus we must find absolution and make amends
Forgiveness is about releasing the thorns embedded within
When...
#ImSorry
#forgiveness
#MovingOn
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Forgiveness
Forgiveness is...
The awareness of oneness
Of that lack of perception of separation
It's the knowing of the human ego weakness,
liberation from the story that enslaves you
Letting go and accepting what is.
Forgiveness is empathy
It's the healing of your traumas
It has its reasons of existence
As the other pole of revenge
which is resentment
which is resistance
You cannot impose forgiveness
It's a consequence of self love
In this world of mad existence
Nothing stands as unforgiven
The awareness of oneness
Of that lack of perception of separation
It's the knowing of the human ego weakness,
liberation from the story that enslaves you
Letting go and accepting what is.
Forgiveness is empathy
It's the healing of your traumas
It has its reasons of existence
As the other pole of revenge
which is resentment
which is resistance
You cannot impose forgiveness
It's a consequence of self love
In this world of mad existence
Nothing stands as unforgiven
#forgiveness
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The Beautiful Creation
Oh, what i crave !
The soulful sound of the music wave
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano key, by slender hands
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what i crave!
Golden fields sway like wave
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
And cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
Ah, how i like to watch !
And the sea all the blue to see ...
The soulful sound of the music wave
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano key, by slender hands
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what i crave!
Golden fields sway like wave
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
And cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
Ah, how i like to watch !
And the sea all the blue to see ...
#forgiveness
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
#emotions
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Jesus Did It, Best
Quite the plan, it was--
to forgive
and exterminate every sin
past, present and future.
You see,
if something isn't alive
and flesh,
how can it be physically killed?
That's where the cup of iniquity
came in handy--
fill it with every murder,
lie, theft, deceitful thing,
you name it,
then drink it.....
It became part of you.
Flesh--
as it absorbed into the blood
infusing tissue,
part of life, alive
then it was game on.
Allow your own creation
to kill you
with...
to forgive
and exterminate every sin
past, present and future.
You see,
if something isn't alive
and flesh,
how can it be physically killed?
That's where the cup of iniquity
came in handy--
fill it with every murder,
lie, theft, deceitful thing,
you name it,
then drink it.....
It became part of you.
Flesh--
as it absorbed into the blood
infusing tissue,
part of life, alive
then it was game on.
Allow your own creation
to kill you
with...
#forgiveness
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Wild Showers And Tender Flowers
Wild Showers And Tender Flowers
Nature basks in the flowerish bower
Spending dreamy times in vernal hours
The path is beaten and the way is clear
Joyous journey before the scythe of mower
******
Lying calm beneath the blue heaven
Caring less, no inch of dusty thougth is given
Fields of green, or even colourfully green,
By the Godly urge, the poet's muse, driven
******
As if earth and man were both reborn
Life to an ilde land, has been restored
Buzzing, droning, tweetering, all alive
A new age of music,...
Nature basks in the flowerish bower
Spending dreamy times in vernal hours
The path is beaten and the way is clear
Joyous journey before the scythe of mower
******
Lying calm beneath the blue heaven
Caring less, no inch of dusty thougth is given
Fields of green, or even colourfully green,
By the Godly urge, the poet's muse, driven
******
As if earth and man were both reborn
Life to an ilde land, has been restored
Buzzing, droning, tweetering, all alive
A new age of music,...
#love
#strength
#courage
#forgiveness
#emotions
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HEART STRINGS
The pain in my heart, it will never part,
For I let you down from the very start.
See it played in many a different way,
Finally, eyes opened come what may.
My love's overflowing, this boat I'm in,
But I've had a hard time of showing it.
Reach for my hand, lead me through,
For I will not ever stop loving you.
The light I'm under is going ever dim,
Your heart is the prize I want to win.
For I am imperfect, will you ever see?
Finding in your heart to ever forgive me?
Those heart strings that I tug...
For I let you down from the very start.
See it played in many a different way,
Finally, eyes opened come what may.
My love's overflowing, this boat I'm in,
But I've had a hard time of showing it.
Reach for my hand, lead me through,
For I will not ever stop loving you.
The light I'm under is going ever dim,
Your heart is the prize I want to win.
For I am imperfect, will you ever see?
Finding in your heart to ever forgive me?
Those heart strings that I tug...
#love
#forgiveness
#heartbroken #bittersweet
#heartbroken #bittersweet
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