Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 10:12pm
17th Jan 2025 10:12pm
Over and Over
the moment is fleeing itself,
scared of its own deflection
looking into the pond
out of the pond, siren song,
islets scattered with eyelets
shells borne of seasickness
a vessel emptied, clear glassy ides
marching towards a frail old secret
buried pleasure
of broken tongues
cooled flames of mild temper
sacrificial lamb risotto
spurned, scorned, and soured
as if you look past me, through me,
what do you see?
scared of its own deflection
looking into the pond
out of the pond, siren song,
islets scattered with eyelets
shells borne of seasickness
a vessel emptied, clear glassy ides
marching towards a frail old secret
buried pleasure
of broken tongues
cooled flames of mild temper
sacrificial lamb risotto
spurned, scorned, and soured
as if you look past me, through me,
what do you see?
#boyfriend
#lover
#mystery #SelfReflection
#mystery #SelfReflection
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
It can happen
When will this be over?
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#identity
#rhyming
#sex
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3 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 2:06am
14th Dec 2024 2:06am
Ringside
Tracy takes me to Ringside Steakhouse the day before my birthday
We get our entrees at 9:30 PM.
I've flown from Phoenix to Portland
Spent Thanksgiving with my sister
Then taken the train to Tacoma to visit old friends
By the time a bus gets me back to Portland, it's late and I'm not very hungry
I haven't seen Tracy in 14 years
and it's only the second time seeing him in almost twenty
He's not on social media, so I didn't know how to age him in my mind
I never thought of him as fat,
but he's lost something like 50 pounds ...
We get our entrees at 9:30 PM.
I've flown from Phoenix to Portland
Spent Thanksgiving with my sister
Then taken the train to Tacoma to visit old friends
By the time a bus gets me back to Portland, it's late and I'm not very hungry
I haven't seen Tracy in 14 years
and it's only the second time seeing him in almost twenty
He's not on social media, so I didn't know how to age him in my mind
I never thought of him as fat,
but he's lost something like 50 pounds ...
#aging
#boyfriend
#travel
127 reads
5 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:30pm
29th Nov 2024 8:30pm
Dirty little slut...
To press me against the wall... harshly...
To the point of pain... not caring.
To break the kiss... from my tender lips, bleeding.
To give myself to you... completely.
To melt in your strong arms... powerless.
To fall on the bed of sighs and screams... begging.
To vulgarity sounds in a non-stop rhythm... unintelligible, confused.
To where you take me and don't stop... oblivion.
To stretch the night from yesterday to tomorrow... madness.
To know that the day is hidden behind the groans... darkness.
To forget absolutely about conscience and...
To the point of pain... not caring.
To break the kiss... from my tender lips, bleeding.
To give myself to you... completely.
To melt in your strong arms... powerless.
To fall on the bed of sighs and screams... begging.
To vulgarity sounds in a non-stop rhythm... unintelligible, confused.
To where you take me and don't stop... oblivion.
To stretch the night from yesterday to tomorrow... madness.
To know that the day is hidden behind the groans... darkness.
To forget absolutely about conscience and...
#boyfriend
#lover
#lust #sex
#lust #sex
404 reads
34 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
You said
You said you like my bullying
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#love
#romantic
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cabcool
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
2024 November Poems >> moments to remember
No. 06
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
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oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 12:21pm
30th Oct 2024 12:21pm
The nature of order
The nature of order
Nature of order
Distorts the reality
Beauty of her lips
When I press upon her
Goddess of my thoughts
Want her to lay down with my heart
Seconds go by I don’t know why
God created the woman of my dreams
Whenever I’m around her I can’t concentrate
I’m distracted by her beautiful being
I put my lunch in the printer
I can’t stop thinking about her
Hope that night will calm
The storm of love I feel for you
I’m clocking out watching her
Walk away...
Nature of order
Distorts the reality
Beauty of her lips
When I press upon her
Goddess of my thoughts
Want her to lay down with my heart
Seconds go by I don’t know why
God created the woman of my dreams
Whenever I’m around her I can’t concentrate
I’m distracted by her beautiful being
I put my lunch in the printer
I can’t stop thinking about her
Hope that night will calm
The storm of love I feel for you
I’m clocking out watching her
Walk away...
#boyfriend
#love
#obsession #romantic
#obsession #romantic
126 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
There is No Floor Here
I want to be possessive of you.
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#LookingForLove
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oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
I’m in Love Man
I’m in love man
It feels better than being a god
I’m in love man
Watch out for the potholes in your life
But I’m in love man
Yes I’m in love man
Can’t think about explaining anymore of it
But I’m in love man
Silence sails through my brain
I can’t explain but
I’m in love man
If you don’t feel it I can’t explain it to you but
I’m in love man
You’ll know it when it hits you between the heart
It might hit a little higher like a head shot
But you know when it’s real it...
It feels better than being a god
I’m in love man
Watch out for the potholes in your life
But I’m in love man
Yes I’m in love man
Can’t think about explaining anymore of it
But I’m in love man
Silence sails through my brain
I can’t explain but
I’m in love man
If you don’t feel it I can’t explain it to you but
I’m in love man
You’ll know it when it hits you between the heart
It might hit a little higher like a head shot
But you know when it’s real it...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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Fallen_Angel_194
Angel.
Angel.
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 1:56am
8th Oct 2024 1:56am
Eighteen
He kissed me in the rain a few months ago, and I swear to god, in that moment, I fell in love with him so much, in such a way that it took my breath away.
When he makes love to me, he is slow with his movements; as if i'd melt away if he didn't. When he is kissing his way down my stomach, he makes sure to comment on how beautiful i am, no matter where we are; he always tells me i'm beautiful, he says it so much, and so often that sometimes I think he is trying to instill the love he has for me, into the caverns of my lungs, so that hopefully i'll believe it, too.
He told me he...
When he makes love to me, he is slow with his movements; as if i'd melt away if he didn't. When he is kissing his way down my stomach, he makes sure to comment on how beautiful i am, no matter where we are; he always tells me i'm beautiful, he says it so much, and so often that sometimes I think he is trying to instill the love he has for me, into the caverns of my lungs, so that hopefully i'll believe it, too.
He told me he...
#boyfriend
#love
107 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 11:04am
17th Sep 2024 11:04am
She likes her floors clean and her boyfriend dead
Martha Fokker of Lincoln, Nebraska greased the floor of her kitchen in an attempt to kill her one-legged boyfriend in 1993. She slipped on the floor and knocked herself unconscious instead. Police found more grease near the top of the stairs and by the bathroom door. The boyfriend, Lou Briccant, insisted that Martha was doing a little housework. Six months later, Martha fell backwards killing herself on a flight of stairs in the basement. She was carrying up that same bucket of grease that she tried using on her boyfriend to kill him. Was she going to clean the floors or attempt to kill him...
#boyfriend
#fiction
#mystery #tragedy
#mystery #tragedy
120 reads
7 Comments
CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 7:06pm
1st Sep 2024 7:06pm
Easy
Like riding a bike
Like slipping on a pair of flip flops
Like making a cheese sandwich
Like wrapping up in a warm blanket
Like laying on a comfy bed
Like taking a drink of water
Like putting on a glove
It would be so easy
All the parts are already there
The firm foundation has already been laid
There is always work to do
But it would be so easy
Like slipping on a pair of flip flops
Like making a cheese sandwich
Like wrapping up in a warm blanket
Like laying on a comfy bed
Like taking a drink of water
Like putting on a glove
It would be so easy
All the parts are already there
The firm foundation has already been laid
There is always work to do
But it would be so easy
#boyfriend
#dating
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
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