Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
GreenDayGirl
Kool Babe
Kool Babe
Poem Published
25th Feb 2023 3:46am
25th Feb 2023 3:46am
Remember that night, Lovely.
How can I forget
Your lips on my neck
Your hands on my hips
Whimpering cries that created tides
I need you to say it's alright
It's artificial
Partial
I'll take it all, though
You're amazing
You're crazy
You made me
Please baby
Take me to the night
When you tricked me to fall
But grab my arm and reveal all
I bet I'd still fall
Cause your eyes are like lightning
And your kisses heal all
...
Your lips on my neck
Your hands on my hips
Whimpering cries that created tides
I need you to say it's alright
It's artificial
Partial
I'll take it all, though
You're amazing
You're crazy
You made me
Please baby
Take me to the night
When you tricked me to fall
But grab my arm and reveal all
I bet I'd still fall
Cause your eyes are like lightning
And your kisses heal all
...
#love
#boyfriend
435 reads
1 Comment
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
16th Feb 2023 12:45pm
16th Feb 2023 12:45pm
Transit ship
I was too big for you
My legs just didn't fit in that bed
And we slept every day in it
I just wonder on the next small bed
I have no intention of cutting my arms
Small, small bed
Where I am just a host
A temporary relief
For both of us
And again
My dear destiny
Welcome
I got my arms open
Haven't I.
My legs just didn't fit in that bed
And we slept every day in it
I just wonder on the next small bed
I have no intention of cutting my arms
Small, small bed
Where I am just a host
A temporary relief
For both of us
And again
My dear destiny
Welcome
I got my arms open
Haven't I.
#boyfriend
#breakup
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0 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
16th Feb 2023 6:24am
16th Feb 2023 6:24am
letting go
Should I count the ways you made me cry?
They say God counts every tear as precious,
But that means he counted yours, too.
I guess that means I must forgive you.
How many evils have you seen and held close?
Things haunt you in your sleep.
I've heard you cry, and I've held you tight.
I whispered to you that you'd be alright.
I've heard shameful things about you
In the winds of small town whispers.
Fear nestles itself in my chest
When I remember the secrets you would confess.
I stand on guard for my family...
They say God counts every tear as precious,
But that means he counted yours, too.
I guess that means I must forgive you.
How many evils have you seen and held close?
Things haunt you in your sleep.
I've heard you cry, and I've held you tight.
I whispered to you that you'd be alright.
I've heard shameful things about you
In the winds of small town whispers.
Fear nestles itself in my chest
When I remember the secrets you would confess.
I stand on guard for my family...
#love
#boyfriend
#shame
#addiction
#morality
759 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
16th Feb 2023 5:16am
16th Feb 2023 5:16am
thank you
You stole me from the mouth of hell
And ran with the devil on our heels.
I was a church girl gone bad,
But my demons fought yours to the death.
Way down we went
To the bottom of our addictions
Unable to save each other and ourselves.
You slipped from my grasp
Falling fast like a shooting star
Hurdling to the earth.
I run free these days
And you are still captive.
And ran with the devil on our heels.
I was a church girl gone bad,
But my demons fought yours to the death.
Way down we went
To the bottom of our addictions
Unable to save each other and ourselves.
You slipped from my grasp
Falling fast like a shooting star
Hurdling to the earth.
I run free these days
And you are still captive.
#love
#boyfriend
#BestFriend
#drugs
#addiction
469 reads
1 Comment
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
15th Feb 2023 6:02am
15th Feb 2023 6:02am
Petty
Lately,
I have been wanting to find you
And throw something at your head
Because I can't stop seeing you
In my dreams.
What is it about you
That still haunts me
Even after almost a year
Of silence between us?
I have been wanting to find you
And throw something at your head
Because I can't stop seeing you
In my dreams.
What is it about you
That still haunts me
Even after almost a year
Of silence between us?
#love
#boyfriend
#dreams
#lover
#memories
391 reads
1 Comment
Art_ellie7
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 8:40am
2nd Feb 2023 8:40am
Dawn blushes
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
481 reads
6 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
24th Jan 2023 12:43pm
24th Jan 2023 12:43pm
Farewell
I guess it is time to move on now
It was brief
But I just can not make it take my belongings
They are all on the floor
It hurts to stay
It hurts to go
Then a whisper to myself
Maybe I am not there at all.
Somebody
Is stronger
Better than you
It hurts to stay
It hurts to go
Then a whisper to myself
Maybe I am not there at all.
I just can not say goodbye.
It was brief
But I just can not make it take my belongings
They are all on the floor
It hurts to stay
It hurts to go
Then a whisper to myself
Maybe I am not there at all.
Somebody
Is stronger
Better than you
It hurts to stay
It hurts to go
Then a whisper to myself
Maybe I am not there at all.
I just can not say goodbye.
#boyfriend
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0 Comments
Tina2020
Tina Delaney
Tina Delaney
Poem Published
7th Nov 2022 10:20pm
7th Nov 2022 10:20pm
Should I
She says she loves you, but she's wired to the moon
She wants a baby, but you think it's way too soon
She does have something, but it could be just lust
Her bedroom habits are all men's must
She is sweet, she is kind, but your parents won't care
She has deep cut wounds and her bright coloured hair
What should you do it's so hard to decide
You know that she care's but has something deep to hide
Her secrets are deep, and she cares not to share them
He once was her life, but he deeply betrayed her
A much younger model with such a nice figure ...
She wants a baby, but you think it's way too soon
She does have something, but it could be just lust
Her bedroom habits are all men's must
She is sweet, she is kind, but your parents won't care
She has deep cut wounds and her bright coloured hair
What should you do it's so hard to decide
You know that she care's but has something deep to hide
Her secrets are deep, and she cares not to share them
He once was her life, but he deeply betrayed her
A much younger model with such a nice figure ...
#love
#boyfriend
#men
#breakup
#lover
411 reads
1 Comment
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2022 2:02am
3rd Nov 2022 2:02am
Three Sizes to the Garden of Eden
Eden's garden was a land of innocence before the Fall of Man.
Likewise America's east coast when the European settlers arrived in the 1500s seemed Edenic, because it was untouched - pristine.
The original Eden was small, only a garden.
While America was a continent-wide Eden.
Finally there is you and your femininity.
Your body is a miniature Eden, the opposite of America's macrocosmic version.
With my serpentine organ uncorrupted, there's no chance it will try to deceive you.
But maybe by merely standing, its stateliness may make it a Tempter....
Likewise America's east coast when the European settlers arrived in the 1500s seemed Edenic, because it was untouched - pristine.
The original Eden was small, only a garden.
While America was a continent-wide Eden.
Finally there is you and your femininity.
Your body is a miniature Eden, the opposite of America's macrocosmic version.
With my serpentine organ uncorrupted, there's no chance it will try to deceive you.
But maybe by merely standing, its stateliness may make it a Tempter....
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships #forgiveness
#relationships #forgiveness
327 reads
0 Comments
Thepunkpoet
Poem Published
29th Oct 2022 5:24pm
29th Oct 2022 5:24pm
We are Paris
We are Paris"
You were the shooting star filling my sky
I stumbled upon you, making sparks fly
You blew me a flaming passionate kiss
Each breath you took I sukked your bliss
Coursing my veins was the numbing sorrow
You promised I would live in every tomorrow
Deeply guarded walls falling down in rubble
Strangling the beast & silencing our struggle
Venus would envy the paradise that we share
Step aside St Valentine, Paris France beware
We are the giants that make hearts skip beat
Aphrodite would...
You were the shooting star filling my sky
I stumbled upon you, making sparks fly
You blew me a flaming passionate kiss
Each breath you took I sukked your bliss
Coursing my veins was the numbing sorrow
You promised I would live in every tomorrow
Deeply guarded walls falling down in rubble
Strangling the beast & silencing our struggle
Venus would envy the paradise that we share
Step aside St Valentine, Paris France beware
We are the giants that make hearts skip beat
Aphrodite would...
#love
#boyfriend
#ILoveYou
#lover
#FallingInLove
549 reads
4 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
27th Sep 2022 9:00pm
27th Sep 2022 9:00pm
Wife... Not.
Whisper behind my back,
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
#boyfriend
#relationships
#marriage
#conflict
#funny
641 reads
61 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
27th Sep 2022 4:33pm
27th Sep 2022 4:33pm
Bitch I Need U
#dark
#boyfriend
#erotic
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
434 reads
2 Comments
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