Poems About Apathy by Top Critiquers
#apathy
Poems about apathy by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
12th Oct 2021 7:57pm
12th Oct 2021 7:57pm
Precarious.
It rolls in
like the tide
washing over
caressing pain
perfectly
drowning out
isolating
prayed for relief
in cool
fluidity
silent cooing,
relentless
in
terrifying
temptation
like the tide
washing over
caressing pain
perfectly
drowning out
isolating
prayed for relief
in cool
fluidity
silent cooing,
relentless
in
terrifying
temptation
#anxiety
#depression
#suicide
#MentalHealth
#apathy
801 reads
25 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
26th Jun 2022 11:00pm
26th Jun 2022 11:00pm
Worshiping in red lights...
In a public harem with the priestesses of voluptuousness.
And some old ones as well, which soul is darker I wonder.
These are for those who need daily passion at any cost.
Not a distant dream, real female beauty. Innocence lost.
This field is euphonious. And so visually appealing.
A playground for your depravity, open 24 hours a day.
"50 euro suck and f*ck" so cold and transactional.
It just seems lifeless, and yet somehow so full of life.
Eager mouths, eager bodies, red lights all day and night.
And some old ones as well, which soul is darker I wonder.
These are for those who need daily passion at any cost.
Not a distant dream, real female beauty. Innocence lost.
This field is euphonious. And so visually appealing.
A playground for your depravity, open 24 hours a day.
"50 euro suck and f*ck" so cold and transactional.
It just seems lifeless, and yet somehow so full of life.
Eager mouths, eager bodies, red lights all day and night.
#sex
#abuse
#LifeStruggles
#emptiness
#apathy
310 reads
42 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Nov 2021 9:56pm
18th Nov 2021 9:56pm
I swore off writing sex poems for about 8 hours and then promptly wrote some more .....
Hey if it's not erotic
Then I'm psychotic
Looking for narcotics
So be my muse
Try to amuse
If not
I'll take a snooze
I hate rhyme
You have nice tits
Take off your clothes
Then I'm psychotic
Looking for narcotics
So be my muse
Try to amuse
If not
I'll take a snooze
I hate rhyme
You have nice tits
Take off your clothes
#SelfHarm
#bipolar
#insomnia
#addiction
#apathy
472 reads
18 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
5th Jan 2022 9:46am
5th Jan 2022 9:46am
Recycled
Regurgitated drivel not so cleverly disguised in rearranged formats, different words-
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
#WritingPoetry
#apathy
#boredom
514 reads
38 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2018 3:08am
22nd Sep 2018 3:08am
Remembering The Sky
ER CRITICAL CARE TRAUMA UNIT A
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
11:34 am
09-21-18
Chaos of deafening screams
Reality has fled, left with only daydreams
Here I stand in mental confusion
Tears of disillusion
God help me please
Souls dropping today to their knees
Anyone have a tissue
Blood, guts, no glory, no wishes
As a nurse, is my existence mended into someone else’s pain
Last breath, last rites, never to feel or see the rain
God, I look to you each and every day
People have love, faith, yet, for the...
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
11:34 am
09-21-18
Chaos of deafening screams
Reality has fled, left with only daydreams
Here I stand in mental confusion
Tears of disillusion
God help me please
Souls dropping today to their knees
Anyone have a tissue
Blood, guts, no glory, no wishes
As a nurse, is my existence mended into someone else’s pain
Last breath, last rites, never to feel or see the rain
God, I look to you each and every day
People have love, faith, yet, for the...
#sadness
#despair
#emptiness #apathy
#emptiness #apathy
640 reads
5 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 10:04pm
28th Sep 2022 10:04pm
Beating Up Dead Horses
So you want to beat this dead horse till you’re all hoarse?
Go ahead and be my guest
I thought this case was closed but I guess your forgot so…
Get it off your chest
again
and
again
I mean it’s exhausting watching you go around in circles
Let alone the isolation, it’s becoming quite the predicament
You’re slowly putting yourself in loneliness unknowingly
And when you find all the emptiness it’ll be your detriment
Perhaps you’re not ready to let go of the hate and hurt
It’s as if it...
Go ahead and be my guest
I thought this case was closed but I guess your forgot so…
Get it off your chest
again
and
again
I mean it’s exhausting watching you go around in circles
Let alone the isolation, it’s becoming quite the predicament
You’re slowly putting yourself in loneliness unknowingly
And when you find all the emptiness it’ll be your detriment
Perhaps you’re not ready to let go of the hate and hurt
It’s as if it...
#sadness
#hope
#emptiness #apathy
#emptiness #apathy
53 reads
1 Comment
Sandals
Poem Published
8th Jul 2022 5:03pm
8th Jul 2022 5:03pm
U Tied Up
#love
#depression
#dark
#emptiness
#apathy
82 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 11:59pm
29th Dec 2021 11:59pm
shiny
shiny shine, in the gloom I am glowing
in the depths I feel deeply
I spin in the energies so I get it
my anger is contagious I recoil when it hits me straight up
sinister need feeds its face off the hurt
I sequester my rage
it needs time in quarantine genuflecting
I've been here with you before, I feel
so I spill my guts like we're family
I can't be anyone but who I am
I can'r hack it as an actor
and really who would I be fooling?
no one, not even me
I escalate the violence inside me
whispering...
in the depths I feel deeply
I spin in the energies so I get it
my anger is contagious I recoil when it hits me straight up
sinister need feeds its face off the hurt
I sequester my rage
it needs time in quarantine genuflecting
I've been here with you before, I feel
so I spill my guts like we're family
I can't be anyone but who I am
I can'r hack it as an actor
and really who would I be fooling?
no one, not even me
I escalate the violence inside me
whispering...
#sadness
#dark
#apathy
285 reads
6 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Sep 2022 1:05am
21st Sep 2022 1:05am
Crime novels
That is all I read....for enjoyment
For self-deep-search
Into the abyss of my messed-up being.
I really do not care for mind-boggling twists
And the oftentimes convoluted élucubrations
Of the oh so knowledgeable literature critics
Who will analyze texts to death.
I like to read for pleasure, not pain....
Not even Crime and Punishment
And yet, sometimes I pick up a crime novel
And glance at the comments of praise on the back cover.
Sometimes. But rarely. For they are, of course, selling points.
They can one-sided of course
And...
For self-deep-search
Into the abyss of my messed-up being.
I really do not care for mind-boggling twists
And the oftentimes convoluted élucubrations
Of the oh so knowledgeable literature critics
Who will analyze texts to death.
I like to read for pleasure, not pain....
Not even Crime and Punishment
And yet, sometimes I pick up a crime novel
And glance at the comments of praise on the back cover.
Sometimes. But rarely. For they are, of course, selling points.
They can one-sided of course
And...
#frustration
#disappointment
#apathy
49 reads
6 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
10th Aug 2021 11:49am
10th Aug 2021 11:49am
Melting Clocks
Stone skips, in – Ducks & Drakes.
Air displaced – Levity, light hearted carelessness…
(No matter the sky.)
Like
Pink balloons -
into
Sky blue balloons…
into
The blue-blue sky,
rising in calculations of levitations,
like
a dream of innocence
lost...
Lost to the ponderous pondering
of
mechanical
existence.
Rising ever higher…
Higher
even
than we could ever
aspire.
The world was lost
like a war.
And the exacted cost
was fire -
that did aspire, ...
Air displaced – Levity, light hearted carelessness…
(No matter the sky.)
Like
Pink balloons -
into
Sky blue balloons…
into
The blue-blue sky,
rising in calculations of levitations,
like
a dream of innocence
lost...
Lost to the ponderous pondering
of
mechanical
existence.
Rising ever higher…
Higher
even
than we could ever
aspire.
The world was lost
like a war.
And the exacted cost
was fire -
that did aspire, ...
#sadness
#nature
#emptiness
#apathy
#fear
309 reads
6 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
30th Sep 2022 6:37am
30th Sep 2022 6:37am
Tra-Dish-In-All-Show.
Flex
Flex
Flex.
Flex the water, sprayed in its eyes.
Predict,
Damp
Damp
Damp.
Predict,tra-dish-in-all show.
So slow.
Like-"Wish was Here-Well missed,"- Amy Winehouse.
Change, for some, will trickle,
Sewer its home.
What was,now diversified,
2 highlight growth.
Like-"Wish was Here-Well missed,"-Amy-"One of A Kind," Winehouse.
©Wired6. 28/9/2022.
Flex
Flex.
Flex the water, sprayed in its eyes.
Predict,
Damp
Damp
Damp.
Predict,tra-dish-in-all show.
So slow.
Like-"Wish was Here-Well missed,"- Amy Winehouse.
Change, for some, will trickle,
Sewer its home.
What was,now diversified,
2 highlight growth.
Like-"Wish was Here-Well missed,"-Amy-"One of A Kind," Winehouse.
©Wired6. 28/9/2022.
#loneliness
#courage
#forgiveness
#disappointment
#apathy
17 reads
0 Comments
APissPoorShaman
Ryszard
Ryszard
Poem Published
9th May 2022 4:59pm
9th May 2022 4:59pm
The war for our souls
be this
do that
you
are not you
until
you do
what we say
how dare you
think
for yourself
join the herd
act
like every one else
recite the rosery
or
preach Alinsky
you
don't
belong
and never will
only existing
within the cause
our cause
we are hypnotized
by CNN
coerced
by Fox
LEAVE MY MIND ALONE
I hold
my own morality
I am sick
of this war for my soul
that is tearing me in two
I AM ME
and quite frankly
I just don't...
do that
you
are not you
until
you do
what we say
how dare you
think
for yourself
join the herd
act
like every one else
recite the rosery
or
preach Alinsky
you
don't
belong
and never will
only existing
within the cause
our cause
we are hypnotized
by CNN
coerced
by Fox
LEAVE MY MIND ALONE
I hold
my own morality
I am sick
of this war for my soul
that is tearing me in two
I AM ME
and quite frankly
I just don't...
#anger
#lies
#apathy
#manipulation
#deception
169 reads
1 Comment
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