Poems About Cars by Top Critiquers
#cars
Killing Time
As fatal as a game of Russian Roulette
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
High speed velocity shot from a cannon
Behind the wheel of my prized Corvette
Humming along to the spirt of Rhiannon
Adrenaline junkie with a need for speed
Passing all other cars along the highway
Success in life happens when in the lead
Killing time with my small-block Chevrolet
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#cars
113 reads
15 Comments
A sight I will never forget
A UPS truck ran into a telephone pole on the corner near my home
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
I was 10
Skinny freaked out, wild eyed and full of shit
The driver's head went through the windshield
Exploded on the telephone pole
Never occurred to me
The beauty of that scene
Blood, brains and all that milk
Everything ran down to the gutter
I ran down the hill observing the greying milk snake
My parents on the other hand were quite annoyed
The package they were expecting was destroyed!
#cars
#childhood
#death
#horror
#memories
57 reads
4 Comments
Filling Station ( After Elizabeth Bishop )
Oil-ladened landscape
atop a filthy plot of concrete -
its native inhabitants
connoisseurs of grease;
their laborious toil rotates
lubricating worldly wheels
of cadillac sevilles and corvettes
You sought, found life beyond globular
molds of oil saturating cracks
across a dirty reality check;
Texas crude bubbling up, black gold --
except for the blue collar coveralls
stained with its blood
...
atop a filthy plot of concrete -
its native inhabitants
connoisseurs of grease;
their laborious toil rotates
lubricating worldly wheels
of cadillac sevilles and corvettes
You sought, found life beyond globular
molds of oil saturating cracks
across a dirty reality check;
Texas crude bubbling up, black gold --
except for the blue collar coveralls
stained with its blood
...
#identity
#beauty
#inspirational
#cars
#ElizabethBishop
1018 reads
10 Comments
Poor, Poor, MAGA...
#cars
#travel
#freedom
#responsibility
#ThrillSeeking
90 reads
3 Comments
DECADES OF INTERNALIZING THOUGHTS
Through our lives we will have to encounter situations that are just lessons learned from life for each encounter is a lesson of life, whether we learn the lessons or repeat it all over again like so many generations that have come and gone and been curse just passing it down from one set to another tribe of our lives bearly existencing to have life.
For when will it stop this changing who we are to just fit...
For when will it stop this changing who we are to just fit...
#technology
#money
#cars
#consumerism
#art
606 reads
3 Comments
Old Timers
Gonna admit it i'm
a car slut at heart
first class sucker
buick or desoto
a shelby cobra
jeep cherokee
these oldtimers
make me eager
V8's are beasts
great for sex &
crazy blow jobs
come bring your
chevrolet caprice
el camino/camaro
cadillac eldorado
dodge challenger
oldsmobile jetstar
a daimler jaguar
mercury cougar
plymouth valiant
hot rod or pontiac
and you can be sure
you'll get a wildcat ride
a car slut at heart
first class sucker
buick or desoto
a shelby cobra
jeep cherokee
these oldtimers
make me eager
V8's are beasts
great for sex &
crazy blow jobs
come bring your
chevrolet caprice
el camino/camaro
cadillac eldorado
dodge challenger
oldsmobile jetstar
a daimler jaguar
mercury cougar
plymouth valiant
hot rod or pontiac
and you can be sure
you'll get a wildcat ride
#cars
#memories
189 reads
28 Comments
Glove Compartment
I'll know everything I need to know
One look
Papers in order
No excess
What I would expect from you
So much beauty
Drips from your pores
Exquisite organization
Dark chocolate wrapper on back seat
Still human
One look
Papers in order
No excess
What I would expect from you
So much beauty
Drips from your pores
Exquisite organization
Dark chocolate wrapper on back seat
Still human
#cars
#TruthOfLife
#humankind #WritingPoetry
#humankind #WritingPoetry
187 reads
23 Comments
Hermetic Breakdown (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
Here I sit alone and broken
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
#cars
#disappointment
#loneliness
157 reads
15 Comments
Fast And Fabulous
Enjoying your virility for a roadside tease
As we flee, a moment in time just to be free
Just you and me
Retracting the top, music to soothe the mood, turned up
Giving you a taste from my premium oiled butter rum cup
Reverse, Neutral, and now driving back inside
Power stick shift for that ocean front drive
Place me on cruise control for you to enjoy your long stretch of road
Speeding up within the fast lane, passion to be free uncontrolled
An endorphin rush from what I’ve been told
Road is slick, narrow, and now...
As we flee, a moment in time just to be free
Just you and me
Retracting the top, music to soothe the mood, turned up
Giving you a taste from my premium oiled butter rum cup
Reverse, Neutral, and now driving back inside
Power stick shift for that ocean front drive
Place me on cruise control for you to enjoy your long stretch of road
Speeding up within the fast lane, passion to be free uncontrolled
An endorphin rush from what I’ve been told
Road is slick, narrow, and now...
#cars
#parody
#satirical #passion
#satirical #passion
844 reads
22 Comments
Getaway car
#cars
#erotic
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
218 reads
18 Comments
Doodah! Line Six
#Easter
#Halloween
#MothersDay #cars
#MothersDay #cars
305 reads
0 Comments
Ghost Drivers
You're freaking me out, Waymo.
I've never seen invisible.
But there you are,
driving with your invisible hands.
Drinking your invisible latte,
radio tuned to KBOO
Take me for a ride, Waymo.
Thrill me with your silence.
Let me stare out the window,
lost in my thoughts,
instead of having to answer
dumb questions about Christmas shopping.
I could like you a lot, Waymo,
once I get used to you.
I want to defend you against ignorant naysayers,
wringing their hands about safety.
I'll vouch for you.
You...
I've never seen invisible.
But there you are,
driving with your invisible hands.
Drinking your invisible latte,
radio tuned to KBOO
Take me for a ride, Waymo.
Thrill me with your silence.
Let me stare out the window,
lost in my thoughts,
instead of having to answer
dumb questions about Christmas shopping.
I could like you a lot, Waymo,
once I get used to you.
I want to defend you against ignorant naysayers,
wringing their hands about safety.
I'll vouch for you.
You...
#technology
#cars
#risk
173 reads
4 Comments
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