Poems for and About Boyfriends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about boyfriends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Magic Of Your Eyes
One heart
One life
Two eyes
As if
By magic
I'm surprised
At what your
Eyes can do
As they're
Gazing
Into mine
One life
Two eyes
As if
By magic
I'm surprised
At what your
Eyes can do
As they're
Gazing
Into mine
#boyfriend
#magic
581 reads
3 Comments
misogyny
you crushed the tiny bones
of my self confidence
within your piss on you cunt pride
& smeared what was left of me
on the walls of a bathroom stall
after we fucked like animals
as bruises bloomed on my self esteem
with knowledge it would be the last time
used like a trash receptacle
for your hate
i took every last ounce of it
all the semen spewed rage
you force fed me
i choked on...
of my self confidence
within your piss on you cunt pride
& smeared what was left of me
on the walls of a bathroom stall
after we fucked like animals
as bruises bloomed on my self esteem
with knowledge it would be the last time
used like a trash receptacle
for your hate
i took every last ounce of it
all the semen spewed rage
you force fed me
i choked on...
#anxiety
#love
#dark
#boyfriend
#lover
907 reads
40 Comments
Wife... Not.
Whisper behind my back,
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
#boyfriend
#relationships
#marriage
#conflict
#funny
517 reads
61 Comments
the shortest love story ever written
they held
hands
watched the
sun go
down
and they were
very, very
happy
hands
watched the
sun go
down
and they were
very, very
happy
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#romantic
#honesty
#gratitude
519 reads
11 Comments
Shiny fur
I like you
I like those black eyes as a child
With a will
And thirst for life
That beautiful
Elegant
Silhouette
As you wander
Around the house
Like a full blossomed crow
With beautiful luxurious
And shining cloth
Hopping here and there
As you leave glamour tissue behind.
I like those black eyes as a child
With a will
And thirst for life
That beautiful
Elegant
Silhouette
As you wander
Around the house
Like a full blossomed crow
With beautiful luxurious
And shining cloth
Hopping here and there
As you leave glamour tissue behind.
#boyfriend
187 reads
10 Comments
In love with a Working Girl 4 of 4
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#passion
448 reads
2 Comments
When a Bitch Finally Pull the Trigger
When a bitch has a gun pointed at your jaw
At that very moment her ass ain’t thinking about the law,
“She’s past emotions and on that level of being in her feeling
Her only mission is your trifling ass not living,
“Memories of the time when you was down on your luck
Being there by your side when no one gave a flying fuck,
“Not you’re family or so-called as friends
I guess you forgot-she has always been there at the end,
“Doing shit for you when you were unable
Feeding your ass with food from her kids own table,
“Inviting you to her...
At that very moment her ass ain’t thinking about the law,
“She’s past emotions and on that level of being in her feeling
Her only mission is your trifling ass not living,
“Memories of the time when you was down on your luck
Being there by your side when no one gave a flying fuck,
“Not you’re family or so-called as friends
I guess you forgot-she has always been there at the end,
“Doing shit for you when you were unable
Feeding your ass with food from her kids own table,
“Inviting you to her...
#love
#boyfriend
#heartbroken #disappointment
#heartbroken #disappointment
959 reads
15 Comments
Scented by shampoo
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
#love
#lust
#boyfriend
#passion
#Romanticism
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0 Comments
nourishment
his thoughtful love
he feeds my soul
when I raised hands i touched the heaven.!!
he feeds my soul
when I raised hands i touched the heaven.!!
#love
#boyfriend
217 reads
16 Comments
Missing Poet
One day I noticed you were gone
Then two and three
Days drifted by, no long goodbye
New poems failed to flow from your pen
The hole became whole when your verse sang in silence
How I yearn for your words
For your eyes to ache to read my poetry
Now I wonder if my rhyme means anything
I become submerged in concerns
Perhaps you are ill, or worse, sick of me
Am I why you have not returned?
Did I offend or frighten you?
Was my meter too quick or loud
As my heartbeat reached out to yours
All my worst fears are...
Then two and three
Days drifted by, no long goodbye
New poems failed to flow from your pen
The hole became whole when your verse sang in silence
How I yearn for your words
For your eyes to ache to read my poetry
Now I wonder if my rhyme means anything
I become submerged in concerns
Perhaps you are ill, or worse, sick of me
Am I why you have not returned?
Did I offend or frighten you?
Was my meter too quick or loud
As my heartbeat reached out to yours
All my worst fears are...
#love
#husband
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#lover
955 reads
26 Comments
BRIDGES TO CROSS
From moments of time with each other as one, there will be situations that will test our love bond and patiences along, with our strength and compassion with unconditional support of understanding of honor and respect. That will bring us struggles and maybe destroy the very fabric of the love, that we built from our own blood sweat and tears with the process of the hurt and pain. That we will have to face head on with life's trials and tribulations, that will become sometimes to heavy upon our souls and hearts and minds, penetrating through the very systematic factions of our true existences...
#wife
#husband
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
663 reads
2 Comments
Bad Choice
You were toxic and you were dragging
Me down with you. In one instant
I went from good times to you snagging
And breaking my heart. You were distant
In order to remain cold and to not get
Yourself hurt, but that only ended up
Hurting me too. You were a cigarette,
And I needed you. I was an empty cup
After you poured me down the drain.
I could never hate anybody more
Than you as you left me in the rain
And I will not be at your front door.
Me down with you. In one instant
I went from good times to you snagging
And breaking my heart. You were distant
In order to remain cold and to not get
Yourself hurt, but that only ended up
Hurting me too. You were a cigarette,
And I needed you. I was an empty cup
After you poured me down the drain.
I could never hate anybody more
Than you as you left me in the rain
And I will not be at your front door.
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#heartbroken
#breakup
567 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Boyfriends by Top Critiquers