Poems About Cars Seeking Honest Critique
#cars
A sight I will never forget
A UPS truck ran into a telephone pole on the corner near my home
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
#cars
#childhood
#death
#horror
#memories
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4 Comments
Under My Ark
Buy an Ark
Transport just my family
Ark is big enough but you aren’t coming
Ark on Gravel, big wheels, better watch out
Ark just mowed down 7 little kids I couldn’t see
But I’m on the Ark I feel like a Viking King
Don’t pay attention to the lives I mowed down
Feel Real Big On a Viking Sled
My family is protected by my Ark
Don’t think about other people on the streets
My Ark is my Covenant but not to you
You are gravel under my Ark’s wheels
My family is...
Transport just my family
Ark is big enough but you aren’t coming
Ark on Gravel, big wheels, better watch out
Ark just mowed down 7 little kids I couldn’t see
But I’m on the Ark I feel like a Viking King
Don’t pay attention to the lives I mowed down
Feel Real Big On a Viking Sled
My family is protected by my Ark
Don’t think about other people on the streets
My Ark is my Covenant but not to you
You are gravel under my Ark’s wheels
My family is...
#anger
#cars
#death
#fear
#greed
45 reads
3 Comments
Disconnected
Disconnected
Disconnected but searching for something
You’re in the car electric driving home not a tesla
Hear the phone look down but its almost empty
Lift the console look for my plug i cant find it
In a car not made of combustion im searching
Find the cord the lifeline we all the sudden seem to need
Plug it in my cars wheels slow down im coasting
Seems technology isn’t all its made to be so i
Lift the handle release the latch but the doors lock
Screaming down the Autobahn...
Disconnected but searching for something
You’re in the car electric driving home not a tesla
Hear the phone look down but its almost empty
Lift the console look for my plug i cant find it
In a car not made of combustion im searching
Find the cord the lifeline we all the sudden seem to need
Plug it in my cars wheels slow down im coasting
Seems technology isn’t all its made to be so i
Lift the handle release the latch but the doors lock
Screaming down the Autobahn...
#cars
#environment
#technology
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2 Comments
Killing Time
As fatal as a game of Russian Roulette
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#cars
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15 Comments
Road f**king Kills
A ride to salvation so rudely disrupted
I'm looking for revenge on the road
I just got laid off and I'm ready to blow away
The blood lust ready to go
I can’t make the light till this asshole takes flight
My stabbing hand is yearning to fight
To beat you to shit you slow fucking prick
Leave you bleeding and stranded to die
Road Fucking Kills
Splattered around
Road Fucking Kills
And watch you die
I rev up the shift, I’m right on your six
Move over pedestrian scum
Collateral damage is all that they are
I'm not...
I'm looking for revenge on the road
I just got laid off and I'm ready to blow away
The blood lust ready to go
I can’t make the light till this asshole takes flight
My stabbing hand is yearning to fight
To beat you to shit you slow fucking prick
Leave you bleeding and stranded to die
Road Fucking Kills
Splattered around
Road Fucking Kills
And watch you die
I rev up the shift, I’m right on your six
Move over pedestrian scum
Collateral damage is all that they are
I'm not...
#cars
#death
#horror
#MentalHealth
#violence
50 reads
6 Comments
Splattered Remains
All your guts spill out
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
#cars
#cats
#fiction
#horror
#violence
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8 Comments
Parking my boner in your garage
#cars
#dirty
#funny
#lust
#sex
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8 Comments
Lost Control
Tragic frontal collision
One moment without control
He also lost his life
The accident made a commotion
Rise the number of the dead
Tragic car accident
He crashed the hearse
One dead more
He crashed the hearse
Coffin was not far away
One moment without control
He also lost his life
The accident made a commotion
Rise the number of the dead
Tragic car accident
He crashed the hearse
One dead more
He crashed the hearse
Coffin was not far away
#cars
#death
#fate #TruthOfLife
#fate #TruthOfLife
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Thank God For Silicone
Beautiful safety devices
During a heavy car crash
At a busy intersection
They acted like an airbag
Thanks to her silicone breasts
Fake boobs for safety on board
Implants protected her organs
Fake boobs for safety on board
40DD was enhanced enough
Fake boobs for safety on board
Artificial frontal bumper system
Fake boobs for safety on board
During a heavy car crash
At a busy intersection
They acted like an airbag
Thanks to her silicone breasts
Fake boobs for safety on board
Implants protected her organs
Fake boobs for safety on board
40DD was enhanced enough
Fake boobs for safety on board
Artificial frontal bumper system
Fake boobs for safety on board
#cars
#satirical
#TruthOfLife #women
#TruthOfLife #women
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Car viewed eye Candy selected
Before there was a seat to sit in you were comfortable walking.
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
#beauty
#cars
#gratitude #patience
#gratitude #patience
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Friends let friends drive drunk
They were friends since childhood
They lived a few doors down from one another in a lower middle class neighborhood
They were inseparable
Once or twice they got into a fight
But by the next day they would make up
They went through grade school together
Middle school and High school
They graduated the same year
A year after graduation, the two boys attended a party
Around 1:30 am they were both leaving the party obliterated
They drove together in the same car
They lived about 20 minutes away from their homes
They were about 5 blocks...
They lived a few doors down from one another in a lower middle class neighborhood
They were inseparable
Once or twice they got into a fight
But by the next day they would make up
They went through grade school together
Middle school and High school
They graduated the same year
A year after graduation, the two boys attended a party
Around 1:30 am they were both leaving the party obliterated
They drove together in the same car
They lived about 20 minutes away from their homes
They were about 5 blocks...
#alcohol
#cars
#death
#friendship
#ignorance
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Hermetic Breakdown (collaboration with AfterSexDilemma)
Here I sit alone and broken
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
#cars
#disappointment
#loneliness
#philosophical
#religion
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