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A Heaven of You
A Heaven of You
Toward -
Ever onward
Forward - Backward
Streams & beams,
Particle spirals -
Magnetosphere
Outside of day/night.
Of nothingness -
In revolutions,
Molecules satellite
Exosphere
Falling away into design.
Pieces of time & mind,
In art, as shedding skin,
Ions broken apart -
Ionosphere
Of dead flower covers
Violets, from the urn
Into a stream, ultraviolet
Mesopause freeze form
Thermosphere
To cover over & over.
With archway heart
Seeking out a lover
Cold alone hover,
Mesosphere
Pain, free floating flying.
Of the brain, alleviating
Bloom in the warmth
Ultraviolet violets
Stratosphere
A bold cold proliferates.
Place to place,
From face to face -
Clouds shroud the space,
Troposphere
Mandated to be identified.
Something, unidentified,
Than nothing, sent to
Without a care other
Into the boundary layer
Bound delight to height,
Into the sky, from Earth
A name calling an eye, forth
A rose by any other name.
Form, set, setting, back drop,
Color amidst the chloroform
Saying, speaking, explosion -
Flower petal expansion,
Twisting stem, gracefully swaying,
Wild child wind blowing,
Green grass in clean sheen -
Published 27th Aug 2021
Author's Note
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27th Aug 2021 5:05pm
29th Aug 2021 1:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:54pm
27th Aug 2021 5:51pm
Ohhh swoon..... gorgeously written and immensely full of all that I have come to enjoy when reading your poetry..... how you make it ok for me to extend and stretch my own imagination... I absolutely adore your unique poetic voice ...
Thank you so much for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Thank you so much for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
29th Aug 2021 1:50pm
I am so very appreciative of these kind and wonderful words.
Blu, you are a tremendous human being and I am honored to have your energies infused into my psychic sphere.
Thank you my dear.
Blu, you are a tremendous human being and I am honored to have your energies infused into my psychic sphere.
Thank you my dear.
27th Aug 2021 8:21pm
dearest Cipher the beauty of this and your command of language is awe inspiring
it's not often that other poets will bring this level of emotion or admiration from me
I've met a few poets here who stir me someday I hope you meet them...
a lady named Shadoe comes to mind she has a great talent as well...
well in any case this poem is gorgeous...
it's not often that other poets will bring this level of emotion or admiration from me
I've met a few poets here who stir me someday I hope you meet them...
a lady named Shadoe comes to mind she has a great talent as well...
well in any case this poem is gorgeous...
29th Aug 2021 1:53pm
I very humbly and graciously receive this soul to soul contact.
I just close my eyes & send you vibrations of the universe, as channeled through the crystal structure of me, across the astral plane.
(I am going to look into this Poetess.)
Thank you Crimsin.
I just close my eyes & send you vibrations of the universe, as channeled through the crystal structure of me, across the astral plane.
(I am going to look into this Poetess.)
Thank you Crimsin.
28th Aug 2021 7:02am
The diverse use of words, baked on pure emotions and imagination
Is perfect..
Great ink
Is perfect..
Great ink
29th Aug 2021 1:55pm
28th Aug 2021 7:29am
29th Aug 2021 1:56pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
28th Aug 2021 10:11am
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29th Aug 2021 1:59pm
Your wondrous & marvelous comments always take the form of sacred scriptures, my dear friend.
You always stimulate my heart, mind, and spirit.
Thank you R.
You always stimulate my heart, mind, and spirit.
Thank you R.
28th Aug 2021 6:41pm
Your creativity is iridescent & captivating; love the flow of this stellar write, from top to bottom…🤩
29th Aug 2021 2:00pm
30th Aug 2021 4:07am
Hey Cipher…….what a clever ink…….luv the visuals and explanations…….enjoyed…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Aug 2021 3:20pm
Thank you so much Flowergirl.
I deeply appreciate your words.
... and the purple luv & hugs. :)))
I deeply appreciate your words.
... and the purple luv & hugs. :)))
