Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about cats seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A Female Cat Celebrating New Year
#dogs
#cats
#fate
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A Cool Pet Cat
It doesn't seem to matter that
my pet is such a strange wee cat
Instead of chasing birds and mice
he plays with cards and poker dice
He doesn't meow he doesn't purr
What he lacks is lots of fur
strangely too, he doesn't fret
at the very idea of getting wet
he loves to swim, he loves to dive
whilst under water he loves to jive
he's into music - hip hop and rap
he knows hot to bop, he knows how to tap
On Saturday nights in his red zoot suit
with his saxophone he's been known to toot
he can sing the blues all...
my pet is such a strange wee cat
Instead of chasing birds and mice
he plays with cards and poker dice
He doesn't meow he doesn't purr
What he lacks is lots of fur
strangely too, he doesn't fret
at the very idea of getting wet
he loves to swim, he loves to dive
whilst under water he loves to jive
he's into music - hip hop and rap
he knows hot to bop, he knows how to tap
On Saturday nights in his red zoot suit
with his saxophone he's been known to toot
he can sing the blues all...
#cats
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7 Comments
REFLECTION IN THE BACK OF A SPOON
Seeing you
from behind
while the cat
rhythmically
laps water
from the bowl
flick
after
dripping wet
flick
reminds me
of all the times
I've awoken
to the back
of your spoon
jiggling
flick
after
dripping wet
flick
from behind
while the cat
rhythmically
laps water
from the bowl
flick
after
dripping wet
flick
reminds me
of all the times
I've awoken
to the back
of your spoon
jiggling
flick
after
dripping wet
flick
#loneliness
#sex
#cats #water
#cats #water
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4 Comments
Haiku #4
It's good to catwalk
around your writing until
it comes off the page.
around your writing until
it comes off the page.
#haiku
#senryu
#LifeAsAWriter
#inspirational
#cats
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Tanks #24 ...Dark...
dark's alright
as long as I can
see the light
at the end of the tunnel...
meanwhile cat wants her tummy rubbed
as long as I can
see the light
at the end of the tunnel...
meanwhile cat wants her tummy rubbed
#anxiety
#dark
#cats
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Senryu #11
cat's giving me
that L0oK again...
awaiting second shoe
that L0oK again...
awaiting second shoe
#bipolar
#cats
#senryu
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Waiting for a Nod from the Cat
Three days have passed since
I last saw that hideous creature;
his fur as coarse as my sister’s hair,
his paws as sharp as daggers-
foreshadowing my downfall.
I reluctantly walk outside,
careful not to make a sound,
but there he is, glaring at me,
with his small body and dark beady eyes
that can rip right through my soul.
My whole body is frozen with fear.
Even my legs are unable to move,
for they know the horror this creature can bring.
He begins to move:
his four legs strengthening
as he moves...
I last saw that hideous creature;
his fur as coarse as my sister’s hair,
his paws as sharp as daggers-
foreshadowing my downfall.
I reluctantly walk outside,
careful not to make a sound,
but there he is, glaring at me,
with his small body and dark beady eyes
that can rip right through my soul.
My whole body is frozen with fear.
Even my legs are unable to move,
for they know the horror this creature can bring.
He begins to move:
his four legs strengthening
as he moves...
#childhood
#cats
#scary
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HARDCORE
People think they're punk
But I just saw our cat
Eat his own puke
Until it was all
Back where
It belonged
But I just saw our cat
Eat his own puke
Until it was all
Back where
It belonged
#cats
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Mews
My muse has taken a long break
Gone somewhere in the south of France
So it's a struggle to produce
Fine lines to mediocrity
The pen withers in my hand
And the laptop slams an angry lid
Fortunately this little cat
Curls up upon my lap
Purrs inspiration for some work
But it won't be any masterpiece
And if there's any message found
It's because this feline's still around.
Gone somewhere in the south of France
So it's a struggle to produce
Fine lines to mediocrity
The pen withers in my hand
And the laptop slams an angry lid
Fortunately this little cat
Curls up upon my lap
Purrs inspiration for some work
But it won't be any masterpiece
And if there's any message found
It's because this feline's still around.
#cats
#WritingPoetry
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Slinky Little Lover, Who Visits in the Night
Oh, we got us one o' those alright
She comes to us on furry feet
to leap with teeth and claws
upon...
any part
having the audacity... to move
even the
Least-Little-Bit...
including my honey's ding-a-ling-a-ling
and my naked toes, lickedy-split...
She comes to us on furry feet
to leap with teeth and claws
upon...
any part
having the audacity... to move
even the
Least-Little-Bit...
including my honey's ding-a-ling-a-ling
and my naked toes, lickedy-split...
#dreams
#cats
#nightmares
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Inspiration and the Power of the Written Word
I was sitting here
in my fat chair...
wondering...
What is it about cats...
... and paper?
They sit on it... sleep on it...
s-t-r-e-t-c-h on it...eat on it...
It speaks to the power of the
written word... as Puss is drawn...
to absorb...
...the latent energy...
that flows from the tip of my pen...
in my fat chair...
wondering...
What is it about cats...
... and paper?
They sit on it... sleep on it...
s-t-r-e-t-c-h on it...eat on it...
It speaks to the power of the
written word... as Puss is drawn...
to absorb...
...the latent energy...
that flows from the tip of my pen...
#cats
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords #philosophical
#PowerOfWords #philosophical
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Temptation and the Territorial Imperative.
The cat is in the window
watching porn on BIRDTV.
Her nose is pressed into the screen
she could no closer be...
The sparrows at the feeder
have her quivering with lust.
She has herself under control
but barely... only just...
The other day we went outside
Pearl lounged beside the bird bath.
The leafy shade Moringa made
concealed her from the foot path.
When 'nother cat came wand'ring by
'twere more than she could bear.
She puffed herself to twice her size
and...
watching porn on BIRDTV.
Her nose is pressed into the screen
she could no closer be...
The sparrows at the feeder
have her quivering with lust.
She has herself under control
but barely... only just...
The other day we went outside
Pearl lounged beside the bird bath.
The leafy shade Moringa made
concealed her from the foot path.
When 'nother cat came wand'ring by
'twere more than she could bear.
She puffed herself to twice her size
and...
#lust
#cats
#birds
#nature
#rhyming
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DU Poetry : Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique