Poems About Clouds by Top Critiquers
#clouds
A Voyage to Hell
When my sun comes down
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
#astronomy
#clouds
#dreams
#hell
#rhyming
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Under the moon light
Here I am as I am in a place of pure calmness and tranquility, with the quiteness of the moon reflection, upon the peaceful waters, as they flow so peacefully up stream. For sure it's here and now I feel the tension leaving my mind, and heart and spiritual subconsciousness of my soul. As it eliminates to the point there's no hurt and no pain, only the deepness of being replaced by the sounds of the quiet waters, drifting with the winds of time. For even as I feel this great sensation, I begin to inhale and exhale out the negativity, from my subconscious of my deepest thoughts of healing,...
#clouds
#countryside
#nature
#river
#sky
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of the sun's pournami blooms ....& the mutagenic skies
fringy flaky layered ungathering disarrays
flown in black and white & all shades in between
are their mysteriously running zebraic spree
in vagrant motions of latent intentions
try vandalizing her ripened complexions
when their dubious lips of prolific limelight focus
are in the vociferous dubbing of 'no harming' innocence
why then does they cling with indelibly stained treacherous fissures
of 'desires & lies' smoking beneath their tricky rows of tumbling dominoes
in painted synthetic facades of a blackened...
flown in black and white & all shades in between
are their mysteriously running zebraic spree
in vagrant motions of latent intentions
try vandalizing her ripened complexions
when their dubious lips of prolific limelight focus
are in the vociferous dubbing of 'no harming' innocence
why then does they cling with indelibly stained treacherous fissures
of 'desires & lies' smoking beneath their tricky rows of tumbling dominoes
in painted synthetic facades of a blackened...
#sun
#moon
#clouds #lover
#clouds #lover
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The Happiness of clouds
displacing feelings altering themselves according to mood
happiness despite every dark factor
loving hope, talking to joy
meditate on blue the clouds scatter
then assemble according to our thoughts
with childlike faith and in wonderment
dreams are on my mind
reading I am transported there
wondering where it all began
being fair is subjective
there are gray areas
we can only decide according to what we've seen
and have experienced
and that is a different vision for all of us
serious on my observations
and...
happiness despite every dark factor
loving hope, talking to joy
meditate on blue the clouds scatter
then assemble according to our thoughts
with childlike faith and in wonderment
dreams are on my mind
reading I am transported there
wondering where it all began
being fair is subjective
there are gray areas
we can only decide according to what we've seen
and have experienced
and that is a different vision for all of us
serious on my observations
and...
#clouds
#nature
#sky
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sea that sleeps in the blue
the sea takes and the sea brings
the sea is a castle that crumbles into sand
the sea keeps every fleeting moment
and gives belly to the sailor who lies
the sea is never wrong
the sea never has plans anyway
the sea covers and disappears at the pier
the sea breaking on the beach comes in peace
sounds its deep waves like jazz
the sea is serene and knows the good it does for us
the sea is a castle that crumbles into sand
the sea keeps every fleeting moment
and gives belly to the sailor who lies
the sea is never wrong
the sea never has plans anyway
the sea covers and disappears at the pier
the sea breaking on the beach comes in peace
sounds its deep waves like jazz
the sea is serene and knows the good it does for us
#beach
#clouds
#nature
#sea
#sky
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Sights Aloft
Fourth I Marched today, for the freshest air,
into the blue, white, and gray intermix
blasting transpiration through my hair
as Zephyr got his atmospheric kicks
step by obstreperous step to the fore,
as a proud Zephyr won't blow in reverse
to mark some bootless barometric score
in the fluxion dynamic universe
where inspiration is the first to flow...
...in myriad crepuscularities...
perceived as a most ethereal show
in thermic air current disparities,
as uplifting to a vernal feather...
as the forthwith march of...
into the blue, white, and gray intermix
blasting transpiration through my hair
as Zephyr got his atmospheric kicks
step by obstreperous step to the fore,
as a proud Zephyr won't blow in reverse
to mark some bootless barometric score
in the fluxion dynamic universe
where inspiration is the first to flow...
...in myriad crepuscularities...
perceived as a most ethereal show
in thermic air current disparities,
as uplifting to a vernal feather...
as the forthwith march of...
#clouds
#sky
#wind
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Mundus Intus Me
Souls and black holes,
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
#clouds
#dreams
#moon
#SelfDiscovery
#sun
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The Bunny Cloud
promise of a thunderstorm
likely unkept
but the wind is blowing
the weather can be felt
living in Hawaii would drive me crazy
pleasant all the time
i recline in my zero gravity chair
partial-gravity more like it
i can still feel my body
i can still feel my mind
i want to dispose of both
work is too difficult
life's too expensive
love's too elusive
i should be planning my next block
creating weeks of lesson plans
planning a clever data wall display
innovating revolutionary behavior problem...
likely unkept
but the wind is blowing
the weather can be felt
living in Hawaii would drive me crazy
pleasant all the time
i recline in my zero gravity chair
partial-gravity more like it
i can still feel my body
i can still feel my mind
i want to dispose of both
work is too difficult
life's too expensive
love's too elusive
i should be planning my next block
creating weeks of lesson plans
planning a clever data wall display
innovating revolutionary behavior problem...
#anxiety
#clouds
#wisdom
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A Heaven of You
A Heaven of You
Toward -
Ever onward
Forward - Backward
Streams & beams,
Particle spirals -
Magnetosphere
Outside of day/night.
Of nothingness -
In revolutions,
Molecules satellite
Exosphere
Falling away into design.
Pieces of time & mind,
In art, as shedding skin,
Ions broken apart -
Ionosphere
Of dead flower covers
Violets, from the urn
Into a stream, ultraviolet
Mesopause freeze form
Thermosphere
To cover over...
Toward -
Ever onward
Forward - Backward
Streams & beams,
Particle spirals -
Magnetosphere
Outside of day/night.
Of nothingness -
In revolutions,
Molecules satellite
Exosphere
Falling away into design.
Pieces of time & mind,
In art, as shedding skin,
Ions broken apart -
Ionosphere
Of dead flower covers
Violets, from the urn
Into a stream, ultraviolet
Mesopause freeze form
Thermosphere
To cover over...
#beauty
#flowers
#sky
#clouds
#honesty
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she says, are you ok ?
most evenings we’re on the
sofa watching old black and white films, thinking oh, if only such was
life tends to be colourful,
garish and brash, but in my head, I
still see it as grey ..
sofa watching old black and white films, thinking oh, if only such was
life tends to be colourful,
garish and brash, but in my head, I
still see it as grey ..
#clouds
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Thoughts of Tranquility
Thoughts of Tranquility (Malcolm CS Sonnet)
Fields blur, rivers drown beneath a murmur—
slow tides, flowing, cracking soft like glass.
I seek no fame, nor glory’s fractured furor,
just roots that dig, where time is lost to pass.
Boughs bend—wild blooms caught in their brief sigh,
a world, too loud, churns distant, foreign, cold.
I lie between, where silence lets me die—
no praise, no claims, no marks of pride to hold.
And yet, the breeze shakes trembling apple trees,
their whispers soft, like stories never told.
I...
Fields blur, rivers drown beneath a murmur—
slow tides, flowing, cracking soft like glass.
I seek no fame, nor glory’s fractured furor,
just roots that dig, where time is lost to pass.
Boughs bend—wild blooms caught in their brief sigh,
a world, too loud, churns distant, foreign, cold.
I lie between, where silence lets me die—
no praise, no claims, no marks of pride to hold.
And yet, the breeze shakes trembling apple trees,
their whispers soft, like stories never told.
I...
#clouds
#flowers
#forest
#nature
#trees
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the clouds
the clouds
were busy
shape
shifting,
forgetting
how to fly,
their sense
of direction
was over,
their
languages
disappeared,
they opened
their mouths
and only
rain formed,
taking time
to fall
to
the ground,
even with
no intentions,
they weighted
the earth
with their
lost voices.
were busy
shape
shifting,
forgetting
how to fly,
their sense
of direction
was over,
their
languages
disappeared,
they opened
their mouths
and only
rain formed,
taking time
to fall
to
the ground,
even with
no intentions,
they weighted
the earth
with their
lost voices.
#clouds
#nature
#rain
#sky
#storm
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