Poems About Dating Seeking Honest Critique
#dating
Poems about dating seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SLYMBEKQUEEN
BLAZE-QUEEN
BLAZE-QUEEN
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:58am
Yesterday 10:58am
LEILA OH LEILA
#anger
#childhood
#dating
#death
#motherhood
19 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 11:18pm
11th Jan 2025 11:18pm
Ways to end a first date...
Handshake unless you see him pick his nose.
He wore his finest Goodwill clothes but hasn't
brushed his teeth since childhood!
Hug unless you can smell his BO from 4 feet away.
He was homeless with a: WILL DATE FOR FOOD sign.
You were sick of eating Big Macs alone!
Kiss on cheek and a thank you. Friend zone.
Too polite. Keep his hopes up. Keep him around to borrow money, run errands and move furniture.
Restraining order because he doesn't understand the word "no". Just say NO to surprise amateur pap smears.
At...
He wore his finest Goodwill clothes but hasn't
brushed his teeth since childhood!
Hug unless you can smell his BO from 4 feet away.
He was homeless with a: WILL DATE FOR FOOD sign.
You were sick of eating Big Macs alone!
Kiss on cheek and a thank you. Friend zone.
Too polite. Keep his hopes up. Keep him around to borrow money, run errands and move furniture.
Restraining order because he doesn't understand the word "no". Just say NO to surprise amateur pap smears.
At...
#dating
#LookingForLove
58 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 5:15am
1st Jan 2025 5:15am
To be a dude for 3 days...
#dating
#men
#sex #women
#sex #women
124 reads
9 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 10:56pm
28th Dec 2024 10:56pm
A Still Life, What Becomes of the Fruit
All anyone wants to do
is split me,
thumbs in middle to part
through skin tender
as a mandarin’s,
peel me back
to see my center,
drink from both halves,
leave the fruit exposed
to rot and then ask me
if I really expected
more
is split me,
thumbs in middle to part
through skin tender
as a mandarin’s,
peel me back
to see my center,
drink from both halves,
leave the fruit exposed
to rot and then ask me
if I really expected
more
#anger
#dating
#fear
#lust
#sex
167 reads
4 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:16pm
20th Dec 2024 11:16pm
Lover Girl Syndrome
I can fall in love with anyone if you give me 3 days and a common thread. And I think that's my problem. I don't want or like cautiously climbing for the sake of saving face or being rational. I want to love them, and I want to do so now. This most recent boy? In 3 days, I imagined waking in his arms to snow outside my bedroom window. And he said he wanted casual. What the fuck is casual? I only know seeing someone and showing them a portrait of my perspective. That's how I love people. I want to show them magic and now I am terrified to be that. I have to DM someone and ask them "how...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#loneliness
#love
#lover
118 reads
3 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
Fruit Puzzles
I try to picture you in my life,
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
#dating
#LookingForLove
#love #lover
#love #lover
106 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
104 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
114 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 7:50pm
24th Nov 2024 7:50pm
Make Sure That He Truly Loves You
Be proud to be who
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
#dating
#dialogue
#kindness
#lover
#sensual
136 reads
7 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
Changes
I shuttered my eyes and plugged my ears.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#LookingForLove
#love
156 reads
0 Comments
deadwolf
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 1:39am
9th Nov 2024 1:39am
The First Autumn
Down the hill, and across the field we wandered
Along the paths we walked and talked
laughing and playing, as children do
all day, till the sun ripened
Upon Silverbell lake,
where we swam, and made love in the waters
We ate peaches, from the tree,
with wild strawberries and sweet cream
Laying, on a blanket, drinking the last of the summers wine,
In, our first autum
Along the paths we walked and talked
laughing and playing, as children do
all day, till the sun ripened
Upon Silverbell lake,
where we swam, and made love in the waters
We ate peaches, from the tree,
with wild strawberries and sweet cream
Laying, on a blanket, drinking the last of the summers wine,
In, our first autum
#countryside
#dating
#love #wife
#love #wife
83 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
One Nervous Teenager
He would go to those dances
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#school
#ShortStory
83 reads
6 Comments
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