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sea that sleeps in the blue
the sea takes and the sea brings
the sea is a castle that crumbles into sand
the sea keeps every fleeting moment
and gives belly to the sailor who lies
the sea is never wrong
the sea never has plans anyway
the sea covers and disappears at the pier
the sea breaking on the beach comes in peace
sounds its deep waves like jazz
the sea is serene and knows the good it does for us
the sea is a castle that crumbles into sand
the sea keeps every fleeting moment
and gives belly to the sailor who lies
the sea is never wrong
the sea never has plans anyway
the sea covers and disappears at the pier
the sea breaking on the beach comes in peace
sounds its deep waves like jazz
the sea is serene and knows the good it does for us
Published 2nd Oct 2024
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2nd Oct 2024 11:16am
What a relaxing and mellow piece PAR. Nicely said. The atmosphere in description is amazing. How about some Jazz Fusion. Maybe some Return to Forever or Mahivishnu Orchestra or Passport, playing deep in that sea you created.
2nd Oct 2024 2:17pm
Lets have some Mahavishnu Orchestra - John McLaughlin, Oscar Peterson and Nancy Wilson. All day long, please!
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