Bisexual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#bisexual
bisexual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Face Sitting
You want me to sit on your face
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
#BDSM
#bisexual
#erotic
#sex
#temptation
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23 Comments
Christmas Night (Oooo)
Hands placed on flesh
Ignites the senses
Excites the mind
Invites advances
Delights devine
Why wait for a mistletoe
I’m ready for you, you know
If I placed them head-to-toe
Will you place those lips
Right here in the glow
No need for a drink
Even though it would be nice
To taste the sweetness of you
With a heady taste of spice
Enough of this tenderness
That is a part that you all have seen
It’s time for you to undress
I want what is in between
A yule log
That is thick and...
Ignites the senses
Excites the mind
Invites advances
Delights devine
Why wait for a mistletoe
I’m ready for you, you know
If I placed them head-to-toe
Will you place those lips
Right here in the glow
No need for a drink
Even though it would be nice
To taste the sweetness of you
With a heady taste of spice
Enough of this tenderness
That is a part that you all have seen
It’s time for you to undress
I want what is in between
A yule log
That is thick and...
#bisexual
#dirty
#lust
#passion
#threesome
333 reads
21 Comments
Baby .....please
#bisexual
#lust
#passion
#sex
#sexy
286 reads
0 Comments
In the Chill of the Himalayan Night
#bisexual
#erotic
#lust
#orgasm
#sensual
230 reads
3 Comments
First try
#bisexual
#erotic
#lust
#sensual
#sex
319 reads
0 Comments
Rose
Your beauty is like The Rose
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal,...
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal,...
#BDSM
#bisexual
#erotic
#lust
#passion
148 reads
9 Comments
hey babe
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
#bisexual
#crush
#lesbian #LGBT
#lesbian #LGBT
318 reads
6 Comments
Next to me
My inner tears are leaking out
I‘m screaming
Silently
Respecting your boundaries
Still in doubt
Your smell is hunting me
Please get me out
Scream aloud
If I‘m allowed
This is torchery, honestly
Your sitting next to me
Once again
Silently
I‘m screaming
Silently
Respecting your boundaries
Still in doubt
Your smell is hunting me
Please get me out
Scream aloud
If I‘m allowed
This is torchery, honestly
Your sitting next to me
Once again
Silently
#friendship
#hurt
#love
#rejection
#bisexual
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1 Comment
Girls
I never though I'm into girls
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
#bisexual
#hurt
#love
#music
#rejection
133 reads
1 Comment
my c**t has a date with your face
#bisexual
#erotic
#lesbian #sex
#lesbian #sex
513 reads
4 Comments
All night last night. - With EveAteRedApples
#bisexual
#collaboration
#erotic
#lesbian
#lust
470 reads
11 Comments
All night last night - with Betty
#erotic
#passion
#bisexual
#collaboration
#lesbian
284 reads
12 Comments
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