Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers
#crush
Poems about a crush by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Because I Love You
You walk into a room,
and you see the door smack your back
Never once would you believe,
that you now need to leave
Then you fall through the wall,
no escape, as you begin to crawl
You decide there's an easier way,
this is how you're life will change, for you
Some people say that I'm alone... yeah!
They can't understand the reason why...yeah!
When the bell of my heart rings,
I'll know what to sing
That is why I sing to you,
because that I love you
All these feelings I know are true...
and you see the door smack your back
Never once would you believe,
that you now need to leave
Then you fall through the wall,
no escape, as you begin to crawl
You decide there's an easier way,
this is how you're life will change, for you
Some people say that I'm alone... yeah!
They can't understand the reason why...yeah!
When the bell of my heart rings,
I'll know what to sing
That is why I sing to you,
because that I love you
All these feelings I know are true...
#crush
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou #romantic
#ILoveYou #romantic
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8 Comments
Still Waiting To Kiss You!

#crush
#romantic
379 reads
15 Comments
LET IT ALL HANG OUT

#romantic
#honesty
#admiration
#crush
#obsession
220 reads
4 Comments
porno
your pornography entered me roughly
arousing my senses
until my red light was on
you knew I felt you then
by the urgency of my kisses
seducing you into my depths
once the greedy rhythm of the moment took hold
my lust answered for me
I need your hard resolve inside my sweet fantasy
an aching desire blush within your reach
you touch my sensitivity with your masculinity
leaving me reeling until you grab hold of me
pinning me to the passion
while you explore my visions of us
deep within my hollow spaces
I...
arousing my senses
until my red light was on
you knew I felt you then
by the urgency of my kisses
seducing you into my depths
once the greedy rhythm of the moment took hold
my lust answered for me
I need your hard resolve inside my sweet fantasy
an aching desire blush within your reach
you touch my sensitivity with your masculinity
leaving me reeling until you grab hold of me
pinning me to the passion
while you explore my visions of us
deep within my hollow spaces
I...
#lust
#crush
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8 Comments
JUST TO HEAR YOUR VOICE
They say that when you truly love someone it shows in there actions of their heart and soul, for when your are apart it feels like that the best part of you is missing and gone. From the mere depth of your reach and the deepness of each others loving touch. For even during those moments of absence that is suppose to make the heart grow fonder. All you want to do is be able to just hear the sound of their voice, as it calms your spiritual soul with an amazing and beautiful voice and words spoken from there lips too your ears. For it is through those journeys across space and time, were you...
#BestFriend
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
#crush
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8 Comments
WORDS OF HONEST DESIRE
Words of honest desire
company did inspire -
you've lit that inner fire,
to rip off the attire,
make breaths loudly expire.
You eclipse loves prior:
want to take things higher?
company did inspire -
you've lit that inner fire,
to rip off the attire,
make breaths loudly expire.
You eclipse loves prior:
want to take things higher?
#love
#rhyming
#FallingInLove #crush
#FallingInLove #crush
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4 Comments
I know some of your secrets
I know enough
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
#crush
#despair
#lover
#lust
#temptation
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22 Comments
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #3
Through keyholes' glimpse a world unknown,
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design, ...
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design, ...
#crush
#erotic
#love
#lust
#passion
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6 Comments
Catheterization
How freely swing once studly cocks
through arcs of newfound impotence.
Once kings of cum precipitance
now dangling like spent Christmas socks
whose love must now be far beyond
the caliber of bursting loads
and all tumescence which forebodes
those viscid darts her beauty...spawned...
before reverse insertion stress
where implantation shouldn't be
due to how Cupid has to pee
when his bladder begins to press
even as his crotch is wrecked...
because he had his prostate checked.
through arcs of newfound impotence.
Once kings of cum precipitance
now dangling like spent Christmas socks
whose love must now be far beyond
the caliber of bursting loads
and all tumescence which forebodes
those viscid darts her beauty...spawned...
before reverse insertion stress
where implantation shouldn't be
due to how Cupid has to pee
when his bladder begins to press
even as his crotch is wrecked...
because he had his prostate checked.
#crush
#marriage
#sex
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8 Comments
Relax
Open your mind
Not your legs
Look me in the eyes
Im safe
I can be a home
This is your place
Dont be a stranger
Let me see your face
Give me a number
Or let me stay
We could be forever
Or dissipate
Dont forget your things
Thats too much weight
I could be a crane
But i still break
Dont close your eyes
Stay awake
Come into the light
Drop the shade
Im your free ride
Not a maze
Give me your mind
Ill give you faith
You could be a god
Ill be your saint
Not your legs
Look me in the eyes
Im safe
I can be a home
This is your place
Dont be a stranger
Let me see your face
Give me a number
Or let me stay
We could be forever
Or dissipate
Dont forget your things
Thats too much weight
I could be a crane
But i still break
Dont close your eyes
Stay awake
Come into the light
Drop the shade
Im your free ride
Not a maze
Give me your mind
Ill give you faith
You could be a god
Ill be your saint
#FallingInLove
#crush
670 reads
5 Comments
Redeemed
There is a splendid devastation in your departure,
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria.
The annihilated ache feels quite glorious
Beneath the dominion of your desire,
all inhibition perishes in my heart's brilliant fires.
You crossed the throbbing threshold
from my body into my soul's dream.
A heroin of deep peace drugs my bloodstream.
Your vow of lust is redeemed.
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria.
The annihilated ache feels quite glorious
Beneath the dominion of your desire,
all inhibition perishes in my heart's brilliant fires.
You crossed the throbbing threshold
from my body into my soul's dream.
A heroin of deep peace drugs my bloodstream.
Your vow of lust is redeemed.
#crush
#lust
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15 Comments
Teacher's pet
In the depths of night
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
#lust
#confessional
#learning
#crush
#temptation
582 reads
36 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers