Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers
#crush
Poems about a crush by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
TheOralizer
Poem Published
24th Sep 2023 10:07pm
24th Sep 2023 10:07pm
LET IT ALL HANG OUT
#romantic
#honesty
#admiration
#crush
#obsession
126 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 1:05pm
22nd Feb 2024 1:05pm
The Locksmith
The locksmith possessed tools galore.
From inside he can hear the lure
of my core's whispering floors.
Secret lives hidden behind my locked doors.
Good things thoughts are silently concealed.
Or are they parading around like disguised reveals?
Helpless to his unlocking eyes
A devilish burglar blue demise.
Stole my guarded secrets.
Seizing unauthorized bits.
Dismantling my broken stars.
My vaulted labyrinth's stand ajar.
He has systematically unlocked
my deepest far.
Upon the mechanism of my soul
rest his thousand...
From inside he can hear the lure
of my core's whispering floors.
Secret lives hidden behind my locked doors.
Good things thoughts are silently concealed.
Or are they parading around like disguised reveals?
Helpless to his unlocking eyes
A devilish burglar blue demise.
Stole my guarded secrets.
Seizing unauthorized bits.
Dismantling my broken stars.
My vaulted labyrinth's stand ajar.
He has systematically unlocked
my deepest far.
Upon the mechanism of my soul
rest his thousand...
#secrets
#crush
137 reads
18 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Feb 2023 10:51pm
8th Feb 2023 10:51pm
porno
your pornography entered me roughly
arousing my senses
until my red light was on
you knew I felt you then
by the urgency of my kisses
seducing you into my depths
once the greedy rhythm of the moment took hold
my lust answered for me
I need your hard resolve inside my sweet fantasy
an aching desire blush within your reach
you touch my sensitivity with your masculinity
leaving me reeling until you grab hold of me
pinning me to the passion
while you explore my visions of us
deep within my hollow spaces
I...
arousing my senses
until my red light was on
you knew I felt you then
by the urgency of my kisses
seducing you into my depths
once the greedy rhythm of the moment took hold
my lust answered for me
I need your hard resolve inside my sweet fantasy
an aching desire blush within your reach
you touch my sensitivity with your masculinity
leaving me reeling until you grab hold of me
pinning me to the passion
while you explore my visions of us
deep within my hollow spaces
I...
#lust
#crush
346 reads
8 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 11:34am
3rd Apr 2024 11:34am
The Ties That Bind
A union blessed by love's orbs
Stirring kisses home to more
Beneath this cotton candy hood
Crimson casts with karma curls
Hordes of glistening torches
Too close to call it's death
Certain figures fastly fading
Honey pot for night's eclipse
Kissed to sleep on feather bed
Awakening a wholesome bliss
Stirring kisses home to more
Beneath this cotton candy hood
Crimson casts with karma curls
Hordes of glistening torches
Too close to call it's death
Certain figures fastly fading
Honey pot for night's eclipse
Kissed to sleep on feather bed
Awakening a wholesome bliss
#love
#sex
#crush
130 reads
16 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 11:58pm
12th Apr 2024 11:58pm
Revelation
I saw a shooting star
before the sun had risen
I wished for us, near or far
to holdfast our intuition
I closed my eyes and saw
upon that inhaled moment
contentment of our hearts
a vulnerable exposure
and dreary days consoled
snuggled up under blankets
our hands together fold
into cashed-in rain checks
for that’s how love becomes
while the birds pluck the worm
and the bees dutifully buzz
I’ll be your only girl
before the sun had risen
I wished for us, near or far
to holdfast our intuition
I closed my eyes and saw
upon that inhaled moment
contentment of our hearts
a vulnerable exposure
and dreary days consoled
snuggled up under blankets
our hands together fold
into cashed-in rain checks
for that’s how love becomes
while the birds pluck the worm
and the bees dutifully buzz
I’ll be your only girl
#love
#wife
#romantic
#NaPoWriMo2024
#crush
74 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 4:23pm
10th Apr 2024 4:23pm
From the Heart
I started to write you several poems
Then deleted them all
I know I’m going to fail you
My natural inclination is Lust
Lust for your heart
Lust for your soul
Lust for sex
I feel failure
I don’t know how to be good
I’m drawn to you
Without editing
I’m not an actor
Then deleted them all
I know I’m going to fail you
My natural inclination is Lust
Lust for your heart
Lust for your soul
Lust for sex
I feel failure
I don’t know how to be good
I’m drawn to you
Without editing
I’m not an actor
#lust
#sex
#crush
#temptation
#seductive
172 reads
43 Comments
wolfatthedoor1966
Poem Published
31st Mar 2024 12:01pm
31st Mar 2024 12:01pm
i do not want to think to leave her
saw
a picture
of her,
addressing
this situation,
i do not
want to
think
to
leave her,
to push
her away
from
my mind,
to lose
that feeling
i carry,
i hold in
my pockets,
i cherish
that nearness,
i covet
that need,
the desires
she stirs up,
the emotional
thoughts
of her
travel
with me.
a picture
of her,
addressing
this situation,
i do not
want to
think
to
leave her,
to push
her away
from
my mind,
to lose
that feeling
i carry,
i hold in
my pockets,
i cherish
that nearness,
i covet
that need,
the desires
she stirs up,
the emotional
thoughts
of her
travel
with me.
#kindness
#beauty
#admiration
#crush
#obsession
92 reads
5 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
4th Apr 2023 7:57am
4th Apr 2023 7:57am
WORDS OF HONEST DESIRE
Words of honest desire
company did inspire -
you've lit that inner fire,
to rip off the attire,
make breaths loudly expire.
You eclipse loves prior:
want to take things higher?
company did inspire -
you've lit that inner fire,
to rip off the attire,
make breaths loudly expire.
You eclipse loves prior:
want to take things higher?
#love
#rhyming
#FallingInLove #crush
#FallingInLove #crush
278 reads
4 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
10th Jul 2022 2:50am
10th Jul 2022 2:50am
THE BURN
THE BURN
I am completely lost within my sweet lover's gaze
it sets me in spasms and I feel my body temperature raise.
I feel fevered and blistered as if in the noonday sun
I have nowhere for shelter to hide or try to run.
I do search for sometimes shadows or even sometimes shade
but I get lost in my confusion for I am in an utter daze.
Beneath these rentlessly, scorching hot tempered skies
I can and will not escape his sexy, lustful hazel eyes.
It seems to me that the harder and faster that I try ...
I am completely lost within my sweet lover's gaze
it sets me in spasms and I feel my body temperature raise.
I feel fevered and blistered as if in the noonday sun
I have nowhere for shelter to hide or try to run.
I do search for sometimes shadows or even sometimes shade
but I get lost in my confusion for I am in an utter daze.
Beneath these rentlessly, scorching hot tempered skies
I can and will not escape his sexy, lustful hazel eyes.
It seems to me that the harder and faster that I try ...
#love
#ForbiddenLove
#crush #obsession
#crush #obsession
512 reads
5 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 7:58am
6th Mar 2024 7:58am
Deep Down Underground
He tried to bury it deep down underground
But this thing, it still came up for air
He sought to cover it in his soul trying to get a hold
Of the emotion that grows within in despair
And yet the sensation leaves him in a state of pure elation
A conundrum of willpower, frailty, and control
The fixation rocks him to the very core of his foundations
Wondering why the sweet affliction is taking its toll
But this thing, it still came up for air
He sought to cover it in his soul trying to get a hold
Of the emotion that grows within in despair
And yet the sensation leaves him in a state of pure elation
A conundrum of willpower, frailty, and control
The fixation rocks him to the very core of his foundations
Wondering why the sweet affliction is taking its toll
#love
#crush
118 reads
6 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
28th May 2020 00:32am
28th May 2020 00:32am
Freyja
songs of longing
caresses of cold air
closed eyes savouring
scents of rhododendrons
blushes to warm cheeks
hear voices words smiles
echoes in cathedrals
of a dictionary of senses
pins stuck on skin pores
pain of recollections
ecstasy of waking dreams
grasping fading voices.
caresses of cold air
closed eyes savouring
scents of rhododendrons
blushes to warm cheeks
hear voices words smiles
echoes in cathedrals
of a dictionary of senses
pins stuck on skin pores
pain of recollections
ecstasy of waking dreams
grasping fading voices.
#crush
#emotions
515 reads
4 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
16th May 2020 3:42am
16th May 2020 3:42am
Brother's Keeper
Youngest of three brothers
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
#brother
#erotic
#alcohol
#dirty
#crush
584 reads
5 Comments
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