Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about cats seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
13th Dec 2019 3:41pm
13th Dec 2019 3:41pm
Maxwell's tail of temptation
Maxwell's tail of temptation
is unprecedented…
and rather long…
It sticks to him like a shadow
with an inquiring mind
and a song…
It waves about like wafting smoke...
neath other cats' noses in hopes he can stoke a reaction...
Calling for action...
Wherever he goes... mayhem follows
a habit he just can't shake
little guy just wants to play...
all...
day…
long…
Insists on "helping" with every chore
from making the beds to sweeping the floors…
...
is unprecedented…
and rather long…
It sticks to him like a shadow
with an inquiring mind
and a song…
It waves about like wafting smoke...
neath other cats' noses in hopes he can stoke a reaction...
Calling for action...
Wherever he goes... mayhem follows
a habit he just can't shake
little guy just wants to play...
all...
day…
long…
Insists on "helping" with every chore
from making the beds to sweeping the floors…
...
#cats
#WritingPoetry
344 reads
8 Comments
David_Macleod
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14397816
Poem Published
19th Nov 2019 8:02pm
19th Nov 2019 8:02pm
Noodles the Kitten
I must admit I am smitten
as I write an ode to a kitten
this could not have been left unwritten
cute when playing or sittin
this ode is poignant and fittin
with the love bug, I've bee bitten
though she has ripped out my knitin
occasionally she's partial to spitin
and missing the tray that she shits in
I will gladly get Noodles to fit in
I will train her without quitin
from the note that I have written
It may become the battle of Britain
home insurance has been underwritten
it's maybe that I am a Briton
as a nation we...
as I write an ode to a kitten
this could not have been left unwritten
cute when playing or sittin
this ode is poignant and fittin
with the love bug, I've bee bitten
though she has ripped out my knitin
occasionally she's partial to spitin
and missing the tray that she shits in
I will gladly get Noodles to fit in
I will train her without quitin
from the note that I have written
It may become the battle of Britain
home insurance has been underwritten
it's maybe that I am a Briton
as a nation we...
#love
#cats
462 reads
8 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
12th Nov 2019 6:33pm
12th Nov 2019 6:33pm
Slow news day
The first to leave the room
were your cats,
followed by a stench
breaching the doorway,
snarling across my face,
the heat only made things worse.
I turned off the breakfast show
and placed a cushion over the scars,
leaving the remote in your grip,
just pressing the button
without touching flesh.
I didn't want to feel the cold.
Two lots of Saturday papers
missed their morning coffee
and completed crosswords.
Then on Wednesday
you were headline news.
'Blood on her shoes'
the pets had slept at...
were your cats,
followed by a stench
breaching the doorway,
snarling across my face,
the heat only made things worse.
I turned off the breakfast show
and placed a cushion over the scars,
leaving the remote in your grip,
just pressing the button
without touching flesh.
I didn't want to feel the cold.
Two lots of Saturday papers
missed their morning coffee
and completed crosswords.
Then on Wednesday
you were headline news.
'Blood on her shoes'
the pets had slept at...
#death
#cats
451 reads
10 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
11th Nov 2019 1:08am
11th Nov 2019 1:08am
Cat-it-ude
oh-my-goodness-gracious
that pussy-cat looks fine…
muscles ripple 'neath his skin
coat’s so sleek it shines…
he broadcasts uptown cat-it-tude
so clean he smells sublime…
he's full of romping energy
a whole lot more than I’m...
that pussy-cat looks fine…
muscles ripple 'neath his skin
coat’s so sleek it shines…
he broadcasts uptown cat-it-tude
so clean he smells sublime…
he's full of romping energy
a whole lot more than I’m...
#beauty
#cats
#nature
337 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
1st Nov 2019 2:14am
1st Nov 2019 2:14am
St. John Doe Does d'DADA
Dada dis, & dada dat.
DaDa dis dat dada.
dadadadadadadada
DaDa worthless.
Dada formless (dada'd'zen)
dada endless
Dada for the Dead
Dada for the Dead
dada for the Years
daDa for the tears
(dada for my dear girl gone)
dada don't do nothin'noway
DADA excruciates itself.
dada asphixiates no none
Dada is not war, dada is the antidote
Tis absurd to be or not be DADA
dada laughs wit d'GoodBook
Dada comes
Dada goes
Dada gone
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ...
DaDa dis dat dada.
dadadadadadadada
DaDa worthless.
Dada formless (dada'd'zen)
dada endless
Dada for the Dead
Dada for the Dead
dada for the Years
daDa for the tears
(dada for my dear girl gone)
dada don't do nothin'noway
DADA excruciates itself.
dada asphixiates no none
Dada is not war, dada is the antidote
Tis absurd to be or not be DADA
dada laughs wit d'GoodBook
Dada comes
Dada goes
Dada gone
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ...
#love
#dogs
#cats
#birds
#religion
438 reads
4 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
20th Oct 2019 4:46am
20th Oct 2019 4:46am
People belong...
People don't belong
to people…
People belong ...to cats...
to people…
People belong ...to cats...
#relationships
#cats
#LifeCycle
415 reads
10 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
13th Aug 2019 5:26am
13th Aug 2019 5:26am
The Literary Feline
Cats... devoted seekers after energy
that they are...
appreciate a good literary tome...or
a scientific journal…
And they simply adore a little art history...
every now and again
hoarding... all that accumulated ...
intellectual energy
until they explode... into feline hissy-fits
flinging themselves into mad
races about the house...
as if all the demons of hell
were hot on their heels.
No wonder the little dears
...sleep so much...
that they are...
appreciate a good literary tome...or
a scientific journal…
And they simply adore a little art history...
every now and again
hoarding... all that accumulated ...
intellectual energy
until they explode... into feline hissy-fits
flinging themselves into mad
races about the house...
as if all the demons of hell
were hot on their heels.
No wonder the little dears
...sleep so much...
#cats
#books
356 reads
5 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2019 10:48pm
22nd Jul 2019 10:48pm
I'm beat up but still going strong
Three dead messerscmits on the window Sill, six more on the bathroom floor
She's quite the huntress that one, princess Esther sitting contently with her daddy.
Hand reared from a day old couldn't ask for a better companion
She's quite the huntress that one, princess Esther sitting contently with her daddy.
Hand reared from a day old couldn't ask for a better companion
#cats
424 reads
6 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
15th Jul 2019 7:44pm
15th Jul 2019 7:44pm
Tanka #34 ...tell that...to the Cat
Everything I have ever heard
and everything I've read
says cats are strictly carnivores...
Tell that...to the cat...who's up on the kitchen counter
...eating the last two roasted carrots...
and everything I've read
says cats are strictly carnivores...
Tell that...to the cat...who's up on the kitchen counter
...eating the last two roasted carrots...
#science
#cats
#nature
389 reads
12 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
20th Jun 2019 10:21pm
20th Jun 2019 10:21pm
The Litter Box Brain
A kitty cat on her lap and a joint between
her fingers all she thinks about is the
past. Nothing forward could be as
captivating as what was. Inhaling just
to exhale. The temporary is always
more fascinating than the forever
the wondering leads to fantasies and
it's beautiful there and it feels good there, reality cuts to deep to be
in it at all times so she escapes whenever she can to the land of what
the fuck she wants, not whatever
the fuck this is.
her fingers all she thinks about is the
past. Nothing forward could be as
captivating as what was. Inhaling just
to exhale. The temporary is always
more fascinating than the forever
the wondering leads to fantasies and
it's beautiful there and it feels good there, reality cuts to deep to be
in it at all times so she escapes whenever she can to the land of what
the fuck she wants, not whatever
the fuck this is.
#love
#cats
#marijuana
485 reads
6 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
10th Jun 2019 6:45pm
10th Jun 2019 6:45pm
ADDITION BY SUBTRACTION
A manx is a cat with no tail
Some see this as a feline fail
But human offspring
Can sometimes be mean-
Reach to grab, but to no avail!
Some see this as a feline fail
But human offspring
Can sometimes be mean-
Reach to grab, but to no avail!
#children
#cats
#limerick
514 reads
2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
5th Jun 2019 5:41am
5th Jun 2019 5:41am
FELINAE DISH OF (A)STRAY THOUGHTS
Here Sweet Kitty Cat,
Papa Koo’s got a meat treat for you.
Your purr is honey on my eardrums, baby.
I know how much you loved
That whip cream in your dish—
I think for your dessert
I’ll cover my fingers
In butter rum-
Will that make you come
To me
And lick them
Like a good girl?
Or will you pretend that I’m
A deaf pigeon
And stalk me
With that bell
On your velvet collar
Clanging out a danger I can’t hear,
Licking your lips like a lover,
Dammit, take cover!
Papa Koo’s got a meat treat for you.
Your purr is honey on my eardrums, baby.
I know how much you loved
That whip cream in your dish—
I think for your dessert
I’ll cover my fingers
In butter rum-
Will that make you come
To me
And lick them
Like a good girl?
Or will you pretend that I’m
A deaf pigeon
And stalk me
With that bell
On your velvet collar
Clanging out a danger I can’t hear,
Licking your lips like a lover,
Dammit, take cover!
#cats
#food
#metaphor
610 reads
2 Comments
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