Poems About Cars Seeking Honest Critique
#cars
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
Galaxy 500
Hey lady, are you going my way?
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
#cars
#friendship
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
#universe
53 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 10:34am
9th Apr 2025 10:34am
Little Red Corvette
He shot that dude like it was nothing
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible pop music from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Little Red Corvette
Damn I miss Prince
I never seen anything like it in my life
He pulled up to the red light
Got out of his car
He walked over to the Corvette and fired three shots into the drivers face
He then calmly returned to his car
He had the music up really loud
Some horrible pop music from today
Pure shit!
He just wasted that fucker!
Anyway,
The light turned green and he took off
So did everybody else
Except for the dead guy in the Little Red Corvette
Damn I miss Prince
#cars
#fiction
#murder
#satirical
#ShortStory
57 reads
8 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 10:48am
14th Mar 2025 10:48am
Not N Your Library Series II (Do You Smell Somethin)
Did something crawl up in him and died?
That is what his family thought while traveling in that shit smelling ride,
“Could it be those White Castle sliders or that burrito from Taco Bell
That is giving his ass cheeks pure hell,
“The windows did not come down because they were broke
And being immune to his own shit all the rest can do was choke,
“The air conditioner in the raggedy motherfucka did not function
Causing his wife to have flashbacks of the other night when they were fuckin,
“The room had to be aired out...
That is what his family thought while traveling in that shit smelling ride,
“Could it be those White Castle sliders or that burrito from Taco Bell
That is giving his ass cheeks pure hell,
“The windows did not come down because they were broke
And being immune to his own shit all the rest can do was choke,
“The air conditioner in the raggedy motherfucka did not function
Causing his wife to have flashbacks of the other night when they were fuckin,
“The room had to be aired out...
#cars
#family
#travel
78 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
Jump My Bone
#cars
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
#rhyming
232 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 11:59am
9th Feb 2025 11:59am
Just around the corner
The car crash
The bodies inside making silent history
The girl
Her head smashed into the steering wheel
Her beautiful face
Her skull
Her forehead caved in and purple
The woman next to her
Her body
Her gentle eyes filled with glass
Her unborn child, twisted inside, neck broken, back broken, small mouth open, full of black congealed blood
The five year old boy in the back seat
Neck broken, legs wrapped around each other, broken several times
His little arms wrapped around himself as if he was freezing
Nothing moves
The...
The bodies inside making silent history
The girl
Her head smashed into the steering wheel
Her beautiful face
Her skull
Her forehead caved in and purple
The woman next to her
Her body
Her gentle eyes filled with glass
Her unborn child, twisted inside, neck broken, back broken, small mouth open, full of black congealed blood
The five year old boy in the back seat
Neck broken, legs wrapped around each other, broken several times
His little arms wrapped around himself as if he was freezing
Nothing moves
The...
#cars
#children
#death
#horror
#LifeStruggles
149 reads
20 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 12:15pm
11th Jan 2025 12:15pm
Replace your lover
People are like oil filters,
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
#cars
#lover
#MentalHealth
99 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 10:20am
3rd Dec 2024 10:20am
A sight I will never forget
A UPS truck ran into a telephone pole on the corner near my home
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
#cars
#childhood
#death
#horror
#memories
96 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 1:51pm
21st Nov 2024 1:51pm
Under My Ark
Buy an Ark
Transport just my family
Ark is big enough but you aren’t coming
Ark on Gravel, big wheels, better watch out
Ark just mowed down 7 little kids I couldn’t see
But I’m on the Ark I feel like a Viking King
Don’t pay attention to the lives I mowed down
Feel Real Big On a Viking Sled
My family is protected by my Ark
Don’t think about other people on the streets
My Ark is my Covenant but not to you
You are gravel under my Ark’s wheels
My family is...
Transport just my family
Ark is big enough but you aren’t coming
Ark on Gravel, big wheels, better watch out
Ark just mowed down 7 little kids I couldn’t see
But I’m on the Ark I feel like a Viking King
Don’t pay attention to the lives I mowed down
Feel Real Big On a Viking Sled
My family is protected by my Ark
Don’t think about other people on the streets
My Ark is my Covenant but not to you
You are gravel under my Ark’s wheels
My family is...
#anger
#cars
#death
#fear
#greed
90 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 4:26am
21st Nov 2024 4:26am
Disconnected
Disconnected
Disconnected but searching for something
You’re in the car electric driving home not a tesla
Hear the phone look down but its almost empty
Lift the console look for my plug i cant find it
In a car not made of combustion im searching
Find the cord the lifeline we all the sudden seem to need
Plug it in my cars wheels slow down im coasting
Seems technology isn’t all its made to be so i
Lift the handle release the latch but the doors lock
Screaming down the Autobahn...
Disconnected but searching for something
You’re in the car electric driving home not a tesla
Hear the phone look down but its almost empty
Lift the console look for my plug i cant find it
In a car not made of combustion im searching
Find the cord the lifeline we all the sudden seem to need
Plug it in my cars wheels slow down im coasting
Seems technology isn’t all its made to be so i
Lift the handle release the latch but the doors lock
Screaming down the Autobahn...
#cars
#environment
#technology
88 reads
2 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:04am
19th Nov 2024 7:04am
Killing Time
As fatal as a game of Russian Roulette
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#cars
142 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 11:19am
10th Nov 2024 11:19am
Road f**king Kills
A ride to salvation so rudely disrupted
I'm looking for revenge on the road
I just got laid off and I'm ready to blow away
The blood lust ready to go
I can’t make the light till this asshole takes flight
My stabbing hand is yearning to fight
To beat you to shit you slow fucking prick
Leave you bleeding and stranded to die
Road Fucking Kills
Splattered around
Road Fucking Kills
And watch you die
I rev up the shift, I’m right on your six
Move over pedestrian scum
Collateral damage is all that they are
I'm not...
I'm looking for revenge on the road
I just got laid off and I'm ready to blow away
The blood lust ready to go
I can’t make the light till this asshole takes flight
My stabbing hand is yearning to fight
To beat you to shit you slow fucking prick
Leave you bleeding and stranded to die
Road Fucking Kills
Splattered around
Road Fucking Kills
And watch you die
I rev up the shift, I’m right on your six
Move over pedestrian scum
Collateral damage is all that they are
I'm not...
#cars
#death
#horror
#MentalHealth
#violence
88 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 7:09pm
9th Nov 2024 7:09pm
Splattered Remains
All your guts spill out
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
#cars
#cats
#fiction
#horror
#violence
117 reads
8 Comments
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