Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers
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Poems about dating by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
First Date
To have tried so many times
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush #LookingForLove
#crush #LookingForLove
442 reads
2 Comments
Short Term Magic
#BDSM
#dating
166 reads
12 Comments
full access in reverse gear
after attacking my pussy
at last he raised my ass high
and ejaculated,
nnn i saw that
his sweat and semen
mixed together
n sliding down
my cunt to cleavage...
at last he raised my ass high
and ejaculated,
nnn i saw that
his sweat and semen
mixed together
n sliding down
my cunt to cleavage...
#dating
#relationships
#romantic #sex
#romantic #sex
463 reads
21 Comments
Dating Profile
NAME: Psycho A. Naylis, AKA " Who was that masked man?"
AGE: Older than Moses socks
OCCUPATION: Dowser rod salesman moonlighting as Psychiatrist when wearing my narcissistic hat
PROFILE: Blue-eyed nudist, soothsayer, ex-leatherneck, book monger, and coffee shop
owner, dabbling in prose, and a Christian
WHAT I WANT IN A WOMAN: must enjoy pickleball and get soused while watching bowling, fishing for slugs, old-time religion with a nonvenomous snake, nudity is optional when shopping at Walmart
WHAT I DON'T...
AGE: Older than Moses socks
OCCUPATION: Dowser rod salesman moonlighting as Psychiatrist when wearing my narcissistic hat
PROFILE: Blue-eyed nudist, soothsayer, ex-leatherneck, book monger, and coffee shop
owner, dabbling in prose, and a Christian
WHAT I WANT IN A WOMAN: must enjoy pickleball and get soused while watching bowling, fishing for slugs, old-time religion with a nonvenomous snake, nudity is optional when shopping at Walmart
WHAT I DON'T...
#dating
171 reads
7 Comments
when she wasn't there
what does a sherry glass
look like the following day he had a pint
look like the following day he had a pint
#dating
367 reads
3 Comments
First Date
Off the vine ; very appealing.
She does not come apart.
Her wit is biting.
My wine spills.
Kisses my cheek, trying not to laugh.
That was twenty years ago.
It's only grapes.
She does not come apart.
Her wit is biting.
My wine spills.
Kisses my cheek, trying not to laugh.
That was twenty years ago.
It's only grapes.
#boyfriend
#dating
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#happiness
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A Still Life, What Becomes of the Fruit
All anyone wants to do
is split me,
thumbs in middle to part
through skin tender
as a mandarin’s,
peel me back
to see my center,
drink from both halves,
leave the fruit exposed
to rot and then ask me
if I really expected
more
is split me,
thumbs in middle to part
through skin tender
as a mandarin’s,
peel me back
to see my center,
drink from both halves,
leave the fruit exposed
to rot and then ask me
if I really expected
more
#anger
#dating
#fear
#lust
#sex
115 reads
4 Comments
Bar...
.. ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
#patience
#escape
#dating #boredom
#dating #boredom
644 reads
10 Comments
First Date
Crackers on a Saturday
for the first meeting with my boo
so delectable call her lunch
Shrimp and grits to a king
to my Queen
endless Mimosas and open menu to brunch
Conversation is outstanding
I'm at the edge
of my seat in light rain
Cordial in our interactions
as we speak
your lips vocab send sex to my brain
This what’s done to me
I'm held
on motion of words from your
tongue
The situation is calm
and sensual
as I rest outrageous beats of
my lungs no war drums ...
for the first meeting with my boo
so delectable call her lunch
Shrimp and grits to a king
to my Queen
endless Mimosas and open menu to brunch
Conversation is outstanding
I'm at the edge
of my seat in light rain
Cordial in our interactions
as we speak
your lips vocab send sex to my brain
This what’s done to me
I'm held
on motion of words from your
tongue
The situation is calm
and sensual
as I rest outrageous beats of
my lungs no war drums ...
#dating
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#Romanticism
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1 Comment
Trolling the Stream
Trolling the stream, watch the yuppies go in circles.
Shallow rollers, biting the cast with the current, turning inward with the tide.
Exposed for catfish, bellies in the waves.
For bottom feeders, down the flow, over rocky terrain, unknown.
They also bite when it rains, or if there's assumed bait.
Skip a rock, watch the ripples, and they look to feed.
Hook, line, and sinker - caught.
Used for bigger fish in deep, still waters.
Shallow rollers, biting the cast with the current, turning inward with the tide.
Exposed for catfish, bellies in the waves.
For bottom feeders, down the flow, over rocky terrain, unknown.
They also bite when it rains, or if there's assumed bait.
Skip a rock, watch the ripples, and they look to feed.
Hook, line, and sinker - caught.
Used for bigger fish in deep, still waters.
#technology
#prose
#metaphor
#philosophical
#dating
156 reads
2 Comments
Make Sure That He Truly Loves You
Be proud to be who
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
#dating
#dialogue
#kindness
#lover
#sensual
120 reads
7 Comments
Manners
#lust
#sex
#dating #LookingForLove
#dating #LookingForLove
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10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers